Proud and Defiant

It turns out that I have always liked to say: On what day of the month will it be completed...

I am so embarrassed that I have cancer. I am worthy of building a castle.

*-*Don't say that to the people downstairs. The author will slowly improve, don't you? Come on, author, I believe you will get better and better as you write...!

I read this with patience. The first chapter gave the reader a good feeling, but then I felt that the article was completely messed up. I couldn't tell whether you were writing a fantasy or a modern novel! The article was labeled as gender-swapping, but in Mo Yan's opinion, it didn't fit in at all! The content of the article has no outstanding points at all. It does not mean that your writing is bland, but it simply cannot arouse people's interest in reading it! ! !

What are you writing now? Messy

The author's writing style is jerky and his thoughts are chaotic. You can tell at a glance that he is a newbie. The characters and plots are unremarkable and the subject matter is too sensational. You wrote 21 chapters and what else did you write besides mentioning dreams and strange tables? This only shows that the author's ability to control language is too weak. There are very few excellent online works nowadays, but what about you? I still hope you can add more nutrients before posting, or simply abandon the article, fearing it will stain people's eyes and waste time, why bother?

What would you think if the article were changed to a pure dialogue format?

Author, please update! T_T

The article looks like it, but the copywriting doesn't look like it, so I'd like to ask the author if the final ending is NP?