Reborn: Mu Qing's Song

I actually wrote it down. . But too thin. . I'll wait until I gain some weight. . .

It was updated secretly. . . I thought it was over. But why do I feel that there is still a little bit of magic missing. . . This chapter is obviously unfinished? !

It seems that giving two points in one chapter will be regarded as a score increase, so I won't give any points on this. There is so much to say. . I see that there are no long comments on this article, so I won't write it in the reply~~ If you can make up for it, I will buy the article and read it. . Sincerely. . In fact, I haven't been around Jinjiang for a long time~~ I usually post the finished articles on the forum, and then when I see good but regrettable ones, I will go back to Jinjiang to buy one or two chapters to see what the author has to say~~ So I'm really sorry that I only bought one chapter from you In fact, I am used to the unconstrained thinking of many authors in Jinjiang. . I don't know if the author, who is mostly just for fun, really likes to write things to create worlds. . If you just want to play for tickets, you can actually ignore my words. . Just be happy. . After all, not everyone likes every flavor~~ If it's not just for fun, at least for me, reading a blocked article is just trying to find a good article and forget about the previous one as soon as possible~! ! . So if you do this, there will be very few fans left~~ Let's talk about Mu Qing's family first. In fact, I think you have spread too much about Mu Qing's life experience. . There were grievances between wealthy families in the previous life. . The wealthy family in the second life has another dispute, but it is obviously not the main plot of the house fight. . In fact, I thought it was an inspirational article at first. . (Although the heroine is a bit suspected of being a Mary Sue... After she was reborn and had her hair tied, her brother, classmates and the hero fell in love with her. Of course, it is not only about love, but also about family and friendship. It is normal to be snobbish about mom and dad's nodules if they are not within the scope of the halo). Although it is not the main plot of the house fight, I wrote so many jokes. In the end, I suddenly felt as if nothing was explained. What happened to her inexplicable trick in her previous life? I vaguely feel that it's because of her father that she treats her sister well, but if this father were to be put in a Japanese comic, it would give people the impression that he is Tuanwu 8. . Then the father in the previous life was still Tuan Wu, and the sister was written to have the feeling of murder and crime but she was still very carefree, and then the grievances in the later life suddenly started. . Her biological father suddenly gave her shares. . Although this biological father was mentioned a little more, at most it was more of an outline than the fog. . I thought that since it had already been laid out so far, I wanted to give at least one or two chapters to introduce the background. . It suddenly jumps out of other chapters and rushes through the chaos~! You must know that no one can completely ignore their parents. I personally think that only by resolving these knots can we create better works Then let's talk about the emotional line. Originally, Qiu Ze already had various loyal and doting images in front of him. Even if he wanted to cheat later on, he would at least give him a transition. . The cheating was over in just half a chapter, and then they broke up. . Is there any rush to strike down by lightning? ! By the way, do you want to write this article as a romance or as an inspirational one? If it is a romance, then this paragraph cannot be so simple. . If it is inspirational, even if the heroine still remembers it later, she should turn it into creative motivation. After all, many people have been dumped when they were young. Only experience can bring inspiration. In reality, many lyricists and composers write songs for their exes and then become famous. ("Sing a Song for You", which talks about painful faith, was written for his girlfriend who he had been with for eight years but broke up with). It can definitely be used as a creative opportunity~~ But at least I personally don't like the back-and-forth. If it's inspirational and romantic, it should be more coherent. However, the tone of this article was clearly sweet at the beginning. If it suddenly turns to sadism, the tone changes too quickly, which is a flaw. You should also think carefully about this. . In addition to Qiu Ze, the emotional line also includes Bai Chen and Big Brother. I think Bai Chen is not suitable for the heroine, unless the background of the heroine is greatly changed. After all, Bai Chen comes from a very pure musical family. Just like when she was studying, classical music looked down on pop music. This can be considered the background of the novel, but I think the reality is also like this. And her life experience is a bit disgraceful. I think even if we fall in love, there are too many complications behind it. . And I think it's better to define Bai Chen as a confidant. Saying that he likes the heroine will make people feel that having a heroine is a bit too cool. . If you work together for a long time and then suddenly look back a few years later and find your lover in the dim lights, this kind of plot is quite good, but adding another branch line is too tiring. At the end of the story, when I said that my eldest brother liked that girl, I really wanted to kneel down. . What is this inexplicable situation? . Obviously, the younger sister before was very gloomy, and the eldest brother was also abroad for a long time, so he didn't really think about it. To be honest, it was a bit illogical for a businessman to suddenly fall in love with a talented musician. . Suddenly I fell in love with it. And they are also brothers and sisters after all. 8. Even if they are not related by blood, the text does not make it particularly clear. Accepting an unethical love for no reason. . There is also Zuo Yi, because there is too little ink in the article, and he is an old man from the previous life, so I have expectations for him. . The first few men were disappointed. In the distance~~~. The last thing I want to say is the main line of the article. In fact, I have read a lot of articles about the rebirth of the entertainment industry. Most of them are about acting. They are all about entering Hollywood and eating up the United States. They are all ridiculous. . I see that there are so few people who write singing and music sincerely. . So I think the subject matter is quite novel and can be ignored even if it is a bit too subtle. I really think you have some musical literacy. At least I don't know most of the things you write about music. Whether you know it very well yourself or have worked hard to find information, I think you have put in some effort. . In this case, don't throw away an article casually! ! ! I also saw that the author said that you originally planned to write about the confrontation between Qingqing's sister in her previous life and her studio. It feels like you have a lot of confusing ideas in your mind, and you are not sure what the main plot is. I have read some stories about the entertainment industry before. Basically, when the heroine becomes famous, a group of people will criticize her (I think this point is very reasonable. After all, how can so many people care about you? It's not like there are no celebrities in the world. People who become fans and blacklist all the time, it is more comfortable to write about the protagonist's own qualities and hard work to improve~), and then there are some inexplicable enemies. . According to the previous arrangement, my sister actually doesn't have much talent. Many of the confrontations with her make people feel a little out of character, so I think it is better for my sister to explain the things in her previous life and then ignore them. After all, Qingqing herself was powerful and famous, and had a few people to protect her, so there was no need to deal with her for a long time. It is also important to set up a good enemy for the pig's trotters. It is also important to ignore this kind of inferior opponent just like the previous one. . (This is the happy thought in my heart). . . Good 8. I'm really verbose! In short, an article does not necessarily have to have a good harvest of family, career and love, but it does not have to kill them all at the same time. Also, it doesn't mean that the male and female protagonists are he when they are together. In the eyes of some people, it may become be. . If the male protagonist is not suitable, let him step down and let the female protagonist fight on her own. . Wahahahaha. . .

I want to say that at the end, it is not clear whether Qingqing and Qiu Ze have reconciled. . But I think Qiu Ze's empathy is quite flawed. . It was crowded with people watching. . Although it's entirely possible in the real world. . But the overall tone in this novel is a bit harsh. . It seems like the infatuated male protagonist suddenly cheated on her in one chapter. . It feels like the author wants to write about the heroine losing her family and then make it even more miserable. . Perhaps the author obviously doesn't want to continue writing and wants to end it as soon as possible. . But to be honest, I was quite happy watching it. . If these two people reconcile, I will feel that there is no love in the world again. , As the heroine herself said, no one can guarantee that there will not be a second transference. . I can accept that the heroine needs to repair and delay this relationship for a while. . But I really can't accept turning back. . In fact, I am very optimistic about Zuo Yi. . Why. . But I don't want to write anymore. . The ending was really disappointing. . Habitually praised

Even though it sucks, I still like it w It's good to read it in one sittingww

~~(-｡-; That's how it ends... I don't admit that Xiao Qian wanted to torture Zha Yuan... Well, I was tortured by the big confession to the point where I decided to let you go...

Really. What is the purpose of this setting? It's almost over, but there's also a breakup complex inserted into it.

The friends were all stunned. . . What a bummer... I hope this little white flower can be normal. . . I was so disgusted by the last one =Dan=

Ouch~I am an absolute good boy~(o^^o)y I am looking forward to the big counterattack in the next chapter~

Sure enough, describing music in a big way is the most inspiring~~~~Ouch Waiting to torture the cannon fodder! Qingqing, don't be careless~~