The Eagle Ancestor Wanders Through HP

I'm scratching my head. The author's writing style feels like writing a synopsis of a story rather than writing a novel...

There is progress, there is finally progress

Wasn't it 0:500 in Quidditch before? How could I add extra points to Gryffindor's win?

Well written! It's just feelings...

Split soul? Is this why V made the Horcrux?

How is that possible! It's impossible for those Ravenclaw students to know about the Philosopher's Stone so easily! This is so unreasonable! ! !

I think... It's unreasonable for the leprous to punish the students~ Yingzu didn't intervene in this matter. Even if it was just to make things difficult for Lao Deng, Yingzu is a professor, right? Why didn't the students stand up when they were being unreasonably punished? So there are parts of this paragraph that I can't accept =A=

. . . . . There are too few emotional scenes

Warm, ah, warm. . . . Huang Sang, the eunuch is dying of anxiety. .

Finally their relationship has made progress!