Tears of the Flower Goddess

In fact, this book is quite good. I like the story of Qin Man and Qingyi. They are both good girls. The story of the heroine and the hero is just average. I feel that the heroine is indeed a bit too selfish. It is obvious that Hua Luo's parents and sister were very good to her in this life, but she has not seen her parents since she recovered her memory. I also really feel sorry for Ye Jin. She has paid so much for the heroine, but the heroine has not even a hint of reward. , But thanks for meeting me, overall it's still good-looking (//?//)

Has the author ever heard of a song that happens to be called Tears of the Flower God?

This can be said to be my favorite novel in my life. I like all the stories in it, especially the Qin Man chapter. I also like Momo very much. Everyone expresses love in a different way. Maybe it's because they love too much that they can't let go. Love you forever?^O^

Wow, this is so awesome. It has more than 300,000 words. I persisted in writing it even though the popularity is not high! Like it!

This novel is very good

Why do I feel that this is a combination of Ten Miles of Peach Blossom, Pillow Book, and Hua Xuyin? But the writing is really not bad.

It feels like bringing Sansheng Sanshi and Hua Xuyin together. The author is actually quite capable, why should he imitate other people's themes?

In the name of love ——Comment on "Tears of the Flower God" I don't know where love comes from, but it goes deeper and deeper. I have read many novels and many kinds of love. I have been moved many times and forgotten many times. Every time I read a book, I feel like I have experienced a life. The love, hate, joys and sorrows, separations and separations are interpreted in my mind one by one, and then settle into elusive, unrecognizable, and unforgettable emotions laid out in my heart. Close the book, forget all those non-existent people and love and hate, leaving only the empty melancholy, and move forward firmly alone in the long and distant world. Individuals' views on love may be different, and individuals may make different decisions about love at different times. "Tears of the Flower God" is not the most ideal image of love for me at this stage, but I can vaguely see the outline of love in Mo Yao's heart at this stage. For readers, "Tears of the Flower God" may be just one of the many novels that are good or bad that they have read, and may only leave a strong or light emotional imprint, but for the author Mo Yao, it is a condensed summary of his fantasy and longing for relationships at a certain age. I would like to comment and wish Mo Yao to grow up step by step, always full of expectations for a better life, and move forward all the way, whether it is the road of emotion, the road of writing, or the road of life. 1. Construction of works (1) Structural framework The main body of "Tears of the Flower God" is divided into four parts, namely the introduction (or beginning), the Qin man chapter, the Qingyi chapter, and the Hua Luo chapter. The introduction is to introduce the male and female protagonists and supporting characters, explain the main background of the story, and pave the way for the Qin Man chapter, Qingyi chapter, and Hua Luo chapter to follow. The main body of the work consists of three chapters, each telling the love story of three different women. These three women have direct or indirect connections with the heroine Hua Luo. The male protagonist, Emperor Feihan, accompanied the female protagonist, Hua Luo, in the process of searching for the Tears of the Flower God, and witnessed the love-hate relationship between Qin Man and Qingyi. The search for the tears of the Flower God is used as a clue throughout the entire work, and ends with the love development of the male and female protagonists. The advantages and disadvantages of such a design can be seen at a glance. The emotional stories of three different characters are intertwined, providing a diverse and rich emotional experience. The structure of the work is neat and clear, and the clues of the article are clear and clear. It is convenient for the author to divergent thinking, the number of words is reasonable, and the work can be successfully completed. The unsatisfactory thing is that with this design, the love story that the male and female protagonists have personally experienced and walked together is only the last part - the Hua Luo chapter, while the first two parts are about other people's love, and the male and female protagonists are just bystanders. I think that love is something that only those in power are obsessed with, and those who watch it clearly. The hero and heroine should have a relatively long love journey that they have personally experienced and walked together. During this process, they experienced love-hate entanglements, joys and sorrows. Only then will they look at each other, themselves, and love with new eyes, and have deeper and more real emotions and understandings of life. Only by having such a difficult and unforgettable time can they live up to their original intention of falling in love. In this way, if they are together in the end, their own world view, outlook on life, values, and outlook on love have matured, and they can treat each other more freely and cherish life after experiencing the baptism of emotions; even if they are finally separated, as Duras wrote in "Lover", "I love your face when you were young, and I love your weathered face even more" - having had this unforgettable love experience, that relationship and that person will be treasures in memory. (2) Transition foreshadowing Transition and foreshadowing are essential details in every novel. "Tears of the Flower God" uses several transitions and foreshadowing reasonably, but it does not use transitional foreshadowing well, and some of the processing is slightly stiff. For example, in the Qin Man chapter, Qin Man's love for Xiao Zhen changes from love to hatred, and in the Qingyi chapter, Murong's attitude toward Qingyi changes from enthusiasm to coldness. There are some traces of torture for the sake of torture, and they are not so easy to control. However, in these foreshadowings and subsequent explanations, Moyao's conception is also full of highlights. For example, in the Emperor's extra story, the encounter between the Emperor's true form, Xiao Long, and the heroine is very cute and interesting. (3) Twists and turns The text seems to be displeased with mountains. Whether it is a chapter or a work, the plot design needs to be tortuous, subtle, and fascinating. From various parts of the text of "Tears of the Flower God" we can see that the author is trying hard to create a twists and turns plot, and the story does have twists and turns. However, it still lacks the weight of the twists and turns after despair, the plot is still not ups and downs enough, and it lacks an ingenious design that is stunning and soul-stirring. But that's okay, it doesn't matter. I know that this is only the initial work completed by Mo Yao, and it is already very good. I think if you continue, keep thinking, summarize regularly, communicate with editors, other authors, and readers, and innovate yourself, Mo Yao's works will definitely become better. 2. Literary style "Tears of the Flower God" is relatively familiar with the words and phrases, the dialogue between the characters, and the psychological description of the protagonist are more natural and appropriate. "I looked at him strangely. I didn't know what he meant by suddenly throwing such a handkerchief. He didn't even bother to speak. He grabbed the handkerchief with one hand, grabbed my paw with the other, and stuffed it into the handkerchief. Only then did I understand his intention. I pointed at him with the other hand and said in shock: 'You, you, you... You actually used such a precious handkerchief to wipe your hands. What a waste of resources!' He rolled his eyes at me and wrapped the hand I was pointing at him with a handkerchief. "This handkerchief is stained with the oil from your hand. It's you who waste everything." '" ("Tears of the Flower God") "He stared at me intently, and there was something in his eyes that I couldn't understand. 'When it comes to obsession, what's wrong with you and me?' 'What did you say? ' I didn't understand what he meant, so I asked again. 'Nothing. ' He looked away and stared at the butterflies dancing among the flowers in the distance, 'People are often greedy, and after fulfilling this wish, they will ask for more. Do I have to fulfill everything one by one? '" He is right, but I can't agree. Three thousand years ago, I only had one wish. If I didn't have the chance to realize my wish, I still wouldn't know how out of reach it was and how unrealistic my idea was. At least I seized that opportunity and experienced it. Even though it was painful, as five hundred years passed, I finally came out of that love affair. ("Tears of the Flower God") The two excerpted paragraphs (the excerpt of these two paragraphs does not mean that the other parts are not exciting enough; the selection of the night brocade part is purely a personal preference) includes character dialogue, action description, psychological description, comparative description, etc. From these two descriptions, we can get a glimpse of the character of the male supporting actor Ye Jin. He is just like the second male lead in every romantic drama, equally handsome and affectionate. He is always by the heroine's side. I have seen the heroine's bold and bold appearance behind her quiet and elegant smile. She speaks words that are unintentional to the listener but intentional to the speaker. She is like a playmate and friend, but also like a confidant. She hides her tears deep in her eyes, but dotes on and indulges the heroine in telling the hero's good and bad qualities. When the heroine is hurt, she feels sad to comfort her, but turns around to lick her wounds alone. 3. Emotional value Whether it is film and television works, or literature and art, every work embodies the author's thoughts and ideas. A concrete manifestation of his understanding and analysis of himself, others, social phenomena, and human emotions. Therefore, it must convey a certain meaning and have unique spiritual power to infect the viewer. Just like reading love novels, it is probably because of the power of love. For a love novel, it can infect readers in many ways, and can influence readers, especially young readers, in many details to shape their worldview, outlook on life, values, and outlook on love. I can understand the concept of love in "Tears of the Flower God", but I can't agree with it. I believe that love is an important part of life, but it is not the whole of life. The purpose of life is to continuously improve and develop yourself. The shaping of a perfect personality requires the participation of many factors, of which love is only an important one. Love, family, friendship, ideals, knowledge, career... These are all for enriching life experience, adding color to life, and ultimately perfecting the personality. I have said so much, but what I actually want to say is that for love (not just love), you must be able to take it and let it go. Real strength is having love in your heart, but not living by love. Oliver August 30, 2013

It's finally finished~Spread the flowers!

No, isn't he the legitimate son of Father God and Mother God? He actually died.