[Fortress Besieged Fanfiction] Scorched Earth

Oh my God, I really don't know how I feel after watching this movie. The teacher's writing is so amazing... Xiao Fang and Xiao Zhao's writing is so vivid that it's almost like the original... It's super close to the original! I came here because of the reputation and finally found the starting point of this article! Teacher, you may not know that I read Siege when I was in high school. I was a dormitory student, so I kept this book on my bedside and read it over and over again. Later, I accidentally got the TXT format of your article on the Internet. I saved it in MP4 and read it over and over again! (Teacher, please don't be angry??) This book was written by the teacher, so it can be said that it stayed with me throughout high school. The teacher wrote it very talentedly. I didn't know the title of the book at first, so I wanted to go to Old Ford to look for the source, but I couldn't find it. At that time, I thought it might be a wife's article, but it was deleted later. I also discovered the title of the article by chance later. This article turned out to be the one I read in high school! ! I am very, very excited, teacher, I have never used Jinjiang before, please don't mind... The teacher is very talented in writing, and many of the settings are very sophisticated, which makes me sometimes feel that, yes, if there is a follow-up to Siege, it may develop like this, and everything will really fall into place. When I was reading the original work, I particularly liked the scene where Zhao Fang and Dong three people went to the cafe, and Zhao Fang bickered and Xie Chuan tried to persuade them to make peace. It was a completely cute trio! I think if they could get closer, they would definitely be good friends who support each other! Thanks to the teacher for writing down this idea. What the teacher wrote is exactly what I have in mind...?? Teacher, I'm not very good at talking, please don't mind! The original work did not write about Mrs. Dong in detail, but you have made up for it as a lovely and talented woman who has her own thinking and temperament and loves her children very much. I can understand why such a wife can harmonize with Dong Xiechuan, and the compatibility of their personalities makes them like screws and nails. At first, I was worried about how the teacher would deal with the ending of the character A Yi, but I didn't expect it to be very clever, a new-style young boy! No, there was not even competition, everyone was sending this innocent little girl to a happy future with good intentions. In the text, the allusions they quoted are also very original! It can be seen from this that the teacher is usually a person who loves life very much and is rich in literature and has accumulated literary talents. Very broad knowledge! Teacher, it has been many years, can you still see this long comment? I came too late qaq I think this is a very reasonable continuation of the plot. At least I put in time and energy. Sometimes I started to wonder whether I was reading a fan or the original work. In the plot, everyone has their own destiny, but none of them is out of touch with the characters of the original work. It is a very satisfactory and flesh-and-blood continuation that is completely based on the trend envisioned by Mr. Qian. The original book says that marriage is like a besieged city, those on the outside want to get in, and those on the inside want to get out. I think this stems from my lack of understanding of marriage at that time. I didn't think clearly about it. I completed this important life event in a hazy state without understanding it clearly before. It was almost like gambling. How could I easily get happiness after marriage? But in the teacher, I saw a new meaning, or a new possibility. Zhao Fang and Zhao Fang were both trapped by love before, but the objects were different, and they were each hurt by love. In this way, the two people who were at war with each other before became close friends without fighting each other on the way to Sanlu. Love is not limited to gender. Zhao Mingming thinks he loves Miss Su, but he often thinks about his love rival. It can be seen that this is a variable that is singled out. Maybe they can achieve success. The teacher's idea in this regard is wonderful, and the writing style is particularly capable and humorous! Anyway, I think this is very consistent with the concept of the original work! The teacher is very particular in plot design, I think he is a complete genius! I think the teacher must have put a lot of effort into researching information and so on, and searched carefully for some customs and titles at that time, or maybe the teacher has already done research in this area. (Happy) I can feel that the teacher paid special attention to this article. This is all your hard work! It's simply a state banquet! ! Who didn't say anything about the state banquet after watching it? ! When I finally accepted that we were together, I felt like it didn't seem like a plot arrangement, it just came naturally. In it, Xiao Fang writes that Xiao Zhao's bickering is super cute. Just cling to each other through the cold spring and autumn. God bless such wise, kind and brave children to be safe and happy. Now 2025 is a new year. Isn't it too late to say New Year greetings to the teacher? But I wish you all your wishes come true and all the best! I am just an unknown reader of yours, and I am not particularly good at talking. But I am very happy to finally find a platform for you to publish your articles, so I boldly write a long comment. I sincerely wish you peace and happiness! Whether you can see it or not… I just took a look and found that the last time you replied to a long comment was ten years ago. Oh my god... I came too late... Teacher, I really hope you can see it. I don't know how to make long comments and I'm not very good at talking. Please don't mind. But after all, the time span is too big, so I can only wish you good health and all the best! I don't know what career you are currently engaged in, but I wish you all the best in your work as a teacher! The characters in the teacher's works are always full of vitality... Goddess, you should also be well in this life...

I finished reading it in one breath... The teacher's writing is so good that I only discovered such wonderful writing in 2025... I particularly like the book Siege of the City. I accidentally read this fan article on Xiaohongshu and said that the teacher's cooking is delicious. I ran to read it. I am so excited that I can't sleep now... The teacher's writing is really great, and it restores the style of Besieging the City very well, and Zhao The relationship between Fang and the two is perfectly grasped. I really like the kind of love that flows over time without knowing it. The more you read it, the more you feel it. Moreover, I have repeatedly savored the teacher's plot design. It is very close to the original work and very relevant to that era. The small ingenuity makes people laugh involuntarily. Even Qian Lao's light sarcastic humor is also written... I just rolled back and forth on the bed. . . With you in such a cold circle, I really have to knock three times. . . I read it over and over again. . . Twelve years ago, teacher, you wanted a long review. I'm sorry I'm late... At that time, teacher, you even updated two extras for ten collections... Now there are more than two thousand collections, teacher, will you come back and continue writing? I am really looking forward to their trip to Yunnan. . . ?

I followed it intermittently until the end. I read the first half more slowly, but after the two of them got interested, they finished it in one go. Really excellent! The writing style is relaxed, eloquent, and a little humorous, and I can actually see some of the meaning of the original work. Some metaphors in the article are very clever and impressive. And I can see that my wife is a very knowledgeable person, and her references to various literary works are very interesting. Moreover, the story of the article has a broad background, which shows that the historical background of the wife at that time seems more vivid. I like Hongjian, who is soft and weak, a little thoughtful and clever, and I also like Xinmei, who is smart and capable, treats Xiao Fang attentively, and considers Xiao Fang in every aspect. After reading my wife's article, I can no longer look directly at the original work, haha! I hope my wife can return here one day and start a new life in Yunnan for Xiaofang and Xinmei! Finally, it's a pity that I didn't see any meat!

If you need the full version, you can go to Chaohua, I found it there, hehe

I only saw this article in September 2025, [please] [please] Goddess, I'm late, the writing is really good. I re-read "Fortress Besieged" two days ago, and started to knock on this pair of CPs. I was very anxious to turn over and over to find food. Emperor God has paid off, and I saw it when I checked the comments yesterday Goddess, your article, at first I thought if the words "Zhenquan Shenwen" would be too big and squashed the article, but after reading it, I really... [Please] [please] Goddess, you are great [please] [please] Goddess, when will you come back to update the Yunnan volume? [Please][Please][Please][Please]

It's late. Without any hope, I ask when the third volume will be

Throw flowers! ! ! I actually collected it two years ago, but I was busy at the time and only recently took it out to read. Simply stunningly beautiful. . Astonishing writing style. . A shocking plot. . I wish I had seen this article thirteen years ago. I could leave more comments to the teacher and let the teacher see the long comments. I really don't know what else to say... But looking at Xiao Fang and Xiao Zhao in the teacher's painting, he is so lifelike. I think that if Xiao Fang really went to Chongqing, maybe they would really get close and fall in love like this, go to Yunnan and Hong Kong, and they would live together happily forever. It's really great to read this wonderful article by the teacher It costs 99 for young couples! ! ! After so many years, I also wish the teacher health, happiness, peace and success. Ps. If you make a wish quietly, you can see more follow-ups from Xiao Zhao Xiaofang [Hold your hands together] [Hold your hands together] What if your wish succeeds [Hold your fists] [Hold your fists]

Author, I really, really like you very much. Although I didn't get involved until more than ten years later, I still like you very much. Can you block the ones you blocked first? Send me the link, I really beg you. Well, I see that you haven't been online since 2015. I'm wondering if you forgot your password or can't log in? I really want to help you continue writing, is it possible? I really like the story of A Yi, and our dear Mrs. Dong. Of course, the most important thing is the sweet couple. Your writing is really, really good, and I may not be able to write as well as you did back then if I continued writing. It's really a pity. If I could have been born 30 years earlier, I could not only understand your articles, but also become very, very good friends with you. I'm really sad. Finally, I wish you happiness in real life and smooth work!

Woohoo┭┮┭┮How can I just have rice like this... But the teacher's writing is really great! It's so seamlessly connected to the original text! ! Zhao Fang is our blessing to have you...

Boss... It's so well written that the kids cried...