
[Fengyun] The Great Ranting Emperor
[风云]吐槽大帝
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I take it out and watch it every two years [crying] every time I watch it, I burst into tears
In so many years, the only completed Qin Shuang fanfic
I watched it once many years ago and I remembered it and took it out to watch it again. It made me cry and laugh. It was so good.
First of all, I wish Ayan a happy National Day. Next, I enter the incomprehensible thought mode... How did I first come across the book Ayan? I really forgot about OTZ... I vaguely remember that I took a detour several times when I saw the title of the book. Until one day, out of curiosity, I clicked in and took a look. Then I knelt down. Comminuted fracture of knee. Watching it all the way, I couldn't stop OTZ. I have to say that Ayan is very good at making complaints. When I read the first twenty chapters, I laughed until my stomach hurt in almost every chapter. If the theme of this article is to complain all the way and then talk about love, if it is the same routine as other Jinjiang fans nowadays, I believe many people will forget it after reading it. But the plot didn't develop that way. The heroine speaks freely and likes to speak obscenely, but the heroine is really kind-hearted, cute and real. She didn't take it seriously and regarded other characters as stupid dogs. She violated the rules and saved Chu Chu. Then all her privileges were taken away, and her face was disfigured and her arms were broken. I really can't imagine what would have happened to her if she hadn't met Qin Shuang. Fortunately, he saved her, in every sense of the word. Speaking of Qin Shuang's chest-ripping act, I really didn't expect the male protagonist to be such an inconspicuous person at first! ! But in the end, it is really normal that Youruo will be with him. Integrity, gentleness, and kindness, next to the charming bitches like Feng Yun and the demons dancing around, Qin Shuang is indeed a pure and unpretentious white lotus. Except for him, it is probably difficult for Youruo to reach an ending with other men where they open up and support each other. When I saw Qin Shuang's various little actions, he lived alone in a thatched house, left a fire for Youruo, went out in the rain to buy medicine for Youruo, and stood side by side with her in the sunset to piece together a person's shadow. Being slow, I was really moved. In terms of the portrayal of other supporting characters, Xi Bao is obsessed with getting himself clean, and the silly Shi Weitian carries up the burning floor in order to let Youruo escape. When Youruo turns around, his body is roasted and oily. Thinking about the fat man silently welcoming death, and then looking at the contrast of "covered with oil", I wanted to cry but couldn't. I immediately felt that Ayan, you are probably a very soft-hearted person. As mentioned in last night's message, a reader once said that this was the best fanfic she had ever seen. At that time, Ayan, you seemed a little disapproving. Maybe the first half of the book cannot bear this evaluation, but after reading the full text, based on the touch it brings to readers, it is well deserved to be called the best fanfic. If I have to say... I don't like the TV series "Feng Yun" very much. The costumes and scenery are shoddy, the plot is incomprehensible, and the characters are quite boring. But under Ayan's writing, I saw Qin Shuang's image becoming clearer and clearer. This man is usually so gentle and kind. After he took revenge on You Ruo, he said lightly "I will be angry too" and hurt others by hurting himself. This was his most violent move. It really hurts my heart, both for Youruo and Qin Shuang. What on earth did I say incoherently... [Thumping on the ground] Before I shut up in confusion, please let me say one more thing: I really like your writing. It is concise and lively, without being indulged in long and meaningless adjectives and piling up like others, and it is vivid but not boring. In today's Jinjiang, this is also a significant advantage. Finally: I love you with all my heart
First of all, I wish Ayan a happy National Day. Next, I enter the incomprehensible thought mode... How did I first come across the book Ayan? I really forgot about OTZ... I vaguely remember that I took a detour several times when I saw the title of the book. Until one day, out of curiosity, I clicked in and took a look. Then I knelt down. Comminuted fracture of knee. Watching it all the way, I couldn't stop OTZ. I have to say that Ayan is very good at making complaints. When I read the first twenty chapters, I laughed until my stomach hurt in almost every chapter. If the theme of this article is to complain all the way and then talk about love, if it is the same routine as other Jinjiang fans nowadays, I believe many people will forget it after reading it. But the plot didn't develop that way. The heroine speaks freely and likes to speak obscenely, but the heroine is really kind-hearted, cute and real. She didn't take it seriously and regarded other characters as stupid dogs. She violated the rules and saved Chu Chu. Then all her privileges were taken away, and her face was disfigured and her arms were broken. I really can't imagine what would have happened to her if she hadn't met Qin Shuang. Fortunately, he saved her, in every sense of the word. Speaking of Qin Shuang's chest-ripping act, I really didn't expect the male protagonist to be such an inconspicuous person at first! ! But in the end, it is really normal that Youruo will be with him. Integrity, gentleness, and kindness, next to the charming bitches like Feng Yun and the demons dancing around, Qin Shuang is indeed a pure and unpretentious white lotus. Except for him, it is probably difficult for Youruo to reach an ending with other men where they open up and support each other. When I saw Qin Shuang's various little actions, he lived alone in a thatched house, left a fire for Youruo, went out in the rain to buy medicine for Youruo, and stood side by side with her in the sunset to piece together a person's shadow. Being slow, I was really moved. In terms of the portrayal of other supporting characters, Xi Bao is obsessed with getting himself clean, and the silly Shi Weitian carries up the burning floor in order to let Youruo escape. When Youruo turns around, his body is roasted and oily. Thinking about the fat man silently welcoming death, and then looking at the contrast of "covered with oil", I wanted to cry but couldn't. I immediately felt that Ayan, you are probably a very soft-hearted person. As mentioned in last night's message, a reader once said that this was the best fanfic she had ever seen. At that time, Ayan, you seemed a little disapproving. Maybe the first half of the book cannot bear this evaluation, but after reading the full text, based on the touch it brings to readers, it is well deserved to be called the best fanfic. If I have to say... I don't like the TV series "Feng Yun" very much. The costumes and scenery are shoddy, the plot is incomprehensible, and the characters are quite boring. But under Ayan's writing, I saw Qin Shuang's image becoming clearer and clearer. This man is usually so gentle and kind. After he took revenge on You Ruo, he said lightly "I will be angry too" and hurt others by hurting himself. This was his most violent move. It really hurts my heart, both for Youruo and Qin Shuang. What on earth did I say incoherently... [Thumping on the ground] Before I shut up in confusion, please let me say one more thing: I really like your writing. It is concise and lively, without being indulged in long and meaningless adjectives and piling up like others, and it is vivid but not boring. In today's Jinjiang, this is also a significant advantage. Finally: I love you with all my heart
No matter how many times I read it, I burst into tears when I see it. It's so well written555
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1. Their meeting was destined. In fact, at the beginning, Datear didn't expect that he would fall in love with such a crazy and silly woman, and he didn't know that he would inadvertently give his heart away in the future. Give it to the lotus leaf that reaches the sky, give it to the new rain on the empty mountain, and give it to the small river that reflects the stars in the sky and the dancing green light. And all of this was already doomed when they first met; even though they didn't know it. 2. On the appearance of male and female protagonists The meaty appearance changes the author's past euphemistic and reserved writing style (I don't seem to remember it before). At the beginning of the second chapter (the first chapter of mourning for missing), he explains everything about this murderous woman in a short and smooth way. She is as graceful as a river entering the sea, as if a dragon is startled by a dragon, a glance, a smile that captivates the city... Well, her happy and interesting (?) Game journey begins. She is special. Although now, in this trend where authors are revising their novels to design their characters more realistically in order to gain a sense of empathy from readers, the effect of Mary Sue Tomsu's Golden Finger Breed/Horse Queen/Miya's mentally retarded aura has been weakened to the extreme, and the reactions of the protagonists who have traveled through time have also changed from "I'm so glad I time traveled and I want to change it." Change the world! Yeah! Yeah!" Was revised to "What the hell did I travel through? I want to go home and find my mother." The corresponding aborigines have become more sensible and will not be infected by the protagonist's brain-dead bacteria... But there are not many heroines who choose to become the male boss just to complete the game as quickly as possible. She is not innocent and cute at all, nor is she noble and cold. Her reaction may be the same as that of everyone around us. Even when we encounter this kind of thing, if a bold dog jumps over the wall, she will look like this. This feels real. In the past, I could only feel similar feelings when watching the masterpiece "The First Chaos in History". As for the appearance of Big Chest, there seems to be nothing special. The only difference is that he is the first person in the protagonist team to come into contact with flesh, and the first person to feel the crazy thinking of flesh. But just based on his reaction to his first appearance, he can get an evaluation: "calm". Just three sentences. The first sentence: "I am Qin Shuang, and he is Nie Feng." The second sentence: "You said you are the best maid in the world. What's so good about it?" The third sentence: "Jian Wu, Hall Master Feng's martial arts are very good, and he doesn't need your protection." In Yourou's crazy vision when he first came to the game, Qin Shuang, the only person who looked like a normal person, became a benchmark, standing calm and impartial. It seems that only his reflex arc is the most normal, whether it is the first time he meets the meat and appreciates the meat, dances the sword indiscriminately and becomes mentally ill, the second time he meets the meat and sees the meat looking at the little brother, or the third time he meets the meat and loses his favor, the fourth time he meets the meat is righteous and the words are strict, he is wished a happy new year. Rou obtained fire-attributed sword energy. Eight encounters with Yourou negotiated against Xiongba in a fierce battle with the Twelve Shabi of Tianchi. He danced with Xiongba with a broken arm and said, "Youruo, you are so strange." Too bad it's not Venus with a broken arm. 3. It's all so tacky When you are desperate and you meet me who is lonely, all changes become logical. Yourou once said that she is a person who is easy to get close to the red and the ink. If she meets someone who wants to report to the newspaper after waking up, she will become extremely crazy. But it's a pity that she didn't become extremely crazy, nor did she become decadent and depressed, because she met Qin Shuang, a gentleman who was always calm as a gentleman... No, a gentleman who was always calm. Then everything became better. I was surprised to find that after the author changed the meaty mentality in just two chapters, he quickly made the plot enter the rural love mode, and this did not feel abrupt at all. If you have meat, you will still have meat. If you have big breasts, you will still have the same big breasts. But just a small and subtle cry can cause a huge avalanche, which is enough to shock people. Following Yourou, I truly entered this world, and truly looked at all this with my own heart instead of a joking eye. Then everything becomes real and beautiful - not all of them are so-called "beautiful", like children talking nonsense and smashed lotus leaves, but here it only refers to feeling "beautiful" because of "realness". The images of Yourou and Dareches are further completed. Not only is Yourou truly aware of Dareches' character, but I also didn't really understand what these two people—the craziest and the most simple—are like until this moment. Such fleshy and big breasts are very charming. Fascinating because of authenticity. Excerpted from the original text [I hope the author will understand that it is difficult to express my feelings without posting the original text here]: "The pouring rain has now turned into drizzle, and the green mountains in the distance are shrouded in mist and rain. The green leaves and petals are stained with rain, and they are full of life." "The pitter-pattering water drops were dripping down from the eaves, and I was shocked to realize that I was no longer obsessed with the system, levels, and skills. In other words, the things I did before were all unfamiliar. I didn't take these things to heart anymore... Looking around now, the world is peaceful and vast." "What are NPCs? What are players? They are everything and nothing. What matters is the person you look at. With an ordinary heart, without any inexplicable sense of superiority or strange eyes, after truly integrating here, I discovered that NPCs are also ordinary people, and so am I." "And the difference is more than identity." "I think I am very lucky. I have a house to live in and people to accompany me. The house is nice and the people are nice." "The arena is more than just the arena, it is also life. Life indeed requires an attitude that is suitable for life." To get out of the darkness, all you need is a North Star and a guide. Precisely because Qin Shuang also fell into darkness, his character grew brighter through the mud. Like a lotus flower. 4. A more vulgar plot is coming Sorry, I don't want to be a father, so I don't need to be happy or to be tough. I just feel like it's finally coming. Just like the wonderful feeling before my aunt came, I put an extended night towel in front of my eyes, just to cover & absorb the liquid that was about to spurt out - it might be tears or it might be the temporary transparency of phlegm that was about to turn into an angel. According to the author's consistent bad taste, we will always see some weird and refreshing plots. It's similar to the water prison prison/forbidden food Xiang love each other but can't work together to steal a bride, take hostages and threaten the father... And other vulgar things. Such a series of weird and refreshing plots were slapped together—— I don't know how serious it is. Well, not really, everyone was happy. It's really three vulgarities [□□]. I love the author more and more. 5. Random personal thoughts In fact, I felt a little strange that it ended so quickly, because I thought the author would have something else that needed to be explained in detail, but these feelings all disappeared when I read it the second time. On the contrary, I felt it was great to end here. Just right. Because everything has been settled, they all got the happiness they wanted, and we also know their happiness. This is enough, so there is no need to say more. Because it would be trivial to say too much. Another little personal habit of mine is that I like to play background music while reading, and this background music must match the writing style or plot. For example, I will play majestic and tense music when watching war scenes, exciting and fighting music when watching martial arts fights, cheerful music when watching happy scenes, melancholy and sad music when watching sad and depressing scenes... I won't go into details one by one. The use of background music can sometimes enrich emotions and portray scenes, and can also change the impression of the plot - I once clicked "shuffle" when watching the scene of Hai Lan's suicide in "The Mental Ill", and then my phone selected "The Most Dazzling Ethnic Style" for me... Then I finished reading that chapter with a smile - but this is wrong, I should be sad! ! Because the writing style of this novel has changed so much, it cannot be completely summarized in one song; moreover, it takes luck and character to find a song that matches the article. Fortunately, I have a good character. Although I finished reading the book, I found suitable music after it was over. The following is my personal opinion and is for reference only. Chapter 2 Game to Chapter 36 Next Chapter: "2012 55 European and American Super Remixes of All Divine Comedy Champion Songs" Chapter 37 breaks up and ends in Chapter 40: "Pipa Song - Ambush from Flying Daggers" Chapter 41: Not Dead to Chapter 42: Sunshine: "Wind and Cloud (Piano Performance)" or "Fan Zongpei-Question" Chapter 43: Complaint to Chapter 48: Wind and Rain: "Fan Zongpei - Song of the Ferryman" Chapter 49 See You Again Chapter 64 Escape: "Fantastic Plastic Machine-Different Colors (LV Advertising Background Music)" Chapter 65 Cherish to Chapter 67 Don't abuse: "Catie Mckinney-Sunrise" Chapter 68 returns to Chapter 69 again: "Fantastic plastic machine-Different Colors (LV advertising background music)" Chapter 70 The story goes to Chapter 75 Good Family: "Xu Yuteng-Will you be my wife?"
I watched it again, it felt so touching.
Hahahahahahaha... The ending is over, woo hoo, looking forward to the new article...