I woke up to find myself as Nie Shen'er. My parents were both dead, and I was on the road to my uncle's home with Yun Xi. Fortunately, I had a personal space with me, so I didn't have to worry about making a living. I decided to go with Yun Xi to my uncle's home first, but was abandoned. To avoid Aunt Hong from the original plot, I was unlucky enough to be kidnapped. Later, I escaped with a girl, but we got separated. I was taken in by someone and lived an ordinary, peaceful life. I thought I had already escaped the plot, but then my personal space opened up, and I began a low-key life of cultivation. I kept to myself and avoided trouble, then joined Yun Xi on a journey across the world, living a carefree life together. Faced with the life of a noblewoman, I bore it calmly and lived my own days, finding happiness wherever I could.
Briefly comment on this article (If you don't like it, don't comment, objective evaluation) Today I happened to want to read fanfics from previous TV series and anime, and this novel is just one of them. 1. I paid attention to the time. This novel was last updated in 2013. According to the content of the novel, the author should have been in high school at that time. Because most of the content in it comes from high school Chinese textbooks, highlight the key points and pay attention to typos. There are many typos in the novel. Because they quote famous sentences from the textbook, it is easy to see them. If the author can see them now, it is recommended to catch them. 2. Although it is a fanfic, because the heroine is from the present to the past and her name has been changed, the novel does not follow the plot roughly, which violates the character and background of the original Nie Shen'er, so it can only be regarded as the original heroine. 3. Judging from the background of the original heroine Du Yunxi, Nie Shen'er was abandoned by the original heroine's uncle and later taken away by Aunt Hong. However, I feel that the uncle's role in the novel is hypocritical and I can't understand it. Because for strangers who are meeting for the first time, the problem of giving money can only be said: I give it to you as a favor but not as a duty. You cannot morally kidnap someone you just met. I think Aunt Hong is a good person. Although it is wrong to take away a child, she really thinks about Nie Shen'er in the play, and she even helped Nie Shen'er when she was desperate at the end. 4. Regarding the male protagonist's role, in the original drama, the male protagonist had feelings for Qing Ning, and it was the original female protagonist's comfort after Qing Ning's death that made the male protagonist get better quickly. I think there is affection between Du Yunxi and the male protagonist in the play, but it is more about trust. To borrow a big saying I like, trust is often more important than liking. Especially in a deep palace. Of course, the male and female protagonists in the original drama have a good relationship. In addition to the peace of mind that the female protagonist brings to the male protagonist and the trust between them, the female protagonist's intelligence is indispensable. However, in this fan fiction, the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist are simply inexplicable. This is a big bug. 5. It's also strange that the heroine started selling ginseng. The heroine brought out such old ginseng without an adult accompanying her. Wouldn't anyone care about it? The shopkeeper of the drug store gave you money easily? 6. Regarding the appearance of female supporting characters in it, I read the comments. Some people think that the female protagonist is more hypocritical, because the female protagonist can actually help them but does not. The heroine in the novel reminded them, and the heroine also mentioned that the heroine had changed. In fact, this is inevitable. Not to mention that the heroine has the ability to stop it, it is better to think about the consequences after she stops it. No one is a Holy Mother. I think just being reminded is the greatest help. In the end, the author still has too many bugs, and I can't point them out in some places, which makes it feel quite awkward. Ang, probably, that's it. No challenge intended, sorry if any offense is caused.
The heroine is too Mary Sue. If you like her, you will love her. If you don't, you will not love her. In the last sentence, the one who made Jinse and Liluo die is the heroine. If the heroine helps Jinse and Liluo, this will not happen. There is still room and inspiration, and the heroine can be the emperor! Self-abuse! Vomiting blood
There is no logic, even more nonsensical than ordinary palace wear. And writing it in such a mess is going to kill you.
Humph, I hate cheating the most.
Update soon, looking forward to the ending
Asking for an ending Asking for an ending Asking for an ending
Update it, I hope the heroine and the hero will be happy together
I don't know what I'm writing
What about updates? So long
Very beautiful. I like the warmth of the sun.