Ye Meng's Space

→_→Speaking of which, how old is the heroine? Did someone take notice so quickly? To be honest, it's normal to become beautiful and attractive after changing However, I feel like a 21-year-old or a 23-year-old fell in love with a little girl when I saw it, which makes me a little bit suspenseful.

She decided to follow Ye Meng from now on. Ye Meng would never have thought that from now on she would have multiple followers, not two! The other one is Xuanyuan Qingtian! What is this sentence talking about? Am I the only one who doesn't understand?

Can this grandpa be normal? Normal people want to achieve the maximum effect at the minimum cost. It's so casual. If something happens, you can cry to someone. Even if he joins the army, if a soldier is accidentally injured, his captain will take responsibility, okay? It's just baffling. Just like that, a child went to save people. Even if he had the ability, he wouldn't do it.

When I was reading this article, I thought it was my good friend who made a cameo appearance in Lian Lian's article. Isn't this naughty cuteness really the off-line nature of a certain scumbag It's been a long time since I've encountered such an innocent and kind-hearted naughty little heroine. (PS: I haven't read this romance novel in a long time. I met the second-generation cute little Shoujun... Ahem...) But to be honest, it's really rare to be able to maintain such a new type of heroine in a continent of cultivation. The race and running section really made me smile, and I definitely didn't tremble... (It seems like something has gotten in. It's so weird to rush...) The competitive Xiaoye Meng is still cute and tight. I have to say that Xiao Ye Meng was reborn with a good grandpa. Grandpa Ye (yeah yeah, poof, he was molested by the input method~) also overlaps with a shadow in my heart, which means that when I was a child, I was always bullied because I was too quiet. At that time, there was no one to help me, so I could only strengthen myself. I always dreamed of having someone to protect me and love me all the time. It makes me heartbroken! Xiaoye Meng is so lucky to have such a grandpa, isn't it? (Dear Honglian, you are actually Hou Ye Meng's biological mother and Qian Ye Meng's stepmother = =) [Of course my grandpa is also pretty good →→] As for Xiaoye Meng's godlike deskmate... The person who can figure out such a good way to steal is indeed a god! Since the number of appearances is so small, I won't comment too much. I just feel that this character is really extraordinary. When it came to the topic of starting a family and starting a career, but I couldn't live without losing my virginity, I thought there would be no male protagonist. Later, when I saw Ding Chen, I suddenly realized that this girl wasn't very well hidden! ! ! This is almost like a male pig's foot... Here I would also like to respectfully call Ye Nuxia majestic and domineering! Even if his identity is exposed, he will not hesitate to save people. Whether it is Hua Hua, Ding Chen, or the 'enemy' Xuanyuan Zixuan, a slap in the face is regarded as revenge. I am really ashamed of myself. Oh, I don't want to throw her down the stairs again. (Oh, I want to throw it down twice!) Later, she got into trouble when she drank, and she brought it upon herself. No wonder Xiaoye Meng, but Jie Haizhi still has a bright personality, and he also knows how to be grateful. If he doesn't know how to be grateful, he will definitely be a vicious female partner who won't be able to explain! For a flower with only one thick line, well, the name is pretty good, ahem. Overall, I was very happy to read this article. I have to say that this is a good article. Good articles last forever, and one article will be passed down forever. The most important thing is to make a habitual summary. This is a good article based on objective comments. It is also a good article based on the supervisor's comments. I think it is a good article as long as it suits your taste. As for the facial features of other characters, they are not very detailed. Of course, the character depictions are good, but for facial expressions, the facial features are too blurred, which always makes people feel that there is a lack of color. Not many authors have smooth writing, extraordinary narrative skills, and the writing itself is also very exciting! In addition, I have wanted to write this long review for a long time. I didn't expect that I was busy with work and the article was already finished when I came back. The level of diligence is really SSS+! I really can't do enough to flatter the horse. Looking forward to Wenwen's next performance, the last sentence: Congratulations on the completion! Sprinkle flowers! ! !

The plot behind it becomes more and more useless.

The backstage was extremely tough, and it looked like it was definitely going to be a sweet ending. I like it, but there will be such a big task in the future, how long will it take? Can Grandpa Ye see Xiao Meng get married and have children?

How long has it been since the heroine was discharged from the hospital? She said she wanted to knock down five big men. As a military general who has stepped up step by step, she still believes it? It's a bit unreasonable. How can martial arts be so easy to practice?

Hopefully the power of space can lead to longevity and good health.

Dear Xiao Honglian~~ First let's talk about your copywriting. The writing gave me a strong sense of conflict, and the heroine felt domineering. I quite like domineering female protagonists, and the writing is very attractive to me. When I read the first chapter, I felt that the heroine is different from ordinary people who practice cultivation or time travel. She doesn't like to hide and cover herself up like others. She is very real. Even though she knows it will make others feel a little weird, she still stays true to herself. I think there are two reasons. The first is because the heroine is rich and powerful. The second is that the heroine is smart enough and knows that there is no point in hiding. It is better to be yourself, so that everyone can adapt quickly. I vaguely felt these two points in the first chapter, and then I saw it [After reading it, Ye Meng patted her chest, okay, okay, after she passed the tribulation, none of these babies were missing, otherwise she would have cried by then], haha here The heroine is very cute~ You can pat your chest with confidence. The money-loving heroine makes her more spiritual and outspoken besides being domineering~~ all kinds of cute~~ (→_→Please forgive this guy for being poor in words, this guy can only say cute, very cute now) Well, a little reminder, add a period after "unknown" in this paragraph. Otherwise, this sentence may be really too long, making it a bit tiring to read. Well, some sentences are like this too. Honglian doesn't like to use periods, o(∩_∩)o Haha (forgive me for only finding such a low-level mistake T T) [That guy is the most ruthless. I learned a lesson from him when I was going through the tribulation. As for why he showed mercy in the end, I don't know. In short, Ye Meng told himself that the tiger's whiskers are not that easy to pull off, and it is better to be a good aborigine. . Low-key? Please, people who have no strength should keep a low profile. I really don't know what the original owner thinks. It's incredible that such a good family background can develop a character that is, to put it bluntly, inferior. ] I like this sentence. I like the idea of ​​the heroine very much. Family background is not to show off, but it is also your backing. Ye Meng is a very confident and straightforward person. She does whatever she likes and repays kindness and revenge. Speaking of which, Ye Meng suddenly gave me a very chic and chivalrous style, but not reckless. She thinks carefully before making a decision, which I really admire. , ["Tablemate, let's see you tomorrow!" Ye Meng packed up his things and said to his deskmate. As soon as he raised his head, he saw Xuanyuan Qingtian looking at her, and gave him a smile by the way, "Xiao Tiantian, let's see you tomorrow!" Haha, with these words, I can almost imagine the heroine looking like a thief, and then she smiled mischievously at Qingtian. Haha, I am so rare for such a heroine. ["Xiao Tiantian, you came quite early! "Ye Meng said to Xuanyuan Qingtian who was in the northeast corner of her direction. D3d "I'm warning you, you are not allowed to call me Xiao Tiantian anymore. My name is Xuanyuan Qingtian, and I am the sky far away from the Tianshan Mountains. "Xuanyuan Qingtian came over and said fiercely, still pointing his finger in front of Ye Meng's eyes.] The heroine is teasing her nakedly, haha~ teasing the young lady... Qingtian gives me the feeling of a very cute and adorable young lady!! But Grandpa Ye gave her a roll of his eyes and crushed her? He can crush it! Lovely grandpa, grandpa is a tough and upright soldier, but he loves Ye Meng very much. He treats Ye Meng like a kind old grandfather. The grandfather here gives me the feeling of an old naughty boy, which is really cute! Ah, I saw Chapter 20. . . I really like Ding Chen's arrogance and all kinds of monsters. Sure enough, he is also the most powerful one. O(∩_∩)o haha Well, Lianlian's writing is very good. Just a small suggestion, Lianlian can leave a foreshadowing at the end of each chapter, so as to attract everyone to read the next chapter. It's like deliberately creating suspense when the chapter is broken and then revealing it in the second chapter. . . Hmm~ Lian Lian, please continue to work hard~ Well, I will always support you~ Spread flowers~

The passing geese leave traces... Come on Lianlian~