Meeting You at the Best of Times

The beginning of the article is not very attractive. The language, actions, and descriptions of the characters are a bit weird. Please think about it carefully. But if you keep writing, you will definitely gain something. Come on!

First, the title of the article is not very attractive, it is too literary, and not many people will click on it. Internet articles still need to catch people's attention from the beginning. Second, if you don't have a chapter name, it will make people think that you are lazy and don't even bother to give a chapter name. Readers will easily be confused about where they are looking when they are following the article. Third, there is the problem of typesetting. There are a large number of densely packed paragraphs, and long paragraphs are often used. It is best for online articles to leave one paragraph blank and one line, and then intersperse long and short paragraphs, which can give readers a better reading experience. Fourth, make a cover, which will help interest the public (and the copywriting should also be better-looking. The current fonts are too small and dense. PS: "How can there be such a good thing in the world? Come if you dare, and I will let you go and never come back." The copy here reads very strange, "Come if you come" should be followed by "come and no return". I think it might be better to change it to, "If you dare, try it, I will make it impossible for you to come back!" This might be better? After all, it's just a cursory look, and if you feel it doesn't suit your liking, just ignore it. Finally, out of necessity, I posted the reply. The above is also the words of the new couple

Ahem, Xiaoli came to complain. Let's talk about typesetting first, although many great masters don't just talk about it. But it turns out that a blank line can make the layout look fresher. It won't be so tiring, because it is an online text after all, and most readers will read it on a PC. Also, although it may be necessary for the plot, in terms of the number of words, it is recommended that each chapter be evenly distributed, so as to leave a good impression on readers. The story of Sanlu is still good, so please keep working hard. The most important thing is to persevere. I hope your writing will get better and better.