
[Bleach] Ryougi Shiki
[死神]两仪织
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 209k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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74Chapters
1.7kFavorites
8.5Score
491Nutrient gifts
9.7kClicks per chapter
287Comments
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Why does it feel like the relationship between the two of them will take a long time = =
Then. . Finished reading. . Still very unsatisfied and so on. . The author writes very well O(∩_∩)O~ Spread the flowers ~ keep up the good work ~
In fact, I feel that Ori is a little weak. The Demonic Eye of Death is not such a useless thing~ It is a huge bug that can kill everything! In other words, no matter what technique is used, it can kill (seal), and the same goes for humans. Even the replica should be able to kill it easily! Especially if Zhi's speed can keep up, it should be an instant kill for others!
Do you still have the intention to write about the Yong-yee family? Murderers are also fine.
I really want to kill everyone who distracts Zori's attention and care, Aizen Big Boss... But this will have the opposite effect...
Aizen you are shooting yourself in the foot. .
No, I'm sorry, I want to ask a rude question... Well, that is, did Big Boss Aizen succeed in reaching the base? QAQ!
K. . . Kissed. . .
Good article~~Spread flowers~~
Congratulations on the completion, "[Death] Ryogiori" Ever since, after the high school entrance examination, I promised to give a long review. Look at the time, from April to June, 73 days. It can be said that it is updated every day. The word count before entering v was 2,000, and after entering v, it was 3,000. Sometimes it would explode. I really feel that it is very powerful... There are very few fans about Kongjing in Jinjiang, and none seemed to have been completed before this. Ori is a character who lives in the memories of Ryouri and Mikiya Kurogiri. Only the murder investigation (previous) appears in the animation. As an anime fan (I don't know how the novel describes Zhi), writing a fan of Zhi also means completing the character of Liang Yi Zhi based on the original work. I think the author has a good grasp of Oribo's character when he writes "How to bring Abarai and Hisagi out to play together in the afternoon." I feel that Oribo has a hint of mischief. But sometimes the description of the character's performance and psychology is too pale, such as when writing about Zhi's laughter. You can add other people's perspectives, such as: Urahara looked at Ori opposite, patting the table and laughing, and felt depressed. Ori-kun, you are too gloating... Well, I personally think that the dialogue between non-protagonists can also be increased appropriately. By adding these dialogues, you can continuously improve the protagonist's character or bury plot clues. For the emotional side…OTZ. Author, you really make me love and hate you... Sincerely, I raise questions. First of all, regarding the Shiki, when the Shiki loses the Zhi, the Galan Cave is empty, and vice versa, right? The influence of Chinese style on weaving is not profound enough. Secondly, Miki Kurogiri also made Ori feel emotions other than murder, and I personally think it had a great influence. But in the text, I feel that the position of Qianye is... Very twisted =_=. Finally, Aizen ahhh! Lan Da's feelings are so vague and hazy! ! ! Beat the ground... In the end, the overall plot was on the steady side, with a pseudo-farming feel... I was originally looking forward to the big battle! ! ! QAQ… I re-watched the changes and felt that the level was improved in the later stages. Uh-huh. PS1: This is my first long review... I feel like the writing is... Very confusing. I feel... The language is a bit extreme... (I can't afford to hurt myself if I hit them all with my mobile phone QAQ) PS2: The new series "Sky Realm" in July will be made available for TV. Although this is probably a money-making plan, I still can't take my eyes off it. PS3: I originally wanted to write a congratulatory message, but due to the malicious intent of the universe... I might... Not be able to complete it. . .