Taking the Child

This article really has no bottom line. I read Don't Be So Proud and then read this article. I can't believe it was written by an author. The heroine was so badly abused that she could still fuck. The author also repeatedly emphasized in the comment area that the heroine is a blessed person. WTF??? The male protagonist's revenge is also inexplicable. Instead of revenge, he wants to avenge the enemy who abandoned his daughter since childhood and has no relationship other than blood? Do you have any diseases? I even think it is more reasonable for him to take revenge on his goddaughter Zhang Mumu than to take revenge on the heroine? And the hero actually did nothing while the heroine was in prison for five years. Aren't you blinded by hatred? Isn't it true that for revenge, you can even send your childhood sweetheart and beloved heroine to prison, and send away your own son? You don't care about your enemies? When the heroine is released from prison, the hero immediately thinks of his revenge. It turns out that it was the heroine who killed your whole family. Otherwise, can anyone explain to me why the hero only remembers revenge when he sees the heroine? In the end, he tortures the heroine until there is nothing more to torture. Just say that the hero has let go of his past hatred. WOC, you caught the heroine and attacked her, right? The heroine of "The Thing in the Palm" is much more miserable than the heroine of this novel, and the male protagonist is also much scumbag, but that doesn't stop me from thinking that they wrote it well. The problem with this novel is that it is poorly written. Don't mention the three views when reading the article, but at least the basic logic must be reasonable. The plot arrangement of the male protagonist has no ability or power to deal with the real enemy and can only take revenge on the female protagonist who is the best to bully. Then just create a selfish, dark, cowardly and incompetent male protagonist, but it should be written about how powerful, strong, tolerant and loving the female protagonist is. Isn't this against the law? Looking at the whole article, every plot in this article is for the purpose of abusing the female protagonist. 1. Betrayed in love, the male protagonist marries the female partner for no reason, and the son is unloved. It is heart-breaking. 2. After being released from prison and becoming a mistress, his dignity is trampled. 3. In jail, the future is ruined. 4. Pregnant with the second child and aborted, body abuse, etc. In short, it is a 360-degree package of heart-abuse and body-abuse without any blind spots. If this is a story about abusing the female protagonist, and other characters can be ignored, the author's arrangement would be much more reasonable. For example, why does the male protagonist marry a female protagonist? Because the female protagonist needs to abuse her heart, why should the female protagonist be put in jail instead of directly retaliating against the female protagonist? Because the female protagonist has to be abused physically. Whenever I feel like what the hell is written here, I think it feels more normal.

In fact, the best ending of this article is that Yan dies and Lin and Xu go abroad. Sometimes mistakes cannot be made up for. Making a mistake is a mistake. It is difficult to repair a broken mirror. Instead, some regrets are the real life.

After reading this article, although the ending is he, I still can't accept the self-righteous love of the male protagonist. How can he be forgiven after hurting the female protagonist so deeply and letting the female protagonist misunderstand him all the time? Although I have no emotional agility, I still particularly hate the fact that the male protagonist who claims to love the female protagonist is having an affair with another woman. The key is that he still has a strong possessive desire for the female protagonist. This is simply a living scumbag. He tortures me to death.

The bad guys are all alive and well. Is this the hero's revenge plan?

I have read a lot of articles in Jinjiang, but this is the first time I have left a message. I am now in my fourth year, and I started reading romance novels in junior high school. Now, I have some experience in romance novels. Sometimes when I see something that is poorly written or thunderous, I will think that my own plot and other ideas are much better than the author's. But when I really wanted to write something, I had been imagining it for more than half a year and couldn't get it started. Only then did I really admire the author who could write words. No matter if it was naive or bad writing, at least he could write it. As a woman who is married and has children, I really feel that the author's writing is very real, good and calm. The reality is like this. Even the protagonist and the author of the plot in the article are beautified. The reality is more bloody and unacceptable than the novel, but it exists so reasonably. One hundred people have thousands of hobbies. You respect me and I respect you. This is why the world is so diverse and beautiful, and it is the same in novels. I don't say bad things about others, because I feel that no matter what, he has worked hard and paid, so he deserves respect. Even if a novel does something as outrageous as having the protagonist have a threesome, I can only think that the world is full of wonders, and its existence has opened my eyes. But I won't deliberately ask the author to correct or change it back, because the world or the novel has another possibility, how good it is. So I don't look, move away, rather than attack the author. I sincerely hope that the author maintains this calm and realistic style, and I also sincerely hope that romance novels will be more diverse and interesting.

Even though I was heartbroken, I finished reading it. Don't join the noble party, the male protagonist is too scumbag

After reading it, I feel that the author can describe Yan Xunzhou's psychological activities in more detail, otherwise it will be difficult for people to understand some of his behaviors, because he seems to have always been able to deal with the heroine with ease, and some words are not explained at all. Another example is revenge. My feeling is that he suddenly became interested after meeting Zhang, but in fact Zhang is not that important in that revenge. At least from the previous plot, I don't think it is important enough to give up on Xiao Huo. She is just someone close to the enemy. The purpose of marrying her and the final result are. This part is too casually mentioned, so it is difficult to understand. Overall, I quite like Yan. In fact, his and Su Yinsheng's life experiences are somewhat similar. They both had their families collapse when they were in their best years, and they both worked hard to make a fortune on their own. Compared to Su's scum, Yan has an extra element of revenge to let down Xiao Huo, which makes people feel a little better.

I'm very disappointed. I used to like this article very much and wrote a long review, but later I stopped reading it because of the abuse. I couldn't help but finish reading it today. Really disappointed. It's not that the author's writing is not good, but I think some crimes cannot be treated as if they never happened. I won't talk about the revenge in the article. The heroine's imprisonment is indeed not caused by the scumbag. I only want to say one thing, is it okay to love someone just because you love them? If you love someone, you can use her only child to force her to have sex with you? Does it mean that as long as she sacrifices her life to save a woman, she must marry a criminal? I have always thought that the heroine is a very independent and self-reliant woman. Does she love scumbag men? I believe it is love. But will she unprincipledly forgive the man who violates her will again and again, □□, □□, □□ her? Will you end up marrying such a person just because you have a son?

I like this book very much >3<

What a scumbag male protagonist, I don't understand what's going on in his head? I like Dongdong Junjun and these two cute guys. It would be great if the heroine and Li Tang were together. I think Li Tang is a real man compared to Yan Xunzhou.