Tomb Raiders' Tales

>^<Wow! Great!

I appreciate the masterpiece and will continue to pay attention.

Wow wow, I didn't expect to see another update, but I still like these two, I must be happy.

It's been so hard waiting for your extra episode. Woohoo!

It's been so hard waiting for your extra episode. Woohoo!

The reality of a greedy human heart and a bottomless pit of desire is far more complicated and terrifying than those ancient tombs that have been silent for thousands of years. For money, wealth, and immortality, they embarked on a journey of robbing tombs. If the chapters before Xiao Yao's tomb robbery were simplified, it would actually be a very exciting article. From the first time I met Mu Yu, I had already guessed that he had known Xiao Yao for a long time, but I never thought that he would be an ancient person who lived for thousands of years, silently walking on the road to find and protect the heroine for life after life. By the Sansheng Pond and the Forgotten River Stone, how did he watch Xiao Yao fall into reincarnation in the next life? The further back Mu Yu looked, the stronger his feelings for Xiao Yao became. Such hot eyes and such gentle protection reflected Mu Yu's extraordinary feelings for Xiao Yao. Every adventure in the ancient tomb, every life and death crisis, were all saved because of Mu Yu's company. From that time on, I began to doubt Mu Yu's identity. Every time he was seriously injured, he would be healed in a short time. I have to admit that his self-healing ability is very powerful. Perhaps it was because the early chapters were too slow, so when it came to the exciting parts later on, the description of the plot was sped up, and many things were not explained very clearly. For example, I am very curious about how Bai Lang died as an immortal body, and what exactly Mu Yu experienced in the Jade Dragon Snow Mountain in the past three years. Does coming back this time mean that he is already a normal body, not an ancient person? For another example, the author did not explain the endings of Lao Gui, Xu Ziang and others in detail. Fortunately, I was able to see a happy ending when I finished reading the novel in three days. They have missed each other in life after life, but in this life, they finally did not miss each other's love again. Mu Shou sent his important message, and the fishermen's songs inspired Chu Ci. I have to say that the name Muyu is very meaningful, not to mention that it was given to him by Xiao Yao in his previous life. Like a sacred ritual, from then on, Mu Yu only followed the girl. I originally thought that Xu Ziang would be the male partner who likes Xiao Yao. After all, they were engaged, but fortunately, no outsiders interfered in the relationship between Mu Yu and Xiao Yao. Uh... But one thing I would like to mention is that there are many typos in the text, such as sana and nana. Most of these words are used incorrectly. There are also extreme dangers in Chapter 71, which should be put in danger. It is undeniable that Da Da's story about tomb robbing is quite moving, but I feel that it lacks a thrilling feeling, especially the first time when robbing a tomb, it seemed slow. But after reading it, I really immersed myself in it. In fact, compared to the story of tomb robbery, I prefer to describe the love story of the man and woman buried together in the tomb, with murals and different songs of love, hate and separation. I think the most romantic thing is that after death, the two of them are buried together and don't have to worry about the world anymore. It's a pity that those tomb robbers broke that peace. Just like when Xiao Yao robbed a tomb for the first time, he couldn't bear to see such a joint burial scene. In fact, I also felt the same when I saw the great description. If there had been no intrusion by tomb robbers, perhaps the man and woman in the coffin could have their fingers intertwined peacefully forever, instead of turning into a pile of withered bones. Because it is a first-person novel, there is a lot of description of the psychological activities of the female protagonist Xiao Yao, which makes Mu Yu's sense of existence as the male protagonist relatively weak. But I really liked the conversation between the two of them at night when Mu Yu went to Xiao Yao's house after they came back from Tibet. It can be seen that Mu Yu is a very simple-minded person. Although they are just some simple words of love, they are the most touching. The ending feels unfinished. I wonder when we can have some extra episodes for Xiao Yao and Mu Yu?

Haha, I was just talking about why it was finished in just one day. I guess the tomb robbing is gone. But it doesn't matter. When writing, you have to follow your heart. It's not good to force yourself. I especially admire these people who write novels. They have such rich imagination and strong logical relationships. If you keep working hard, I will come to follow you. But your writing has really improved a lot! When writing again, pay more attention to the details, enrich the details, and strengthen the logical relationship. For example, the relationship between the last tomb robbery in Tibet and the protagonist is not clearly explained. I think there must be a reason. Please strengthen the description of such details and write well. You are great.

Muyu is indeed a good man, wuwu, I want one too.

Hey, we can't get married on Children's Day. Haha, I really want to see their next grave.

Mu Yu is such a good man, woo woo, my god!