A country boy accidentally discovers a magical space treasure. Faced with a world blanketed in snow, he uses his pocket dimension to live a life without want. But this simple, honest boy attracts a somewhat scheming city wolf. In the end, with his excellent cooking and sincere heart, he completely wins the city wolf over.
This story is a little slow to get going, and the main character is the bottom. There won't be too many recipes, since this isn't a food story after all. The apocalypse here is an ice age, with no zombies or supernatural powers. The author is a scaredy-cat, so that's just how it is. I tend to write chapters in advance, so updates are reliable. Feel free to add it to your favorites.
This is my first time writing a story, so if you want to criticize it, please do so elsewhere. Suggestions are welcome.
Thanks to Zhu Bing for making the cover. I love it.
I found so many plot holes, what do I do? Sob sob. The author's glass heart can't take the hits. I'm dizzy.
I really can't stand it anymore. First of all, I told you to buy solar energy. After Chapter N, I didn't tell you whether you bought it or not. Then there were three of them for no reason. They were not used for space. It was written in a sloppy way. Secondly, when everyone is eating glutinous rice, you kill pork and distribute the meat everywhere. Others will not thank you. They will only say that it is the end of the world, and this idiot still distributes the meat to us. One word: Biao. Two words: Tai Biao! Is it childishness or the Virgin White Lotus? Is the author writing conjecture or is it a naive novice? The whole article was written in a procrastinating manner, like a primary school student writing an essay with an outline, but there is no backbone of the article here. This article is just written wherever it comes to mind. That is called a random fabrication. Didn't the author read other people's post-apocalyptic beauty farming articles??? Let's not talk about comparing yourself with others. At least you can explain one thing clearly, what about this poor child, a child in the mountains who has never seen the world, etc. Are you talking about the Chinese version of the little match girl? This article is so poorly written.
I think the author's writing is a bit too much. What is a high school level, so I don't know those characters? Is that seal script? Is it still wildly cursive or something? Most traditional Chinese high school graduates can understand it, right? How complex characters are used in a plaque? High schools are divided into science and liberal arts. Are all science subjects illiterate?
I don't understand why Xiaoshou's family came to the city. The countryside should be safer. Does Xiaoshou want to burn the furniture after the power supply and heating are stopped?,,,,,
Why doesn't Mao go home? He won't be able to come back if he's too late, ps (Gong takes himself too seriously)
Can it be streamlined? There is so much nonsense, where is the plot progression? To be honest, can such a level be on the home page?! One has to doubt the author's level in Jinjiang.
Can it be streamlined? There is so much nonsense, where is the plot progression?
Haven't you realized the ice season is coming?
When I saw the copy, I suddenly thought of the American blockbuster The Day After Tomorrow, and I hope that the author can show readers a good article with a grand apocalyptic background just like that movie.
Sprinkle flowers~The author's writing is good~ But looking at it so far, I always feel that it lacks a little passion... For example, I don't actually experience the sense of crisis in the end of the world. On the contrary, it is more like a love farming novel. It has been 23 chapters so far... Well, it's not bad. It's just that I was attracted by the topic of the end of the world. It feels like there is a gap between the crisis, disaster, companionship, survival, etc. That I expected to feel. At first, I thought it was because the plot has not been developed yet, but it seems that it is not the direction of the style. The above is just my own thoughts and personal preferences. I just want to keep it as a souvenir and make up for it. The author has an outline and will continue to work hard. Come on.
I don't know if you missed it, but is there any mention of whether other living people can be brought into the space?