Reborn: Kitchen Adventures

It's all last~~I still have to torture you~~~It's so unkind~~~In the end, I even designed a woman to come out and disgust the servant

After reading the author's two articles, I would like to point out three shortcomings of the author: The biggest problem is that there are too many typos... I hope the author can carefully catch the bugs after finishing writing. 2. Some sentences are connected very strangely and do not read smoothly. I will not list them specifically. Typing on the Claw machine is not good. 3. In this chapter, Xiao Gong gives Xiao Shou a peeled pineapple to eat. Pineapple is a fat substance and can easily get angry after eating it. I believe that Xiao Gong, as a person who started working in a small restaurant, will not be so ignorant. However, author, the themes of your articles are relatively novel and the plots are not bad. Please support me~

Catch bugs~nurturing cannot be ignored, it should be Yang Yu We need to rewrite him properly, it should be thanks

Seeing their eyes shrinking more and more, it must be that they are vulgar

I don't know if it's because the author wrote another couple first, but the protagonist who was supposed to be the protagonist in this book was... Although I don't hate the series, I always feel that this article is a bit annoying... CP is obviously very cute and the subject matter is very good. I read the copy and decided to read it, but it seemed to be broken or something. Well, let me give you a suggestion. You can pay attention to this aspect in the future, because there are several places where I really feel like crying because my abuse point is low... (First hold the pot lid and float away...)

I also think it's too hasty and I don't like it at all~ These are two men and one is a very manly ex-soldier. He should explain his illness.

Gu Liang should also pay attention to typos. The protagonist's name was wrongly typed several times before and the name that should be the brother's name was typed as the younger brother...

The ending was sudden, Xiao Shoudi's mental illness has not been resolved yet

It's getting more and more bloody and I can't stand it anymore.

Xiaobai... Are you really here to make soy sauce?... You actually received a box lunch in your last appearance...