Beside the Weiyang Pool, in the waters of eternal life, two flowers bloom from a single stem.
On the road to the Yellow Springs, he rescued her from the River of Forgetfulness.
He said, "I've tended this immortal herb for a thousand years, and now at last it has bloomed and borne fruit. If it can't be used as medicine, I may as well keep it by my side."
But she said, "A moment's obsession led to a terrible mistake. To have you by my side in this life is enough. Even if I must eventually be reduced to ashes, I have no regrets."
The Ninth Heaven Stone shattered, the seal cracked, and the Demon God emerged in a single day, bringing ruin to all living things.
Should they roam the Three Realms, or remain confined to one corner of the world? Which is righteous, which is evil? Which is right, and which is wrong?
To save all living beings but lose her would make it all rather dull.
Bound together as twin souls, their fate began and ended. Should they stay, or should they go?
She tilted her head and asked, "I don't look as good as I did before. Could you change me into something else?"
But he thought to himself, "The next hundred lives won't look as good as this one. I must make sure to keep her safe."
And so, at the foot of the mountain, at the southern end of the city,
there was a shop with medicine but no prescriptions, and a physician named Su Mo.
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I love this kind of supernatural and fantasy romance novel!
It seems a bit rushed later on, but that doesn't stop me from liking this article!
In fact, it is a bit general. Su Mo is like a breeze, neither arrogant nor impetuous. He works and talks quietly, and is also quiet to the heroine. There is no complex expression or contemplation like in some stories. Although I regret that he is tepid, I feel that it is just right. I hate those long emotional descriptions. Your clear water drifting willow leaves make me want to take a closer look at this person. Simply examine this person instead of the story. In other words, I am literary... Embarrassing I feel a little melancholy when I see this, so please forgive me for being such a pretentious neurotic. I will bookmark it and read it next time. I want to read it seriously, not just to kill time~
By the way, would it be better if some clues of the main plot could occasionally be interspersed in the short story? Have you ever felt that the faces of passers-by are blurry? At present, the one that impressed me the most is the vixen. I feel that she is the one with the most outstanding personality. The others are blurry. Then the scene about the sparrow who is reading something is forced out is more vivid. Maybe it is also because of the long time interval when I watched it. Hey - -
Although this article has been finished and I don't know what's next, I always feel that I can get business in other ways, not through customers who come to my door, but by chance encounters when I go out, or because I happen to be interested and just shamelessly join in. In short, the way the story appears can be richer or more clever. I always feel that it is a bit late to say this. I'm sorry, I will read it at the same time next time~~ T T
Emma, what's wrong with me? When I saw the carp picture, I thought of Chang'an Fantasy Night. I always felt that a fairy would come out of that guy. By the way, I recommend Chang'an Fantasy Night. I liked it when I first read it. I thought it was really a magical and romantic imagination. Now I feel the same way when I read your article. Although I am afraid of reading horror stories, do you really not consider a horror plot in the story? ?
I think the most outstanding part of the article is the connection of stories. I didn't feel it in the first story, but I have a clear feeling here. The connection between the big story and the small story is the big story, but it is not abrupt at all. Those connection points are the present and fragments of the past. It feels like a bracelet, with big beads and small beads alternating to form a bead string. It is a very beautiful technique and very clever! Praise!
Is it finished? Mark it first and then read it carefully when you have time. Congratulations, congratulations~ I won't say anything because I haven't finished reading. Anyway, congratulations \\(^o^)/~
No matter what, perseverance is victory!
It should be easier next time!
Come on!
It's finally over! ! !
Ahem. . . Oops, you praise me in such a big way, I feel embarrassed to criticize you! ! !
However, good medicine tastes bitter and good advice offends the ears, but I still have to say it! !
Ending. . . It's a bit snake-tailed
Why did Yao Ji return to her position so easily? . . Then why didn't you get together earlier? . .
Do gods also have to go through such pain to give birth? Shouldn't it be better to lay an egg and then hatch it? . . .
After watching the ending, I can say it in one word. It's a story of reconciliation. . .
The dividing line at the end of the criticism
It suddenly occurred to me that for Ah Jiu, he really prefers Yao Ji who has no memory of Jinhua. . .
Extra story for kids. . . ?
I love this kind of supernatural and fantasy romance novel!
It seems a bit rushed later on, but that doesn't stop me from liking this article!
In fact, it is a bit general. Su Mo is like a breeze, neither arrogant nor impetuous. He works and talks quietly, and is also quiet to the heroine. There is no complex expression or contemplation like in some stories. Although I regret that he is tepid, I feel that it is just right. I hate those long emotional descriptions. Your clear water drifting willow leaves make me want to take a closer look at this person. Simply examine this person instead of the story. In other words, I am literary... Embarrassing I feel a little melancholy when I see this, so please forgive me for being such a pretentious neurotic. I will bookmark it and read it next time. I want to read it seriously, not just to kill time~
By the way, would it be better if some clues of the main plot could occasionally be interspersed in the short story? Have you ever felt that the faces of passers-by are blurry? At present, the one that impressed me the most is the vixen. I feel that she is the one with the most outstanding personality. The others are blurry. Then the scene about the sparrow who is reading something is forced out is more vivid. Maybe it is also because of the long time interval when I watched it. Hey - -
Although this article has been finished and I don't know what's next, I always feel that I can get business in other ways, not through customers who come to my door, but by chance encounters when I go out, or because I happen to be interested and just shamelessly join in. In short, the way the story appears can be richer or more clever. I always feel that it is a bit late to say this. I'm sorry, I will read it at the same time next time~~ T T
Emma, what's wrong with me? When I saw the carp picture, I thought of Chang'an Fantasy Night. I always felt that a fairy would come out of that guy. By the way, I recommend Chang'an Fantasy Night. I liked it when I first read it. I thought it was really a magical and romantic imagination. Now I feel the same way when I read your article. Although I am afraid of reading horror stories, do you really not consider a horror plot in the story? ?
I think the most outstanding part of the article is the connection of stories. I didn't feel it in the first story, but I have a clear feeling here. The connection between the big story and the small story is the big story, but it is not abrupt at all. Those connection points are the present and fragments of the past. It feels like a bracelet, with big beads and small beads alternating to form a bead string. It is a very beautiful technique and very clever! Praise!
Is it finished? Mark it first and then read it carefully when you have time. Congratulations, congratulations~ I won't say anything because I haven't finished reading. Anyway, congratulations \\(^o^)/~
No matter what, perseverance is victory! It should be easier next time! Come on!
It's finally over! ! ! Ahem. . . Oops, you praise me in such a big way, I feel embarrassed to criticize you! ! ! However, good medicine tastes bitter and good advice offends the ears, but I still have to say it! ! Ending. . . It's a bit snake-tailed Why did Yao Ji return to her position so easily? . . Then why didn't you get together earlier? . . Do gods also have to go through such pain to give birth? Shouldn't it be better to lay an egg and then hatch it? . . . After watching the ending, I can say it in one word. It's a story of reconciliation. . . The dividing line at the end of the criticism It suddenly occurred to me that for Ah Jiu, he really prefers Yao Ji who has no memory of Jinhua. . . Extra story for kids. . . ?