Shattered Shadows (GL)

Zhuda, you are an author recommended to me by a friend, so in fact, I was not your reader originally. Thank you for taking the time to read my article carefully and carefully type out the first long comment on my article. Thank you for so many kind words. A thousand readers are a thousand Hamlets. I am personally very attracted by your short essays, such as "The Burning of Fate", "I Love You Maybe You Know" and the first chapter of "Shattered Shadows". I see that you have written so many long novels, and my first impression is that it is not easy. Writing is very hard. Let's get back to the subject, I'm so embarrassed to start criticizing your article! Each author has a different style and different areas of expertise. I feel that your writing is good at writing tragedy. I've also read some of your novels, and I still feel the same way. Let's talk about "The Burning of Destiny" first Your thinking is very divergent and stream-of-consciousness. Very Gemini, haha. How can I say this? Sometimes it will bring a magical touch to your writing, and sometimes it will blur the logic and sense of hierarchy. However, this is not a big problem in essays or very short stories. It is OK to capture a certain theme, maybe just one sentence. The writing for "I Love You Maybe You Know" is brilliant. This is not considered copywriting, it can be said to be a short poem. In the solemnity of this darkness, say: I love you. Thank you for stunning my time, loving you is my most beautiful desolation. Damn, you have great potential in writing poetry. The artistic conception of these two short sentences is profound and wonderful. This sentence must be in the context of tragedy, so I generally cannot write such sentences, eh eh eh, because I always happily throw away my vulgar and shocking sentences, leaving the tragic and beautiful sentences far behind. The teacher-student story is really loving, but in this story, it's more about true feelings rather than plot creation. However, I personally think Zhuda's advantage is your writing style. When I write and read articles, I have a strong sense of pictures. Good sentences will jump out of the picture and artistic conception, and they even have music and narration notes. (But my own writing can't keep up with the pictures in my mind yet) "I really I don't know what posture to take to rest." In one sentence, he wrote a picture of tossing and turning, as well as various other mental scenes, such as sitting under a lamp, picking up a pen and putting it down, lying down and sitting up again. . . Wait, wait, wait, the picture is full of feeling and very heart-wrenching. "When I think of you, my heart is calm. When I think of you, the night is quiet. Even if those empty desolations surround me as always, because I am thinking of you, I won't be so helpless and afraid when facing them." These sentences vividly and exquisitely portray a protagonist who is immersed in his own world, who is gloomy, sensitive, susceptible, contradictory, decadent, and has low self-esteem, and who carefully holds the one he loves. Only people with the above characteristics can sigh like this. "That's it, I have nothing but words That's it, there's nothing I can do except miss you I don't mind my nothingness, but please forgive my powerlessness In fact, I'm also afraid that one day, I won't even be worthy of thinking about you." I think maybe when Zhuzi wrote this article, he didn't analyze too much deliberately and wrote more casually. But the words are even more moving. The beauty of tragedy is also very moving. It is the combination of beauty and regret. Only such regret is more eye-catching, making people sigh, recall and reminisce. Looking forward to a great tragedy. Finally, let me talk about the first chapter of "Broken Shadows" that I really like. Why I like it is just for the sense of pictures under the words. I believe that the best writing is always simple and well-rounded. Of course, what's more important in a novel is the plot, rhythm, and characterization, rather than the writing style. However, writing is like dazzling jewelry. As long as it lights up for a moment, the added brilliance is so moving. Ah, it's too far off topic. "Perhaps the previous life was too grand Therefore, there is so much more sadness now. I poured out all my years of emotion It also squandered my incompleteness every night Looking at you from afar I forced back tears from the corners of my eyes." I love this part so much. I can imagine a tragic story and cry!,,,, Yeah, yeah, that's a lot of verbosity. In short, the central idea is, I like your writing style and I like your writing of tragedies. Then, as a suggestion, I suggest you put your true feelings into it and try to write it as truthfully as possible. Because in a tragedy, if the characters' actions are illogical, or have inconsistent personalities, and if they don't look real, the drama will definitely happen! Then just. . . There is no more. Come on Zhuda! I also want to learn from Zhuda's diligence! Damn it! (Uh, beat me to death for being cute)

I've finished reading it, it's a very good article.

The story is over, but life goes on. Open your heart to welcome a better tomorrow. Tomorrow may be windy or rainy, but you should believe that it will always be sunny after tomorrow.

Suddenly I feel like I want to cry with you

I don't dare to go in and read the article. You know, I feel distressed.

I don't dare to go in and read the article. I feel distressed.

The process is very bumpy, but the ending is beautiful. Even though life is not what you want, you still have to smile and look at the future. The next stop will be more exciting.

My heart is relatively fragile and cannot withstand the devastation of tragedy, so I still stopped watching...

This article gives people an indescribable feeling. The author's writing style is very good!

The more I write, the better I get. . . . Rome was not built in a day.