This is a story about a modern girl who transmigrates into the world of The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber and falls in love with Song Qingshu. The author is terrible at writing blurbs and doesn't know what else to say, so just read the story.
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This story will enter VIP tomorrow, May 14. There will be three updates that day, and it will become VIP-only starting from chapter 40. If you've already read those chapters, please remember not to buy them again. Thank you for your support over the past while. Feng Xing can only promise to give it my all from here on out.
Lately, I've seen a lot of reader comments saying that our values are too different. There's something I need to make clear. First of all, this is a fanfiction, not an original story. Though the story includes a little character psychology and draws on the original for reference, it is based on neither the version of The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber starring Ng Kai Wah, nor the one starring Alec Su, nor the one starring Deng Chao.
Second, about the heroine's name: I said in an earlier reply that the name isn't very good, and I don't like it either. But when she comes of age, Zhang Sanfeng will give her a courtesy name. "Xue Wu" is only temporary, not permanent.
Finally, although the blurb says this story involves cultivation, since it's a fanfiction of The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber, the focus will still be on the martial world. The stories to come will all be about the martial world, and cultivation is just a transitional element.
Lastly, thank you all for paying attention to this story, whatever your comments may be. Thank you.
Special thanks to She Jun for the cover and Qianmian Junzi for the picture.
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I insisted on buying this article until chapter 104, and then I bought a few chapters intermittently and read the ending.
In fact, I really like fanfics with Song Qingshu as the male protagonist, and I followed this article for this reason. As for the heroine invented by the author, I actually don't care. As long as the hero is Song Qingshu, I can accept it.
It was okay at first, but I just felt that the writing was a little sluggish and the heroine's golden finger was a bit too wide. Then I got to the setting of cultivating immortals. . . . Although the author said that he likes the characters he recognizes to last for a long time, he still feels that the setting of martial arts fandom + immortality is ridiculous. But for Song Qingshu, this can be ignored.
By the time we got to Chapter 104, I really couldn't stand the way the author treated all readers as mentally retarded. Whenever a character seems to say something that is very connotative, thoughtful, and roundabout, it will be followed by an explanation from God's perspective, or someone else will explain the meaning of what he just said. Every time this method is used, a simple plot will be written in three or four pictures, and there will be a lot of meaningless dialogue.
Another thing that I can't stand is the excessive blackening of Miexu and Zhou Zhiruo. In the original work, Miejie is just self-willed and jealous of evil, but she is definitely not a villain for her own selfish desires; Zhou Zhiruo's viciousness is caused by her love that she cannot get, her master's dying instructions, and the humiliation and harm that Zhang Wuji and Zhao Min jointly inflicted on her. She is not a character like White Lotus. However, the author's description of these two people is just like a villainous duo. The setting that they are stupid and think others are stupid is really contrary to the original work, and fan fiction should not be like this. . . . .
Zhao Min is one of the smartest heroines in Jin Yong's works. Although I don't like her, and there are many people who criticize her in fan fiction, the author has completely weakened her. The heroine and others are no longer on the same level as her. What is there to fight about? The plot in the original works is then processed by the author into his own article, as if the giant is looking down on the dwarf. The gap is too big. When a person has absolute strength, he will not care about small tricks. People with absolute strength like to use force to overcome cleverness, so why waste time on second thoughts.
The heroine and others have already become immortals, and they still pretend to fight with Zhao Min, and show weakness and pretend to be captured. Is it necessary? It feels like playing tricks on others. Don't say that there is a country behind Zhao Min. The background of the original work is the end of the Yuan Dynasty. . . . The imperial power is already unstable, and the author has given Wudang a golden finger to cultivate immortality. The country and everything else are just a cloud, okay? !
I really feel that the author's writing skills still need to be improved.
After seeing this, I thought eh
Unfeeling love is not scary. What is scary is that when you show unfeeling love, it will also affect innocent people.
Will there be more after these three extra episodes?
I forgot to ask. Are there any new pitfalls? If so, what kind of pitfalls are there? Do you have links?
It's over as soon as I come back. I'm sorry for you, but I'll make it up as soon as possible. Don't be angry. Haha, I'm just being cute and smoothing it for you.
It can be said that there is a clear understanding. It can also be said that the foreshadowing you arranged is clearly written. We can all guess it, which also proves that we have read it carefully. As for the other things, there is no need to worry about it. We don't know if we are watching it. I will come back now and eat the fattened food before the end of the term to replenish my brain.
It's the last week of class, and then there's the final exam. Now that I'm done, come over and take a walk to get some spiritual food.
It's not very bland, it's just basically the same as the first few months of pregnancy.
Could it be that she is pregnant? I am always sentimental and lethargic. Is it really possible that I am pregnant? !
I insisted on buying this article until chapter 104, and then I bought a few chapters intermittently and read the ending. In fact, I really like fanfics with Song Qingshu as the male protagonist, and I followed this article for this reason. As for the heroine invented by the author, I actually don't care. As long as the hero is Song Qingshu, I can accept it. It was okay at first, but I just felt that the writing was a little sluggish and the heroine's golden finger was a bit too wide. Then I got to the setting of cultivating immortals. . . . Although the author said that he likes the characters he recognizes to last for a long time, he still feels that the setting of martial arts fandom + immortality is ridiculous. But for Song Qingshu, this can be ignored. By the time we got to Chapter 104, I really couldn't stand the way the author treated all readers as mentally retarded. Whenever a character seems to say something that is very connotative, thoughtful, and roundabout, it will be followed by an explanation from God's perspective, or someone else will explain the meaning of what he just said. Every time this method is used, a simple plot will be written in three or four pictures, and there will be a lot of meaningless dialogue. Another thing that I can't stand is the excessive blackening of Miexu and Zhou Zhiruo. In the original work, Miejie is just self-willed and jealous of evil, but she is definitely not a villain for her own selfish desires; Zhou Zhiruo's viciousness is caused by her love that she cannot get, her master's dying instructions, and the humiliation and harm that Zhang Wuji and Zhao Min jointly inflicted on her. She is not a character like White Lotus. However, the author's description of these two people is just like a villainous duo. The setting that they are stupid and think others are stupid is really contrary to the original work, and fan fiction should not be like this. . . . . Zhao Min is one of the smartest heroines in Jin Yong's works. Although I don't like her, and there are many people who criticize her in fan fiction, the author has completely weakened her. The heroine and others are no longer on the same level as her. What is there to fight about? The plot in the original works is then processed by the author into his own article, as if the giant is looking down on the dwarf. The gap is too big. When a person has absolute strength, he will not care about small tricks. People with absolute strength like to use force to overcome cleverness, so why waste time on second thoughts. The heroine and others have already become immortals, and they still pretend to fight with Zhao Min, and show weakness and pretend to be captured. Is it necessary? It feels like playing tricks on others. Don't say that there is a country behind Zhao Min. The background of the original work is the end of the Yuan Dynasty. . . . The imperial power is already unstable, and the author has given Wudang a golden finger to cultivate immortality. The country and everything else are just a cloud, okay? ! I really feel that the author's writing skills still need to be improved.
After seeing this, I thought eh
Unfeeling love is not scary. What is scary is that when you show unfeeling love, it will also affect innocent people.
Will there be more after these three extra episodes?
I forgot to ask. Are there any new pitfalls? If so, what kind of pitfalls are there? Do you have links?
It's over as soon as I come back. I'm sorry for you, but I'll make it up as soon as possible. Don't be angry. Haha, I'm just being cute and smoothing it for you.
It can be said that there is a clear understanding. It can also be said that the foreshadowing you arranged is clearly written. We can all guess it, which also proves that we have read it carefully. As for the other things, there is no need to worry about it. We don't know if we are watching it. I will come back now and eat the fattened food before the end of the term to replenish my brain.
It's the last week of class, and then there's the final exam. Now that I'm done, come over and take a walk to get some spiritual food.
It's not very bland, it's just basically the same as the first few months of pregnancy.
Could it be that she is pregnant? I am always sentimental and lethargic. Is it really possible that I am pregnant? !