This is my first story, and my writing is pretty average. Please feel free to criticize and offer advice.
This story has a slight fantasy element and a lighthearted style. The heroine isn't all-powerful, and hopefully she isn't too much of a Mary Sue. (Probably... = =)
The story is mainly about how the Lord tricks, coaxes, and sneaks the heroine back home.
I think that's all I have to say. I'll start posting now.
Which one should be the heroine? Leave a comment.
This picture looks great: http://pic4.nipic.com/20090810/2105517_194414038_2.jpg
I really liked it, but the author insisted on combining two books together, which made me confused and annoyed.
We are finally back to the main plot, which is gratifying.
Meeting parents = Xiaoran was bought
Love these two chapters so much
When will this article be finished? I want to watch the drama between Xiao Ran and the Master.
Both articles are very nice~Sahua~In fact, you don't need any marking tips... You will know what is written after reading the first line. They are the same. It would be troublesome to mark them╭(╯ε╰)╮
Can you separate the two articles? It's not comfortable to read them together at all, it's a mess!!!!
Sprinkle flowers~Spread flowers~The author, please come on ↖(^ω^)↗The writing is very good~ Meow (>^ω^<)
I really like this little article inserted by the author *^O^* Good luck to the author↖(^ω^)↗...
Dear, could you please indicate in each chapter which chapter is the update of happiness and which chapter is the update of Suizhuye?