The Nine Tribes: A Prequel

IMHO, the story is still very watchable and the suspense is well set up. However, the language is a little plain, and there is a slight suspicion of reporting a running account... Maybe it's because I prefer gorgeous sentences, and since I'm using the first person, I might as well add a little more psychological description.

I just need to update it soon~

I originally wanted to stop it, but when I heard your encouragement, I was so moved that tears filled my eyes. I decided to focus on loading this article, and I can stop for the other one. . . .

Again, keep up the good work! The article is really good, I need to update it more!

I'm here~ Da Dewen said it well~ Come on!

Why doesn't anyone give me any advice?