Return (Complete Short Story | Related to Oshitari)

A little digression first. The name Chizuru reminds me of Hakuouki TUT In the end, the Shinsengumi were especially... Come back, Yossi! Wei Ke's experience is very rich, the plot arrangement is very explosive, the heroine's personality is very prominent, and overall the creation is very successful~ But in comparison, the characters of the male protagonists are... Not very outstanding... Another point is that the problem is more prominent. TUT don't hit me... I feel that some of the descriptions of daily life are not authentic enough... And the research on Renzu is not thorough enough... It looks a bit... Strange. That's all. Don't hit me!

I think 35 square meters is a bit unbearable for OJZ. But otherwise, the article is very touching and the realism is very strong. I like his action of resting his chin on the heroine's shoulder!

It's a bit hard to imagine that life will be difficult for him as an adult. He always feels that the aura of genius can accompany him throughout his life. He is also a person destined to rise to the top.

It's great w, but the twist is too fast. The atmosphere changes so quickly, but the description of the tolerance and inferiority complex is really great.

I prefer Ninzu and Chizuru to the pair of Atobe and Rie. Maybe their love and marriage are realistic enough. At the beginning of the article, the exhaustion of running around to evaluate professional titles reminded me of the situation when my father was an adult when I was a child. For doctors, seniority is really the only criterion for promotion or other criteria. The cruel reality is that if the qualifications are not enough, doctors who have just entered the hospital can really only work alongside the attending doctor. This period can range from five or six years to more than ten years. Perhaps at this time, the only thing the family can bring to my husband, who is a doctor, is unconditional waiting and quiet companionship when necessary. Chizuru did it. Perhaps she was also envious when facing Rie and Atobe, and maybe a little regretful. But she didn't complain about being patient. I admire women like this. At this time, I think the marriage between Renzu and Chizuru has entered a bottleneck, while Atobe and Lie appear as solvers. The story of the turtle is simple yet profound. Chizuru might just have the attitude of giving it a try, but luckily Renzu understood it. So everything that follows is a matter of course. To be honest, my favorite among the four characters is probably Chizuru. The other three characters more or less contrast this character's personality and behavior style. Whether it was the conversation with Li Hui or the letters with Atobe, including Renzu's later epiphany. They all created a very plump Chizuru. As for Renzu, the contrast between working hard before and trying to give his life some color later gave the article a possibility to develop. However, although "The Story of the Turtle" was shocking, it did not seem to be enough to cause Renzu's change. I personally think the progress here is a bit impatient. As for Atobe and Li E, they are very good story promoters. As supporting characters, the slightest difference is a thousand miles away. However, in Wei Ke's writing, they embellish the protagonist and the entire story very well, instead of stealing the protagonist's limelight. Finally, the article reflects reality, which is really good, at least I feel very much. End.