As a highly accomplished graduate of the Chinese department, she really shouldn’t have ended up in such a place. Before her stood row after row of low thatched huts. She couldn’t see a single stone or brick house. Maybe those houses were only a little over three meters tall. Good heavens, there was a fresh stone mill. Look at that millstone. And there was a long stone trough that looked a bit like a boat, though it wasn’t one, with a deep groove down the middle. Oh, right! She’d seen one in a book. It was used for grinding chili peppers. Good heavens, there were also huge, terrifying black water buffalo. Just look at what they’re wearing! It’s impossible to describe. It’s scorching hot, yet they’re wrapped up from head to toe. The men are all dressed like that, and the women wear trousers under their skirts, two layers of clothes...
Good grief, good grief. And just like that, she fainted, drenched in sweat from head to toe.
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The little one is pretty good. . . . . Although it is a bit short, the text is still good. There are actually many places that could be added to the plot. For example, why the male protagonist is being hunted and the environment could be described in more detail at the beginning. . . . . But overall it's still worth watching. . This is already considered a small success. Keep up the good work. .
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Why does the name Zhang Hailiang sound a bit rustic?
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It's okay, but it's a bit too simple. Come on!
It's very good. I think the story could be a little more detailed. Keep up the good work.