The leader is indeed a scumbag, but he is so handsome. I would like to give you a small suggestion. Can the author read the short story? In fact, if the author puts together several chapters, it really looks like a short story, and the number of words in each chapter is not too many. Well, actually writing a novel is quite different from writing a novel. The author Sang's words are very good both in terms of characters and plot. Everything is described well. Don't belittle yourself. But I really think it would be better to turn this article into a short film. A small suggestion, if the author Sang has his own ideas, you can ignore it. I hope there will be a sequel, but I feel a little bit unwilling to end it as it is. Can the update be faster? The number of words is not enough. I think I need to read the next chapter.
The leader is indeed a scumbag, but he is so handsome. I would like to give you a small suggestion. Can the author read the short story? In fact, if the author puts together several chapters, it really looks like a short story, and the number of words in each chapter is not too many. Well, actually writing a novel is quite different from writing a novel. The author Sang's words are very good both in terms of characters and plot. Everything is described well. Don't belittle yourself. But I really think it would be better to turn this article into a short film. A small suggestion, if the author Sang has his own ideas, you can ignore it. I hope there will be a sequel, but I feel a little bit unwilling to end it as it is. Can the update be faster? The number of words is not enough. I think I need to read the next chapter.