Let Sweetheart Fly Free

When I look at it, they were all from a few years ago?

What the author said in Chapter 10, Ness!

It's a good read, but it's only over in ten chapters. . . Not enough!

Then what, what, what, me, me, me, I just want to say that I like this article very much.

I feel that although the author's writing style is a bit rough, he must be a very gentle person.

Let me give my support first. I hope the author will not give up. I have also written a fanfic about protecting my sweetheart before (it was about four years ago = =I have been looking at the sky for so long) I have lost the outline now and haven't continued writing. I want to write but don't want to watch Guardian Sweetheart again (I stopped following Guardian Sweetheart when it was over 70 episodes ago, and I was very disappointed with the pairing). It's a bit of a pity. Those people back then were all strangers, and now I think it was just a group of naive kids writing scripts that were all dialogues. I'm pretty good, and there are some other contents. When I think about it now, I always feel like "Ah - I was so stupid when I was there". At that time, I almost devoted myself to this, and my mind was full of thoughts. If you don't mind making some comments, it's a common problem for many people. Your article has too many dialogues and too little description of other aspects. From the left side, almost all of them are quotation marks. The transitions are a bit stiff. It's much better to use a few transitional sentences than to say that school is over at noon. It's not that you can't use these, try to use them as little as possible. I hope it won't shock you too much. Your story is quite good. Would you mind making friends? Here is rice hope you don't give up