Sharing the West Window on a Rainy Night (Women Rule)

Well, it took me two nights to read it carefully. I really liked this work and had a lot of fun reading it. After reading it, I have a lot to say, so the next words may be a bit wordy, but I still want to finish what I want to say. First of all, the article is relatively fluent overall, the writing style is also very smooth, and the style is relatively simple and fresh. When reading it, you will not suddenly get angry or want to change wrong sentences and then start to get angry. This is really friendly to me, hahaha. Then, it can also be seen that the author was very careful when imagining various places, at least completely establishing details such as social customs, titles and language habits, which is the so-called "world" part of literary creation. This is much better than many so-called heroine works where the BG has been re-skinned. Then there is the issue of character design. I don't think there is a big problem with the character design in this article. I really like the good-natured heroine. The focus of character design has never been on whether it is perfect or new, but whether it is reasonable or appropriate. After all, almost all the character designs that can be thought of have been written to pieces. How can there be any new work left? It would be great to be able to write the old work well. So I think the heroine is well written. Regardless of whether it's perfect or not, it's reasonable for her to have the character she displays now under the influence of her personal experience and environment. I like it very much. As for the other characters in this article, you can also see the traces of the author's shaping in some details. The writing is really serious, awesome. However, since the article is indeed not long, some characters may not be developed enough, which is true. For example, the male protagonist? Although in such articles, the male protagonist is more of an object of desire that is stared at, a love story always requires that the logic and mood of both parties can be displayed and understood to be called a love story. (In my personal opinion) However, at this length, it still needs to be detailed and appropriate. It is enough to write it like this, and the overall character design is still comfortable. In the final analysis, those things that go up to the sky and destroy the heaven and the earth are all false, and the perfect person with both courage and courage, astonishing talent and beauty is just a pleasure to watch. There are no perfect people in real life, not at all. Even in novels, people without any weaknesses or shortcomings are quite unlovable, or boring. Finally, let's talk about the plot. The overall plot is still smooth, but it is a bit rushed. Some explanations are given too hastily. The heroine is too busy to watch day by day. Some characters are also a little too tool. If more can be written, these points should be much better. Then I will briefly talk about my personal views on the plot, that is: no one can always make the right choice, and making mistakes is also part of human behavior. The plot develops based on the choices of the characters, so as long as it is not illogical (this is not the logic of the characters, not your logic), the "unsmooth" parts of the plot are also normal parts of the plot, and there is nothing to worry about. Finally, I will add a value. The unpleasant parts of the plot are actually the interesting parts of the plot, at least the necessary parts. The defective parts of the characters will also become the delicious parts of the characters, at least the parts that are not boring. There is never anything perfect. Even if perfection does exist, it is no different from having no merit. It's the same in reality. It's okay if things don't go your way occasionally. People are only interesting if they are imperfect. There are all kinds of people and things, and that's great fun. Anyway, I have a lot to talk about when I have nothing to do, but I would also like to say more about the works I like. I feel that I am quite in tune with the author and the tone of this work. I also have many small problems in the author's writing. I will try to correct them slowly. Finally, I wish the author good luck in his work and happy writing. Anyway, I enjoyed watching it.

It's a bit depressing to watch. Jiang Qingfeng had been confused for two lifetimes. Although everything became clear later, the plot was so heartbreaking. Lin Xiang has no other merits except his true love for the heroine. Not to mention his family background, talents and appearance, he has a weak personality and no independent opinion, and is like a dodder. To be honest, I don't dislike it, but I don't like it either. Jiang Qingfeng, yes, I can see that she didn't open the golden finger at all when she was reborn. When you slapped the evil foster father in the face, you didn't consider the reputation of the male protagonist. You didn't take remedial measures when you knew that the male protagonist couldn't stand up. He couldn't learn for the time being. Can you arrange a capable manager next to him? You are already a senior leader. Is it okay to find a decent nanny? Or some other means? What's your purpose in letting go? If you don't have enough force and intelligence, you just know more about things and push the plot to form a silly and sweet duo with the male lead? Moreover, when you want to marry the male protagonist, you actually have your own housekeeper and marry into your own family. You have been preparing for a long time and no one else has heard about it and you still come to propose marriage (especially Ye's father). Are you planning to hold the wedding in secret and you are clearly telling others that my husband is of low status and is a weakling? You can even arrange for a distant relative to openly publicize his identity. Then, you know that your sister's development was not right in her previous life, and you know that your sister is actually a good child, so why do you ignore your sister's education problems? Otherwise, this Yu would have found out by now. He talks in a weird way... And the fourth prince, the worst cannon fodder in the book. You said that when the heroine plans to marry the hero, she arranges and publicizes it well, but people still don't know whether they want to marry you or not... You're really drunk. I know that you trusted the wrong friend in your last life, and that your friend was Lao Wang next door, but you still died on the way back. What else do you think if you don't suspect that your friend is the murderer? ? ? When she first came back from collecting herbs after being reborn, everyone knew that she liked Ye. When she didn't like it, she didn't do anything or clarify or explain. Everyone actually accepted it. Later, it became obvious that Ye was not in the right state, so she just let nature take its course... Of course, you can have a long talk with Ye without being an intimate sister. I don't need to criticize on this point, I'm just a little speechless. I can't think of other points for a while, but once I comprehensively find out that the plot and characters are all right, it's completely logical for the character's character to follow this plot, but I'm just a little crazy about the character. This character is so imperfect... Too close to an ordinary person. Although martial arts is very extraordinary.

This article is frustrating to read. The hostess is dragging her feet on things.

I can't stand the level of playing house anymore.

Finished reading! (￣￣)↗ Rise

Breathtaking. The plots are intertwined, and the foreshadowing is always laid very early. I have read many female protagonists, and this one is definitely a masterpiece. It just feels like the character's personality is not very clear, and there is a vague feeling until the end of the article.

It's a bit rushed to end like this. Looking forward to the extras and new articles.

It turns out that Ye Qiuluo loves Jiang Qingfeng

More, dear, why did you stop?

The whole article feels slow