
(Harry Potter Fan Fiction) The Starting Point of the Heart
(HP同人)心的起点
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 110k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 9y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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Why does Little Tom's last sentence feel so ambiguous? ! I feel wrong
I love watching the Demon King suffer! Let the dog be a loyal dog attack! The CP of this article is about dogs and V! I have also seen the latest CP before! The pairing of James Potter and Big V (of course this is not Harry James Potter, but Harry's father), and in the end, Big V gave birth to Harry Potter! What's interesting is that the Harry Potter born by Big V was the result of Harry and Big V throwing spells at each other during the final war (an Avatar and an Expelliarmus) in the original book! After being born by V, Harry found out the truth. You can imagine how big the blow was! All kinds of mess! And the dog is paired with the professor! Finally, Harry was paired with the dragon, and of course Harry was the attacker!
When I read HP fanfics now, most of them are from four to five years ago or even more than ten years ago.
It seems that the protagonist has never read the original novel, but why does he know about the Room of Requirement? Did his parents tell him about it? But if you have read the original work, you can't explain why he is not shocked by his own name and why he is not any different to the professor?
Suddenly I thought of the person the protagonist was loyal to before time travel, and I felt that that person was a bit similar to Voldemort before he made Horcruxes. They were both very majestic. They both had their own dark empire, and they were both tolerant but with their own deterrent power.
There is a bug. The Golden Bell was invented by the Sri Lankan teacher, probably around the fifth or sixth grade, so it is impossible for Potter to use the Golden Bell to deal with the Sri Lankan teacher in the first grade.
To be honest, it was the first time I saw the CP of Voldemort and Sirius, and I was shocked.
Snape's writing is so bad, he doesn't only know how to curse people. When the protagonist just rescued him, the protagonist came back and explained to him that he actually glared at people. This is not inferiority, but arrogance, thinking that others should serve him, right? At least I can write people with more intelligence.
I really want to see a dog attack! V Palace is so happy! It was so painful to suddenly discover that V Palace was not disfigured (especially V Palace at the age of 16, think of Diary Master)! At first, I thought V Hall was very aggressive! As soon as Mr. Diary appeared, my impression was changed! Hall V is like a queen! Also, how often do you update? It's so hard to wait for the text
Voldy discovered Lao Deng's conspiracy