Pinnacle Armorcraft

It took me a few nights to read this novel. Personally, this book has its highlights, but some immature writing and logic, as well as inappropriate characters, still made me feel mixed. But overall, it is good (better than ordinary novels, but not attractive enough...), And it is worth reading. The following are some of my own thoughts on this book, which may involve spoilers and subjective judgments, please read as appropriate~ Let's talk about the advantages first. I am very satisfied with the author's portrayal of the protagonist's character. Whether it is Xin's optimism and enthusiasm, his occasional arrogance and scheming, or Lu's calmness and calmness, they are all to my liking. It can be said that most of my pursuit of books is for CP. However, this article still has many shortcomings 1 Failure in character creation of supporting characters After reading the whole book, I basically have no impression of the characters except the two protagonists. I feel that most of them are just tools for the plot. Some of the characters created, such as Mrs. Xin and Lu, were very poorly created for me. The behavior of the characters did not match their identities, which made people feel uncomfortable. 2. Imperfect settings I am a science fiction fan. Personally, some settings in the book did not meet my expectations. For example, during the infiltration operation on the old star, I couldn't stand it when I saw Lu holding the wire and prying open the door. Is it reasonable to still use this kind of outdated thing in the interstellar era? Even if it is changed to an electronic lock to let Lu Hei in... There are also mechas and transport vehicles. Why are they still opened with keys? Setting up a biometric is better than this. Opening it with a key immediately lowers the "B bar of the interstellar" 3. The plot is too abrupt and unresolved At the beginning, the material factory was bombed, but there was no more content after that. I was stunned. Later, Xin's growth was also downplayed a bit. It felt like it was a bit abrupt to elevate Xin from a young boy to a boss level in just a few sentences. There were also a lot of foreshadowings that were left unfilled and the ending was hasty, which lowered my evaluation of the article. In short, in my opinion, this article is still a bit immature. I hope the author can complete his own growth and look forward to your better works (*^o^*)

This couple is so loving Cute pair of uncles Are there any of them?

Suddenly I dug out a book about interstellar mecha, I like it

Watched it again. . . Suddenly I discovered that I had asked for customization a few years ago. . .

Watched it again. . .

It seems like Salfi is okay with it.

This pair is so cute! Can the author write their new article? 2333 Although I think it is unlikely...

It's only now that I discovered such a well-written mecha story (even though it's unfinished). I'm about to take the college entrance examination and I don't have time to read the new mecha stories. It's really a pity╮(╯_╰)╭But it should be finished in June~ Will you still write mecha stories? Will there be a story about Han~ Come on~

The deputy CP is still very cute~

Rewatching this episode again, I still got a bloody look on my face.