[Prince of Tennis] A Dazzling Test

Can the author change her pronouns? Why is she always called Youyue Youyue when she is the protagonist? Who calls her own name every day? It's so fake. I also feel that the article lacks a sense of reality and immersion. I hope the author pays attention to how many names of the heroine are included in an article. Isn't it annoying?

I like the uncle, it's very good, throw a thunder, come on

My uncle's wife is called aunt, right? ! Why doesn't the heroine have the same last name as her uncle? ! Shouldn't the aunt have the same last name as the uncle? ! Speechless

I have read this article twice. There are a few points that you must pay attention to when writing the next article~\\(≧▽≦)/~ I think the plot is okay... So I won't say much more, but it could be a little more cute and it would make it easier. I paid special attention to your content summary. The content of the article is correct. I hope you can use some cute sentences to make people want to read more. So that means... ←_← It would be nice to be more funny... (Zou Kai!) What I want to talk about is the issue of person. Many times if you can't help but start using "Kunimitsu-nii" or "Sanada-nii", I think you can read it again after you finish writing. This way you can correct typos and find many incorrect word order. This is not a long review... I'm sorry, I really can't do it... I will write you a long review after you open the next article... I hope your next article will be better~\\(≧▽≦)/~

Actually, I feel it would be better to call people by their names in the text~

Little Ruoruo, white and white, holding up her two ears, cutting her arteries and cutting her veins, she is motionless, so cute

Now grandpa and now grandpa are called Sanada. It's really hard to adapt.

I was defeated by the author's title. He called Mr. Sanada grandpa. Why should he call his daughter-in-law aunt? Shouldn't she be called aunt?

Humo, I am a good boy~

The plot develops too quickly, so it can be written in more detail, such as psychological, action, and appearance descriptions.