A story about gradually winning over the captain of the Generation of Miracles >3<
The title is a bit of a red herring >O<
But I'll do my best to develop the story in a Kyoto-inspired direction ╭(╯ε╰)╮ The story isn't directly related to the title ←_←
For a while, I was absolutely crazy about Akashi o(≧v≦)o~~ I've cooled off a little lately~_~ but I still couldn't resist writing this (^V^)
I only just started this fanfic ^_^ Please support me >O<
The cover was made by the cover artist ╭(╯ε╰)╮ Thanks ╭(╯ε╰)╮ Let's toss some flowers ╭(╯ε╰)╮
Let's do this!!! ╭(╯ε╰)╮
Theme:
Damn it... This is the first time I read a novel and I cried. I have never cried when I read so many cruel novels before! Author, please forgive my tears!
It's impossible to introduce Kuroko at this time... = =It's better to read comics.
I always feel like a paper tiger now... Although I feel like I have changed, some details are still the same as before. 0.0
Please be black! Blackened love! [Hey hee hee hee hee super Akashi-kun said why why why why why don't you want to leave Akashi-kun hate hate hate hate] something like 0.0
[He can't save himself] Such an objective evaluation seems a bit artificial... Shouldn't the heroine's desire to be saved by others should be stronger? It seems a little too calm... It should be similar to [Please save me] [Why don't you help me] [Please say something] This kind of resentment is mixed with resentment, because the heroine was still relatively introverted at that time. … And the heroine is not very high-profile... It's just that people who are familiar with her will feel that not many people pay attention to her. It doesn't need to be said that the change is huge, it is deliberately created. There are also some words that can be put more euphemistically. Compared with the queen or something, it should be said that the heroine wants to stand on a higher place and have full control and no longer suppress it, because she was so well protected before. To describe it, it is similar to [King's Landing]? By the way, the heroine's current personality is quite cute. She spreads her thorns all over her body. She usually doesn't want to see Akaashi. But when Akaashi becomes nice to her, she becomes nervous again. She looks S but inside is M.
The above is my personal opinion, don't pay too much attention to it
0.0 Can actually be darker
By the way... Could it be that the reason Akash pays attention to the heroine is because everyone is tall (ai) rich and handsome?
Although changes are reasonable, I always feel that silent changes can make people pay more attention to them, while high-profile changes will feel artificial. If there is such a person around me and says this to me, I will feel that she is being unreasonable and alienate her even more. Like please take care of me. I think that's polite, and there's no point in fighting back here... The above is purely my personal opinion. It doesn't mean that the author's writing is not good. You are welcome to discuss your opinions with me ~
It's not pretentious, which is good. The death of an important relative will indeed change a person. Come on!
The painting style is completely different...
Damn it... This is the first time I read a novel and I cried. I have never cried when I read so many cruel novels before! Author, please forgive my tears!
It's impossible to introduce Kuroko at this time... = =It's better to read comics.
I always feel like a paper tiger now... Although I feel like I have changed, some details are still the same as before. 0.0
Please be black! Blackened love! [Hey hee hee hee hee super Akashi-kun said why why why why why don't you want to leave Akashi-kun hate hate hate hate] something like 0.0
[He can't save himself] Such an objective evaluation seems a bit artificial... Shouldn't the heroine's desire to be saved by others should be stronger? It seems a little too calm... It should be similar to [Please save me] [Why don't you help me] [Please say something] This kind of resentment is mixed with resentment, because the heroine was still relatively introverted at that time. … And the heroine is not very high-profile... It's just that people who are familiar with her will feel that not many people pay attention to her. It doesn't need to be said that the change is huge, it is deliberately created. There are also some words that can be put more euphemistically. Compared with the queen or something, it should be said that the heroine wants to stand on a higher place and have full control and no longer suppress it, because she was so well protected before. To describe it, it is similar to [King's Landing]? By the way, the heroine's current personality is quite cute. She spreads her thorns all over her body. She usually doesn't want to see Akaashi. But when Akaashi becomes nice to her, she becomes nervous again. She looks S but inside is M. The above is my personal opinion, don't pay too much attention to it
0.0 Can actually be darker
By the way... Could it be that the reason Akash pays attention to the heroine is because everyone is tall (ai) rich and handsome?
Although changes are reasonable, I always feel that silent changes can make people pay more attention to them, while high-profile changes will feel artificial. If there is such a person around me and says this to me, I will feel that she is being unreasonable and alienate her even more. Like please take care of me. I think that's polite, and there's no point in fighting back here... The above is purely my personal opinion. It doesn't mean that the author's writing is not good. You are welcome to discuss your opinions with me ~
It's not pretentious, which is good. The death of an important relative will indeed change a person. Come on!