I've always wanted to write a story about a girl who grows up to be strong and independent. One day, I heard Miriam Yeung's "Fly Girl" for the first time. The lyrics moved me with their passion and defiant spirit, and inspired me to write.
At first, I only wanted to tell the story of a girl with nothing, fighting to make her way in the world. But somehow, as I wrote, the story took on a life of its own. So I went ahead and changed the opening, too: the heroine's mother transformed from an ordinary, gentle woman into a remarkable woman who loved and hated with all her heart, then disappeared, leaving a mountain of responsibilities to her poor daughter. The heroine herself is still strong and independent, but when it comes to love, she's stuck at kindergarten level: timid and in denial.
Persist and you will succeed
Sweat... This winter is getting colder and colder...
Very good, very good, the emotional scenes are good, but I still feel like a child matures prematurely, reminds me of my time...
These days, children are becoming precocious.
Love comes so suddenly...
I am here to survive. " It sounds like this kid is so old-fashioned.
Tyrannosaurus? Cold... How did I think of Daoming Temple? Are all adolescent children so riotous? I don't understand
My dear, have you finally tricked me again? Come on, the most important thing about writing articles is to persevere. As long as you can keep updating a little every day, the clicks will naturally come up. Don't give up too early now! Your subject matter is quite special, and it is not a very popular genre in JJ, but as long as you write something new, I believe there will still be many people who will support it I think the ending you set is very good, but the development in the middle may require a little more work. I personally suggest that you lock up the chapters you have already written and make comprehensive revisions. Of course, you don't need to change too much, just make the styles of the front and back more coordinated. Because it has been abandoned for a long time, the twists and turns in your article seem a bit stiff (this is just a personal feeling, not necessarily correct~_~) PS: Haha, if you can fill in this pit before I finish the postgraduate entrance examination, as a reward, I will write a long review for you!
Not bad, but I feel like the protagonist is too young and speaks too old
Not bad, not bad, come on! Looking forward to further development!