"The period novel *Roses Among Thorns in the Nineties* is complete. A story that will make you cry and laugh, little by little. See the blurb at the bottom.
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Blurb for this story:
Lu Xuelian, a twenty-first-century business owner, spends a sleepless night and wakes up in another world, in a kingdom ruled by women;
She becomes Ji Anping, a destitute scholar who missed her chance to sit the exams. To make a living and take responsibility for caring for her new family's household,
she has no choice but to carve a path through the mountains with her bare hands and build bridges across rivers, making something from nothing.
She carves out a place in the world for herself, her family, and her friends.
But conflicts of interest turn family against family, and friends fall into danger...
At the crucial moment, the protagonist stays true to her original intentions and lets go of her delusions. In the end, she turns disaster into good fortune and finds success in both love and career!
Content warnings: matriarchal society, male pregnancy, one-on-one romance, strong female lead and weak male lead. I'll try not to be overly sentimental. The female lead doesn't do anything grand or glamorous; she's always dealing with mud...
Blurb for *Roses Among Thorns in the Nineties*:
I know this is a good story, so I want to tell it to you slowly.
Starting life over, you'll find thorns everywhere.
This is the story of an ordinary person who is unexpectedly reborn.
Watch a young girl take on the world with nothing but her bare hands.
Yang Xiaolian, nearly forty years old, is unexpectedly reborn in her elementary school days, before any of her regrets have begun.
Her beloved maternal grandfather hasn't suffered a sudden illness and died beyond help, leaving only grief behind.
Her honest, quiet parents haven't spent their whole lives laboring, left with nothing and burdened by illness.
The town's unprecedented boom hasn't begun yet.
The Yang family is a poor farming household in the hilly countryside of the south. They share the local values of favoring boys over girls, but also have an ambition uncommon among their neighbors: to change the family's fortunes and make something of themselves.
The late eighties and nineties were the peak years of the family planning policy. The eldest Yang son had three daughters in a row, was fined a hefty social maintenance fee, and lost his job, leaving him no choice but to return home and farm.
Above them, strict grandparents ruled the household, while their hard-working parents turned a blind eye. Below them, there was a clever, adorable male cousin to compare themselves against...
Every day, the three sisters of the Yang family's eldest branch lived in hunger and cold, always on edge.
Yang Xiaolian, the middle of the three sisters, had nearly been sent away at birth. Looking at her thin arms and legs, she understood once again how little anyone listens to someone with no power. All she could do was pin her hopes of escape on her parents, who were still in their prime.
First, save money by working. Then open a little street stall, then start a small business, and then claim a share of the boom. In the future, they might become millionaires, or even multimillionaires...
But who would listen to a child?
They didn't dare, didn't want to, and didn't believe. Old farmers believed only in the results that came from sweat.
A frog in warm water thinks everything is just fine.
Only when all the injustice and pain come crashing into view do people think of changing things.
But by then, will it still be in time?
The hardships of the forty years of her previous life constantly spurred Yang Xiaolian on, driving her forward.
In this life, she too might crave a little warmth and grow content with a stable existence, but fortunately, reality kept warning her.
She works hard to change her family, friends, and surroundings, while also bettering herself.
One day, after a journey marked by tears and pain, they all find their own rebirth.
Along the way, there are friends, enemies, people who look on coldly, and people who reach out to help.
Along the way, Yang Xiaolian helps others and turns a blind eye to injustice. She succeeds and fails, and finally comes to understand the meaning of life.
Nothing is accomplished overnight. You are the only savior of your own life.
Theme: gender equality, self-reliance
Wan'er is not the male protagonist, right? It was so difficult for him. . . Unless the heroine has no father or mother, it doesn't make sense.
There are a few things I want to say about this article.
Disadvantages: First, the characters are too complex. Although many characters appear at once, the characters' personalities are not well shaped. It seems that the characters in the article are very weak and have no memorable highlights. Instead, it is the Zhou couple who beat and scolded Ye Wan'er, which has a profound impact on others. Even when I see the heroine, I just think she is a good person and motivated, but her character development seems weak. What kind of person is she? Are there any conflicting thoughts? Etc. . . Of course, maybe her very handsome appearance is a highlight.
Second, the development of the storyline. There are too many branch plots, and while the main plot is slightly less prominent, the plot development of the branch plots is more bright. This is a big no-no. Now that I see it, I don't know what the heroine is thinking. What if she is reading? Or do you want to develop business?
Advantages:
The heroine is well positioned, not annoying, and feels very real.
The descriptions of individual supporting characters are outstanding.
The story description is very smooth! There is nothing sour or pretentious about it. It looks like a lot of thought was put into using the pen.
Overall, DaDa is still relatively weak in terms of story portrayal, which means it lacks the motivation to keep people excited to read. But the story writing is good, and the writing style is good at describing things, scenery and characters.
I hope you will continue to work hard. Every author who writes articles is very worthy of respect.
The above are just some of my opinions. I hope that after reading Dada, you will not think that I am criticizing. It is what I wrote that is my expectation and encouragement for Dada.
I hope to write better in the future.
Come on! ! !
I won't be the first to comment, right?
The emotional drama has finally made progress, I'm really looking forward to it.
I have been chasing it! Come on, madam??
Is Lin Fangfang the male protagonist?
I think I will definitely wait for your update...
Great God, you are so ambitious, I must learn from you. Um! !
Fragrance wears pink. I never like to see pink. Whether it is on myself or others, I feel uncomfortable when I see it. This problem of mine is so weird...
Since Ye has the ambition to become a great god, let me give you some random opinions. Your writing is very plain, and the things you write are very practical. The writing style is smooth and not boring to read, but it is a little too plain. Many chapters are just like ordinary people living their lives in vain. Ah, it may also be because I am not interested in some of the plots. Talking about Ji Anping's life experience, you whetted her appetite when she and her sister-in-law were taking a shower, but the appetite was so intense that we felt like it was stuck in our throats, so suffocating. There are already more than thirty chapters, each chapter has more than 5,000 words, which is almost 200,000 words. We actually still have no idea of the plot of your article, and the plot unfolds a little slowly.
Alas, I watched a little bit of it many years ago, but I got stuck later because Ye Wan'er was so miserable and I couldn't forget it. I tried looking for it but couldn't find it. I found it some time ago and found out that it wasn't the male protagonist. I was too busy at work and didn't have time to read it after ordering it. I just finished it recently when I had a little free time. Ye Wan'er is still very sad that she is not reunited with her child. In terms of characters, the couple will not be very kind to Xiao Qian'er. I guess I don't want to write too much about Xiao Qian'er, otherwise I will have to write a large chapter about this matter. Before I read the pre-released introduction to Wang Zhizhi, I thought it was a story about Chun Yue becoming the next monarch, but I didn't expect that she would be the heroine of this movie. I feel that the author is suitable for writing pastoral stories, which are very detailed and can even be immersive. If he writes about strategy and court, it may not be so exciting. I don't know what it will be like.
Wan'er is not the male protagonist, right? It was so difficult for him. . . Unless the heroine has no father or mother, it doesn't make sense.
There are a few things I want to say about this article. Disadvantages: First, the characters are too complex. Although many characters appear at once, the characters' personalities are not well shaped. It seems that the characters in the article are very weak and have no memorable highlights. Instead, it is the Zhou couple who beat and scolded Ye Wan'er, which has a profound impact on others. Even when I see the heroine, I just think she is a good person and motivated, but her character development seems weak. What kind of person is she? Are there any conflicting thoughts? Etc. . . Of course, maybe her very handsome appearance is a highlight. Second, the development of the storyline. There are too many branch plots, and while the main plot is slightly less prominent, the plot development of the branch plots is more bright. This is a big no-no. Now that I see it, I don't know what the heroine is thinking. What if she is reading? Or do you want to develop business? Advantages: The heroine is well positioned, not annoying, and feels very real. The descriptions of individual supporting characters are outstanding. The story description is very smooth! There is nothing sour or pretentious about it. It looks like a lot of thought was put into using the pen. Overall, DaDa is still relatively weak in terms of story portrayal, which means it lacks the motivation to keep people excited to read. But the story writing is good, and the writing style is good at describing things, scenery and characters. I hope you will continue to work hard. Every author who writes articles is very worthy of respect. The above are just some of my opinions. I hope that after reading Dada, you will not think that I am criticizing. It is what I wrote that is my expectation and encouragement for Dada. I hope to write better in the future. Come on! ! !
I won't be the first to comment, right?
The emotional drama has finally made progress, I'm really looking forward to it.
I have been chasing it! Come on, madam??
Is Lin Fangfang the male protagonist?
I think I will definitely wait for your update...
Great God, you are so ambitious, I must learn from you. Um! ! Fragrance wears pink. I never like to see pink. Whether it is on myself or others, I feel uncomfortable when I see it. This problem of mine is so weird... Since Ye has the ambition to become a great god, let me give you some random opinions. Your writing is very plain, and the things you write are very practical. The writing style is smooth and not boring to read, but it is a little too plain. Many chapters are just like ordinary people living their lives in vain. Ah, it may also be because I am not interested in some of the plots. Talking about Ji Anping's life experience, you whetted her appetite when she and her sister-in-law were taking a shower, but the appetite was so intense that we felt like it was stuck in our throats, so suffocating. There are already more than thirty chapters, each chapter has more than 5,000 words, which is almost 200,000 words. We actually still have no idea of the plot of your article, and the plot unfolds a little slowly.
Alas, I watched a little bit of it many years ago, but I got stuck later because Ye Wan'er was so miserable and I couldn't forget it. I tried looking for it but couldn't find it. I found it some time ago and found out that it wasn't the male protagonist. I was too busy at work and didn't have time to read it after ordering it. I just finished it recently when I had a little free time. Ye Wan'er is still very sad that she is not reunited with her child. In terms of characters, the couple will not be very kind to Xiao Qian'er. I guess I don't want to write too much about Xiao Qian'er, otherwise I will have to write a large chapter about this matter. Before I read the pre-released introduction to Wang Zhizhi, I thought it was a story about Chun Yue becoming the next monarch, but I didn't expect that she would be the heroine of this movie. I feel that the author is suitable for writing pastoral stories, which are very detailed and can even be immersive. If he writes about strategy and court, it may not be so exciting. I don't know what it will be like.
Let's have more emotional dramas, big, woo woo