Put simply, it's the story of a young woman who accidentally gets pinned down by a master of magic potions, then chases after him, demanding he take responsibility~~
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Lin Jia is really getting stronger with age (? O?)
I always feel that Harry regards Nuan Nuan as his mother.
So... The professor is Bata??
The saints are really good at figuring things out. I wonder if Deng Duoduo often goes to see Lin Ge?
It's nice~ But will the professor be responsible for sleeping with her for one night?
Where is the sleeping potion used? ?
Nuannuan's momentum is definitely more powerful than the professor XD
The bottle of magic medicine Ye Nuannuan told me
A fertility potion?
I finally waited until it was finished. I have been waiting for a long time to finish this article about Man Manjun, but I was really relieved after reading it.
I really like to see the professor and Nuan Nuan return to modern times, especially when the professor is watched and Nuan Nuan looks jealous. It's so fun. However, the professor accepted Nuan Nuan too quickly at first, which was a bit abrupt. I think the professor's personality would not allow him to accept Nuan Nuan so quickly, and in terms of foreigners' moral values, one-night stands are very normal.
Man Manjun is good at writing. You can see your progress from the first chapter to the end, but it still feels a bit like a running story. Some plots are too over the top. For example, there should be a process for the professor to accept Nuan Nuan. You wrote that the professor thought Nuan Nuan was an Oriental and just accepted Nuan Nuan and married Nuan Nuan. If this was the case, there would not be any cultural differences between the East and the West.
But these are just minor problems. Congratulations to Man Manjun for finishing this article "Pounce on the Professor". The most important thing is to give the professor happiness. After all, those who write professor articles all hope that the professor can have a happy ending. This ending can be regarded as giving the professor a good ending. Being able to bring the professor happiness is the hope of us professor fans, but I still can't help but want to say a few words to you. Did you fail to write the professor? T_T, the professor in my mind is not like this. Although the ending is acceptable, but...
Wuwuwuwuwu... My professor, why are you so written down by Manmanjun?
Mr. Manman, you have to keep up your efforts and work hard on writing, and I will continue to write with you.
Finally, (getting back to the topic, looking straight, throwing flowers, cheering) Congratulations to Manmanjun for successfully completing this article.
The broken little haha went to snatch Hermione. Is it okay to be broken to the end...
The author has done a lot of hard work. It is actually very good to have such writing style in the first book!
It's just that the character is a little broken! However, HP fans are all over the place, so there's no need to be too demanding! Hello!
However, what I am more concerned about is that the character's personality seems a bit out of the ordinary. A person's personality can be multi-faceted, but the characters in the article seem a bit thin and superficial.
Furthermore, although I am very happy to see the professor happy, some behaviors of a person who has been depressed for more than ten or even decades cannot be changed in one word. After all, human character cannot be changed all at once. The so-called nature is hard to change!
Then, there are some places that I actually think can be described in depth, so that the characters' personalities can be properly fleshed out. For example, the change in mentality of the professor who was responsible for the one-night stand, such as the change before and after Harry merged with the V-demon, such as how Harry became attached to the heroine, such as Bella's tragic husband... Etc.
There are positive characters and negative characters, which I feel can enrich the humanity of the novel!
Although some parts may seem naive, the author also has some thoughts. For example, the heroine pretends to be cheerful because she is afraid of Draco and others. This is very mature, and you can see that the heroine is slowly maturing.
It would be great if we could focus on pen and ink in this aspect! At least it can't be mentioned in one go, it seems like a long list!
Well, anyway, thank you to the author for your hard work! It's really cute to read the author's message. In fact, in addition to the writing and plot of the novel, the author's thoughtful replies and never giving up are the reasons why we are very happy and support even more!
Support dear! Give me a hug~!
Lin Jia is really getting stronger with age (? O?)
I always feel that Harry regards Nuan Nuan as his mother. So... The professor is Bata??
The saints are really good at figuring things out. I wonder if Deng Duoduo often goes to see Lin Ge?
It's nice~ But will the professor be responsible for sleeping with her for one night?
Where is the sleeping potion used? ?
Nuannuan's momentum is definitely more powerful than the professor XD
The bottle of magic medicine Ye Nuannuan told me A fertility potion?
I finally waited until it was finished. I have been waiting for a long time to finish this article about Man Manjun, but I was really relieved after reading it. I really like to see the professor and Nuan Nuan return to modern times, especially when the professor is watched and Nuan Nuan looks jealous. It's so fun. However, the professor accepted Nuan Nuan too quickly at first, which was a bit abrupt. I think the professor's personality would not allow him to accept Nuan Nuan so quickly, and in terms of foreigners' moral values, one-night stands are very normal. Man Manjun is good at writing. You can see your progress from the first chapter to the end, but it still feels a bit like a running story. Some plots are too over the top. For example, there should be a process for the professor to accept Nuan Nuan. You wrote that the professor thought Nuan Nuan was an Oriental and just accepted Nuan Nuan and married Nuan Nuan. If this was the case, there would not be any cultural differences between the East and the West. But these are just minor problems. Congratulations to Man Manjun for finishing this article "Pounce on the Professor". The most important thing is to give the professor happiness. After all, those who write professor articles all hope that the professor can have a happy ending. This ending can be regarded as giving the professor a good ending. Being able to bring the professor happiness is the hope of us professor fans, but I still can't help but want to say a few words to you. Did you fail to write the professor? T_T, the professor in my mind is not like this. Although the ending is acceptable, but... Wuwuwuwuwu... My professor, why are you so written down by Manmanjun? Mr. Manman, you have to keep up your efforts and work hard on writing, and I will continue to write with you. Finally, (getting back to the topic, looking straight, throwing flowers, cheering) Congratulations to Manmanjun for successfully completing this article.
The broken little haha went to snatch Hermione. Is it okay to be broken to the end...
The author has done a lot of hard work. It is actually very good to have such writing style in the first book! It's just that the character is a little broken! However, HP fans are all over the place, so there's no need to be too demanding! Hello! However, what I am more concerned about is that the character's personality seems a bit out of the ordinary. A person's personality can be multi-faceted, but the characters in the article seem a bit thin and superficial. Furthermore, although I am very happy to see the professor happy, some behaviors of a person who has been depressed for more than ten or even decades cannot be changed in one word. After all, human character cannot be changed all at once. The so-called nature is hard to change! Then, there are some places that I actually think can be described in depth, so that the characters' personalities can be properly fleshed out. For example, the change in mentality of the professor who was responsible for the one-night stand, such as the change before and after Harry merged with the V-demon, such as how Harry became attached to the heroine, such as Bella's tragic husband... Etc. There are positive characters and negative characters, which I feel can enrich the humanity of the novel! Although some parts may seem naive, the author also has some thoughts. For example, the heroine pretends to be cheerful because she is afraid of Draco and others. This is very mature, and you can see that the heroine is slowly maturing. It would be great if we could focus on pen and ink in this aspect! At least it can't be mentioned in one go, it seems like a long list! Well, anyway, thank you to the author for your hard work! It's really cute to read the author's message. In fact, in addition to the writing and plot of the novel, the author's thoughtful replies and never giving up are the reasons why we are very happy and support even more! Support dear! Give me a hug~!