"The wars rage on, and every living thing is as insignificant as a blade of grass." Amid the snow swirling across the sky, Cang Yuan told Maozhua, and himself.
"I want to help him. Master said helping him doesn't mean I have to stay by his side forever. I want him to know that I'm strong, too. If he wants to kill his enemy with his own hands, I can clear the way for him. If he dies on the battlefield, I can gather his remains." Standing on the walls of Suguan, Xiao Cao answered Yun Ji, but her heart still clung to the figure who had vanished from the world.
Murder and vengeance, struggles for power, bonds and fate entwine the lives of each and every person, driving them to give everything just to glimpse a peaceful world as radiant as the dawn...
This story explores a somber theme that isn't very popular these days: life and death, sacrifice, and choices. It can feel rather oppressive.
The story has many characters from all walks of life. I've tried to give each of them a distinct personality and capture their tragic fate in that era. I also hope to explore the many facets of human nature from different perspectives.
Perhaps life is never easy, whether we find ourselves in a world of illusion or reality. It is precisely the ties that bind us that give us the courage to face danger and keep moving forward. Those ties include family, friendship, love, and compassion for the world...
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It took me a long time to finally finish reading it, although the ending is unclear. Reading the full text, you can't feel the love between children at all. The plot revolves around the hatred between the country and the family. Xiaocao's feelings for Cangyuan seem a bit strange to me. The two have not seen each other for many years, and the only time they can have feelings for each other is during a period of time together seven years ago. However, according to the author's description, I don't see anything [probably because I am too stupid]. If I think about it carefully, it is more reasonable that Cangyuan stabbed himself to save him. Ah, don't worry about it. I don't think this article should be read as a beauty. There are many emotions throughout the article. I think the most prominent one is the word loyalty, such as the White Tiger Army, the Huo family who swore never to be king, and the thousands of soldiers who fought hard. It was so hot in the middle of the night that I couldn't sleep. I said so much for the first time. If you have any opinions that are different from the author's, just laugh it off. Don't worry about the writing style of this elementary school student [beat] In fact, I have been coveting the pit next door to you that only has an introduction. When will it be filled in? [Rolling all over the floor]
After reading too many popular novels, I feel that I don't have the patience to read this type of novels written by the author. However, I still read a few. To be honest, it's pretty good. Come on, please do it.
What does the okay ending mean?
After reading it, I only had one thought in my mind, author, I hate you. Haha, even though I know it's just an article, a novel, I still couldn't help crying at the end. There is so much reluctance in my heart, and so much attachment, for no reason, just to protect. After reading this book review, some people may say that this person is really stupid. After a while, I may think that I am stupid, but at least for now, what I write is the truest thought in my heart. I hope the author can create a side story (and a second part if possible) about Xiaocao and Cangyuan... At least give them an ordinary life and not ask for happiness. I also know that I don't need to care. Whether the ending is good or bad depends on how you understand it. Maybe this is the best ending, but I still hope that they can have a good ending. Of course, I just hope... Well, I will support the author here and look forward to your new work. Quietly exited... (Actually, I still want to write something, but I can't think of what to write. This is a good novel, everyone should support the author. ^_^)
By the way, for those of you who are still reading, have you noticed that this article is coming to an end? I hope the ending is worthy of your perseverance.
By the way, those of you who are kind enough to read it and leave a comment by the way should be used to soothe my lonely heart... In addition, regarding the cover, I wonder if any GN will happen to read this article, happen to like it, happen to know a little bit about design, happen to be free, and happen to be willing to help... Well, no one can calculate how low the probability is...
By the way, which two fairy girls are the extremely stable "2"...
First of all, I'd like to apologize. I forgot that the 9th is the Chinese New Year. I've been very busy these two days, so I postponed my comments and kept you waiting for a long time. In addition, I read this article all night long this morning. I have been busy all morning. If there is anything inappropriate in what I wrote, it must be because my head is not clear. The author can just ignore it~ Let me first talk about my feelings about this article. The writing style is simple, the description of the scene is well grasped, and the atmosphere rendered can easily draw people into it. Between the lines, you reveal your understanding of human nature and your understanding of everyone's mentality from different standpoints, which is really valuable. The words you want to write are your own words. There are few authors like you in today's online literature world who simply express their own feelings, rather than superimposing and listing plots. Even your protagonist cannot be summarized with labels, but is like a living person. He is complex and growing all the time. His perspective on people is constantly changing. It is difficult for you to figure out what his next move will be. However, each of his actions is so reasonable and in line with readers' expectations. I can't give you any guidance or evaluation in this regard. What you expressed has been revealed to me, and these contain your own thoughts about life. I encourage you to go on, keep moving forward, and finish writing this book without being interfered by external achievements. Because when writing, people's thoughts will continue to condense, and then slowly expand and strengthen. When it is finished, you will find that your own thoughts have also been summarized and improved. Okay, I'm going too far, let's get back to you. The first half of the first chapter is very well written and very graphic. The tragedy of the battlefield and the sadness in the dream strongly attract readers. Xiao Cao'er's character is a little abrupt in troubled times, but all his words and deeds are given reasonable explanations. You go deep into the story in an orderly manner. Your skills surprised me. Many authors are afraid that readers will forget a certain character, or that the character is not distinctive enough, so they make them appear prematurely. This makes it easier for readers to remember, but it also weakens the readability of the article. The appearance of Cangyuan and Xiaocao is not surprising, but it can capture the readers' hearts. Layers of preparation and orderly debut are far more powerful than simply emphasizing the average effort of a certain person or multiple people on the stage. Plot and characters can never be discussed separately. The plot shapes the image of the characters, and the characters promote the development of the plot. The two interact with each other to finally complete an article. From the perspective of characters, you are successful. Every character can make me feel something and remember it firmly. As for the plot, I think the general context framework is already there, and the eyes mainly follow Cang Yuan. At present, Cang Yuan needs to figure out what happened back then, and on the other hand, he needs to protect himself and develop his own power. The protagonist has a more obvious purpose, and the article becomes easier to understand. I saw the answers to questions in the comments. In my opinion, if readers stick to Chapter 20, they should be able to understand. There are readers who cannot understand it. After all, it involves the exploration of the truth and the expression of war strategies. Many people read novels just for spiritual needs and do not want to think too much. In addition, it may not be that the plot of the article is so fast that readers can't wrap their heads around it, but that the plot is not fast enough to explain everyone's doubts within the readers' patience. But I still don't recommend you to speed up the pace. The speed of your article has probably already taken shape. If you speed up hastily, it will easily disrupt the level. The protagonist is in place but the plot is not in place, or there is a certain supporting aspect that is forgotten or missing in the development of the plot. I suggest that you adjust the order of laying out the layout appropriately to make it more reasonable and orderly. For example, in the first chapter, I didn't understand Cang Yuan's life experience at first. When Dr. Luo was treating Cang Yuan and found the white tiger, I didn't understand it even more. But when I arrived at Suguancheng, my doubts were answered. However, I had already reached Chapter 14 (visual reading from Chapter 1 to Chapter 14: 4,000 words). There were too many things mixed in. As the protagonist, Cang Yuan's life experience was not revealed until about 4,000 words, which is indeed a little late. There is also the issue of switching scenes. I don't think there is a question of whether it is fast or not, but whether the switch is abrupt or not. If the reader is still in the previous scene and you directly drag them out, they will definitely feel uncomfortable. This is not difficult to solve, as long as you find a clue to jump. In the end I think you don't really have to worry about how many readers you have. There are not as many readers as you might think who are truly willing to think about novels and have the patience to read them. The most popular articles on the market are to satisfy the various demands of readers, rather than for the author to share his own insights. To a certain extent, this book is to satisfy your own demands and is a manifestation of your insights. If the goals are different, the results will definitely be different.
···Uh, such a lukewarm click rate... But I feel good after reading this chapter. Although it is not a popular genre now, many people write the same thing now, and I am almost bored. Come on, I thought it would be a long story after reading the first chapter. Come on, it is worth reading~~
My name is FAQ A GN on the forum made suggestions, saying that there was no background explanation at the beginning, and the scene switching was a bit fast, making it a bit confusing. Although it will be explained one after another later, in order to avoid you having any doubts, or if I missed something when filling in the holes, if there is anything vague or unknown, you can directly come here to ask questions. As long as it does not involve spoilers, all questions will be answered.