We once naively believed that life was full of kindness and endless beauty.
Later, we were forced to learn that life could also be cruel, and endlessly dark.
We once lived passionately and bravely.
Later, all we could do was endure in loneliness.
Perhaps fate couldn't bear to keep us apart and let us meet again, but the passing years changed our faces and voices.
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=- =I was attracted by the copywriting~ Sprinkle flowers ~ come on
Mo He!!! I'm here to support! I saw Mo He entering Jinjiang today! Come to congratulate~~~ [I hope I'm not late]
Well, Mo He and your writing are indeed good. The writing style is relatively fresh and has a slightly gorgeous feel. I have to say, I actually don't like to believe that you are a new writer. Based on my experience after writing so many comments and reading so many articles, many shortcomings of newcomers are not reflected in you. For example, writing by newcomers usually progresses faster. While they want to get everyone's recognition faster, they will be a little impatient with their writing, but your writing is a slow-burning type, which is rare. Then, regarding the protagonist and supporting roles, you also set the characters to be very full, and the overall concept of the article is relatively complete, without feeling thin or boring. This is worthy of praise, not bad O(∩_∩)O~ However, this does not mean that you do not have shortcomings. I find that you seem to be a bit obsessed with names... A person's name always appears at every little distance. You can improve this a little bit. I'm not saying that it's bad to have names, but try not to use them so often. Readers and picky writers will get bored. Also, attention should be paid to details. Although literature, splendor and freshness are good, I hope you will also be careful not to overdo it. Too much will cause aesthetic fatigue. This is a common problem for every author. Of course, these problems I mentioned have not been seen by the great gods. Therefore, if you hope that you can become a great god in the future, these problems still need to be improved. Anyway, come on.
Dear Momo. First of all, I would like to apologize for my late comment. I express my deep guilt. "Winter Solstice" is one of my favorite types of modern romances - the one where you meet again after a breakup is the most loving. It's the heroine's inner struggle, whether to tell the truth or not, and the hero's affectionate and domineering feeling, pressing every step of the way, that makes my heart flutter. I said I would follow up on this article. I can't see the cover, and I don't know what's going on. Then let's talk about the copywriting first. Copywriting is the main element that reflects the style of a work. Nai's copywriting is very artistic, but it makes people want to read more. But let me say something first. The last sentence of the copy seems a little unclear, and I suggest you make some changes. Mo Mo has been very diligent in updating recently, so I would like to praise him first. Although the first chapter is not very attractive, as long as you read on, you will find that this article is a superior work both in terms of writing style and story. The writing style is fresh, and the rendering environment is also done very well. It reads very graphically. Especially the section where they met many years ago made me feel deeply, as if I was seeing everything right in front of my eyes. There is also the heavy mist and rain in the small town in Jiangnan, which is really beautiful, like nothing else. The plot advances step by step, and although it is slow, it seems orderly. The foreshadowing has already been bought in the previous article, and people can't help but wonder what is the real reason why the heroine left without saying goodbye a few years ago? And where will the relationship between the male protagonist and Zi Jue and the romantic entanglement between the female protagonist and her current boyfriend go? The text is interesting to read and the language is very comfortable to read. It makes people feel very hungry. Of course, there are still some shortcomings in some places. I feel that the character's personality is not very distinct, but I just feel that the heroine is very cold. Because the heroine is too cold, my sense of empathy is not strong and I cannot integrate into the heroine's feelings and understand her emotions. The male protagonist is just a vague shadow in my heart, I don't know anything about him. There are also more dialogues. It might be better to add some psychological description and character description while describing the dialogue. I also want to complain about the author's updated word count for each chapter. It's so shabby that even the Lun family can't get enough of it. . . . . . . As a newcomer, if you want to make it to the new list, you still need to update more. I will wave a small leather whip to beat Nai, to urge the update, to urge the update!!!! Haha, I can't help but wonder if Han Yu's brother Han Yi ooxxed the heroine a few years ago, so the heroine chose to leave (I'm evil again). The heroine has such a cold temperament that she almost froze me into ice cubes. I don't know why Shenma thought her name was Zi Jue when she saw her for the first time, but she turned out to be a cannon fodder second female lead, and it turned out that being called Fruit Shenma was unreliable. I was very happy when I saw Beauty Jiangnan. Is it opened by a big company? Pfft. Seeing the male lead and the female lead being intimate, uh, I had a very uncomfortable feeling. Well, actually, I am a male fanatic and will never give the male lead any chance. Why don't I give the male lead some benefits? For example, the one who pressed against the wall and forcefully kissed Shenma, hahahaha. Please add more JQ, the Lun family loves to watch JQ, please beg me. And the second female lead is occasionally taken out for a walk, for a walk. Finally, thank you for visiting our Liangpin Long Review store, and thank you for picking up other people's brands (shy...). This is a long review, I hope you don't dislike it, I will send you a kiss and keep one in my collection. Come on, little Momo. Mua, love you.
As long as you persist on the difficult road, you can move forward courageously. Come on
Suggestions: 1: There are too many dialogues, which can be annoying at first glance. 2: Try to develop a climax at the beginning and end of the article to make it refreshing for readers. 3: It is recommended that there be more character dynamics, scene descriptions and inner monologues. 4: Don't make the copy too suspenseful, as it will make us lose interest in the article and make it boring. Positive reviews: 1: The plot of the article (^_^) is good. 2: I like your style. 3: The brushwork is delicate and atmospheric. 4: Looking forward to your masterpiece! O(∩_∩)O~
Ah~~ Ah~~ Can you update more~~ Don't you just want to see more~~