
The Butler and the Great Thief
管家与大盗
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 13y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
1Chapters
5Favorites
2Comments
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Classmate Jun Hensheng said at the beginning that it was a short story, with only over a thousand words, and no long comments were required. Therefore, Xiao Qi was more respectful than obedient here. It was really difficult for me to write a long comment of more than a thousand words for an article of more than a thousand words. First of all, let's talk about the title of the short story, "The Butler and the Thief". It is concise and highlights the main content of the article. The author writes a story about a thief and a butler. Secondly, as for the entire article, well, even though it is only a little over a thousand words, the storyline and narrative are pretty good. Hmm~ The plot arrangement is very orderly. In fact, just over a thousand words sometimes cannot summarize a story completely. However, this article has some suspenseful elements in it. For example, the identity of the housekeeper, the identity of the thief, and the identity of the detective. Three identities appear, but in fact only two people exist, right? Hehe~ This is of course just my personal guess. Let's talk about the girl's writing style. There is no problem. In fact, sometimes, it is more important to let the readers see what the author wants to express. After all, everyone has a different style, so be it. Hensheng's writing is pretty good, at least this short story looks good. But, ahem, as for those symbols, I personally think it would be better not to appear in the article. Finally, that detective Mr. Liming Long is actually the housekeeper, right? Is the Butterfly Thief actually a detective? Or I guessed wrong. . . . -------[Qinglou Twelve Squares] Chong Xiaoqi