[The King's Avatar/Ye Xiu-Centric] If I Don't Remember

I finished reading it and thought it was well written... Rather, it was very well written. I read the reviews before reading it, and my expectations were extremely low, so I kept putting off reading this book. As a result, when I read it myself, I found that this article was indeed much better than I imagined. It would be better to say that it far exceeded my expectations and could become my favorite literature. The author's grasp of Brother Ye is very impressive to me (uh). In the early stage, I just entered a brand new world where no one remembers him. First, he did not panic and worked hard to prove it. Second, he was not reckless and did not look for anyone (especially in some articles, he went to Su Muqiu to fight for his life or death). Third, he clearly understood his connection with everyone: Glory. The author clearly thought out what Brother Ye was very cold about, and the wording was very reasonable, and he did not overly divergent on this point. I like it very much. In this article, Brother Ye seems to have little obsession with Su Muqiu, but in fact, he misses and cherishes her very much. The most original thing about Ye Cai, who seems to have little obsession, is that he is not good at expressing strong emotions, and at the same time he has an indifferent character and wants very little. As long as he confirms that the other party is alive and understands that the other party can do it in the time he should have experienced, he will be relieved. Under this premise, Su Muqiu is just another of his strong rivals in Glory (Brother Ye really loves Glory) It describes that when Brother Ye landed in a place where he could play games with peace of mind, he did not choose to start the game first. Instead, he watched a lot of other people's game videos in this world to understand the background and situation first, and based on these analyses, he understood the situation of his former friends. Very rational There are many plots about Futaba and they are very relevant. This article gave me a taste of a brand-new way of eating Futaba (actually it is not new, it's just that few people from Aoye write about it): that is the distinction between inside and outside caused by kinship. In some literature, Ye Qiu appears in front of a bunch of people and everyone exclaims omg twins → it's very cool This article is about Brother Ye's thoughts. Not only does he not show up, but he also uses their father's name when sending express delivery. Even if they are not shown in public view, no one can cut off the objective connection between Futaba and no one needs to know. I really like this article's argument for Brother Ye's character. Although I am sad that Xingxin is no longer around in this article (silence), this is also very Brother Ye... Because there is no need to support a team by myself, so I directly join the existing team. And he really just wants to play games and win. His purpose is not to take anyone with him or tie him to anyone. Compared with many romantic and non-romantic literature because the author is hesitant to cut off his affection for the character, this character argument (smacks his lips (reflects repeatedly)) Leng Ganye doesn't cut off the bonds at will. He has a good sense of when to do what to do and who to make friends with. It's so cool and unrestrained. In this article, Ye Guangrong's strength is a bit weak, and he actually lost to Su Muqiu (and only to him), but but, but,... Just pamper him... After all, this article has written down more or less Brother Ye's efforts in glory! ! Very career-approving! ! With emotion, it turns out that when reading fan fiction, the main thing is to look at the characters' personalities and the choices they make when encountering problems. As long as these are consistent with the characters, this is an excellent fan fiction. Love part: There is no description of the plot of being together, which is very good. It is only mentioned at the end that they are together, which is very good. There is no sour smell, which is very good. In the plot, the two people are not like some one-sided writers who take care of Ye. They do not weaken Ye in terms of life and appreciate it. It's a pity that this article doesn't write about Aoye thoroughly (uh…) And everyone in this article is quite gentle. Not only Ye Qiu thinks about Brother Ye at the beginning, but also asks the characters many times whether Brother Ye will be uneasy in a world where he is not around, where he remembers other people, and his body has been changed. It is so thoughtful. Ye's desire for victory is so delicious. Let's go read the teacher's other Ye You literature. It doesn't matter even if it's a trap... The coldness of Ye who only pursues victory is really good...

How should I put it? Overall, it looks okay. The character creation is much better than some derivative works of the same type. But the final friendly match and the ending were not handled well. After reading it, I didn't feel relieved, like "Ah, it's over." Instead, I felt aggrieved, like "Huh? It's over." I hope you will consider revising this article. Since it is not suitable for writing about battles, it has accumulated over time. I will read more related novels, and then come back to add repairs to make this derivative article even better. Finally, I wish you better and better w

Can we finally see the ending? I read it intermittently in the middle, but I still feel that I am deeply impressed. This is Lao Ye in my heart, obsessed with victory. Every relationship and every event in the article is just right, but it is too short and the meaning is not finished...

I really want to watch the extra episode where they all regain their memories. How cool would that be?

After eating and pressing his claws, after the World Invitational Tournament, Ye Xiu traveled to a world without him and became smaller. Interesting story, but it's a pity it's not expanded on

It's really a beginning and an end. Ye Xiudu only played in an international friendly match and did not make his domestic debut as a professional player. But the author also wrote it very well. I hope that the author will one day remember this article that was deceived by her and fill it in again.

Overall, it's a mess + a bad ending. Not to mention anything else, the most important friendly match was castrated in the last game, which is a pity.

The subject matter is very novel, but it's too short. It feels like it's over before it even begins. I'm happy.

It's already great. I think the character's personality is quite restored. There's nothing too out of the ordinary at first glance. In the end, it's just plain and simple!

Beginning. . . . The end. . What about the middle? What about the process? ?_?? T^T