Hidden Edge in Chong Lou

The version I read had over two hundred chapters, but I only read about a hundred chapters before stopping. The author's writing style is quite good; the plot and characters described at the beginning are very engaging. Unfortunately, the author's understanding of story structure was not yet mature enough to create such a long work. The beginning was well-reasoned and rigorously thought out, but it became increasingly weak in its follow-up. The most noticeable part is when the brothers Shang Tianxian and Shang Tianchen reconcile, but the reason is weak and feels abrupt. Later, under the pretext of seeking out Mu De, Jiu Lou suddenly took command of the Northern Army. I have a feeling that the story took a wrong turn from this point onward. Although the author provided a lot of explanations, It still leaves the reader confused. The author has written a lot of rambling explanations and elaborations on minor details. But the overall direction started to go wrong, and it felt increasingly difficult to justify itself. The author subtly hints at a massive conspiracy by using a series of questions posed by the characters. But in reality, it was all talk and no action, and nothing came of it at all. It seems that long articles are indeed difficult to manage without a general outline and a main storyline. I really enjoyed the first fifty or sixty chapters, but I also worry about how many authors have the ability to support such a long story. After reading over a hundred chapters, I still regret that the author of this work isn't one of them. And as mentioned at the beginning... The writing style of this article is truly excellent; the story and dialogue in the beginning demonstrate the author's skill. Unfortunately, the plot structure gradually became loose. No matter how good the writing is, without a central core, it becomes pale and powerless. However, the author's skill should not be underestimated. Unfortunately, it's unclear whether this is an alias, as only this one article appears in the column. I hope to have the opportunity to see more of his works in the future.

I just searched again and found out it's already finished... This is the first time I've found a story that's finished but not listed on JJ...

I watched it a long time ago and really liked it. I only realized I'd abandoned it when I dug it out again ≥≤. I was originally planning to keep it.

For some reason, I was really touched by the last sentence.

... Little Qi slapped me in the face qwq

Kid, the biggest help you can give is simply not calling him "sister-in-law" to his face =w=

Sigh, there's no need to wait for snow... We're already inside... By the way, the top and bottom are reversed in this picture =.= , Yeah, the ninth floor is indeed handsome.

Good, I've read a few chapters and started giving it more points. A good story deserves support.

It's a pretty good story; the opening is quite captivating.

The writing is excellent; I want to read it all in one go. I'll give it more points later...