Prince of Tennis: Just the Ending

I personally think Tezuka is a good male protagonist!!

Sigh... I have to say, what I hate most about fanfics is that the male protagonist is Tezuka! Because he is a very unqualified lover! If he is written too far away from himself, then he is not Tezuka! I usually skip Tezuka's fanfics every time I read them! I still feel that what they said about melting the iceberg is very inappropriate. Either the handles have changed, or there is no emotional content! There is something to pursue for every girl! It can be tolerated once or twice or even for a lifetime! I have tolerated the old-fashioned Tezuka all my life, but girls who love to dream and have ideas still long for the indulgence of boys like Tezuka a few times! Yes, it is indulgence! It only takes a few times, or once or twice! But for Tezuka! Don't say it a few times! It should be impossible even once and half time! This kind of thing wouldn't happen without his knowledge! So Tezuka can be a very good friend or a very reliable partner, but he is definitely not a qualified lover! But this article by the author is very good! At least it's one of the top ones I've read among Tezuka's articles! Among Net King, I think the most qualified lover is not the king Yukimura, nor is Ninzu who is very good at pleasing girls! It's that Atobe who is always proud and arrogant! Haha, maybe I think it's just a matter of personal opinion! But I just think he is a qualified lover! He can honestly admit his faults and show his strengths without reservation! Never feel inferior! And he also has his thoughtfulness. As for thoughtfulness, readers can look for it. He has a particularly strong desire to protect his own people. This is why I think he is a qualified lover! Because I read this article by the author, I wanted to ask the author if he could write a chapter article! Forgot to add points... I hope the author can consider it! Silently asking if this is a long story?

Sigh... I have to say, what I hate most about fanfics is that the male protagonist is Tezuka! Because he is a very unqualified lover! If he is written too far away from himself, then he is not Tezuka! I usually skip Tezuka's fanfics every time I read them! I still feel that what they said about melting the iceberg is very inappropriate. Either the handles have changed, or there is no emotional content! There is something to pursue for every girl! It can be tolerated once or twice or even for a lifetime! I have tolerated the old-fashioned Tezuka all my life, but girls who love to dream and have ideas still long for the indulgence of boys like Tezuka a few times! Yes, it is indulgence! It only takes a few times, or once or twice! But for Tezuka! Don't say it a few times! It should be impossible even once and half time! This kind of thing wouldn't happen without his knowledge! So Tezuka can be a very good friend or a very reliable partner, but he is definitely not a qualified lover! But this article by the author is very good! At least it's one of the top ones I've read among Tezuka's articles! Among Net King, I think the most qualified lover is not the king Yukimura, nor is Ninzu who is very good at pleasing girls! It's that Atobe who is always proud and arrogant! Haha, maybe I think it's just a matter of personal opinion! But I just think he is a qualified lover! He can honestly admit his faults and show his strengths without reservation! Never feel inferior! And he also has his thoughtfulness. As for thoughtfulness, readers can look for it. He has a particularly strong desire to protect his own people. This is why I think he is a qualified lover! Because I read this article by the author, I wanted to ask the author if he could write a chapter article!

Like it very much!!!!

Come on, I like it!!!!!!!!!!

Haha, very beautiful. The ending will be very sad in the future. But it's really good to be so happy,

I was really surprised after reading Sister Mi's comments. Laughing is a bit like giving a piece of candy and then starting to take a bitter medicine. Of course, this is just a metaphor. I can't ask for such a comment^^ The original idea of the article was indeed about the issue of "love and habits" that I wanted to express. As for those endings, they were conceived early on. For the middle plot, everything was just a foreshadowing, in order to lay out the final ending. Please believe me, when I was writing this article, I still posted it after I finished it. I read it at least ten times, so the mechanical question you mentioned at the beginning, Sister Mi, was noticed by someone, but I am more dedicated to the theme I want to express - love and habits. Perhaps my ability to control words is still insufficient, so what I want to express is not expressed perfectly, so I added the sentence "I don't know how many people have understood my article" in the final postscript. When I wrote this article, I was actually somewhat influenced by one sentence, which led to the so-called ten years of love. "Some people are indifferent because they are too familiar." So, thinking about it the other way around, is it just because it's familiar that I'm used to it? As for the problem of copying it mechanically, I admit that because I was too obsessed with this idea, I once wanted to remove those paragraphs in order to maintain the coherence of the article. However, on second thought, the heroine has been obsessed with it for too many years and has been in love for too many years. I always thought that there must be temporary confusion about love. It is difficult for us to find a girl who can match Tezuka in reality. He has his own beliefs and goals, so love is not everything in life. Ordinary girls can't spend their lives with him because they can't bear the so-called sense of responsibility and abandon themselves. These are all issues we discussed. After talking so much nonsense, I wonder if Mi still expresses himself clearly. I will revise it carefully later. As for the areas where the concept is unclear, I will carefully consider it again. There are so many things I want to express in this article, which can be regarded as a kind of ideological maturity. In addition, the Japanese New Year is... This mistake is 54. I am interested in researching traditional Japanese New Year rice. I don't need to explain the reason... || Bingshan is indeed a person who needs to be carefully polished, ORZ... Above, put your palms together ^^

There is also... A small BUG. There is no such thing as "the third day of the Lunar New Year" in Japan. The Spring Festival is a specialty of China. In Japan, New Year's Day is celebrated on New Year's Day.

I have to say that Xiao Shanshan's writing has matured a lot in terms of writing style, thoughts, and expressions. For me, my favorite part was attending the wedding. However, the article still has flaws. The biggest flaw is the beginning of the article. "Some people say that when love has accumulated over time, it is no longer love. We are just used to being loved and loving. Many times, I often wonder, do I really love you? Your breath, your deep eyes, I was once intoxicated by ups and downs. Looking back now, am I looking for that trace of love for you in my memories? Just the ending. Between you and me, there is only the ending. " This section seems a bit mechanical. What you are talking about here may be the heroine questioning herself, is it true love or is it just habit? The theme of your article seems to be love and habits. However, judging from the full text, the theme you really express is not love and habits. It's more like dissatisfaction with the dullness of life and ultimate surrender to love. So, Xiao Shanshan, if your initial theme is love and habits, then you are suspected of going off topic. And in your sentence, "It's just the ending. Between you and me, there's only the ending." This sentence is even more impossible to talk about. How could there be only the ending? The loneliness and helplessness in this sentence are not expressed at all in the article. You mentioned the topic several times after the article, but the feeling expressed was completely different. That "ending" is not this "ending", especially since there are only two words left, which is even more weird. The way you start it gives the impression that you get right to the point and points out the topic. But the content below your article is not like this, so the beginning paragraph seems abrupt. Did you write this paragraph a long time before writing the follow-up? Why is it so... Inconsistent? "She suddenly wanted to laugh, and the heroine's words kept flashing in her mind: It's been too long. Do I really love him? I'm just used to loving him. Really... Love? Still, it's just a habit. " This sentence also touches on the same problem. Is the problem between the male and female protagonist really a matter of habit and love? The author is a bit confused. There is also a small problem, which is what Tezuka said, "Please take responsibility for your actions, the road belongs to everyone." This sentence is not like what Tezuka said, it feels like what a gentle person said. The word "please" can be deleted, and the word "the road belongs to everyone" can also be deleted. I don't feel that Tezuka is the kind of person who can explain. But it still feels weird...

Hug Coral, another good Net King fanfic... Now, people really don't understand why you would say this is a sadistic article... It's really not very sad... Counting birds, belated birthday wishes, happy birthday to you ^^