Light and Shadow (Bleach Fanfic)

Please try to write longer ones. It's a pity that there are so few of such good writing skills~~

Very interesting novel, take it away. . . Many of Xiaobai's novels are tragic, so write more sweet ones.

Not bad, thank you very much

I was scolded by my mother when I saw it Then I can't understand it anymore Depressing. . . It feels like a pretty good novel. . .

Not bad, not bad, where is the other big ID? Can you send me an address? ~``

The love inside is so heavy

I can't stand it~~ I should write a more exciting ending~~ I'm so lazy - I'm so lazy

[Complaint] №1 User: yli Comment: "Light·Shadow (Death Fan)" Rating: 2 Published on 11: 2007-05-07 15:03:02 Chapters reviewed: 16 very good

The ending is not exciting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Either be less sad or make it a comedy.

He said with tears in his eyes, "It's really a good article, but we're just sad to see it?"