One day, Dongfang discovers that Yang Lianting has been seeing other women behind his back. Heartbroken and caught off guard, he falls into someone else's trap, only to be rescued by Leng Chen, who has come from another time and place...
Their chance encounter is destined to bring them together.
Looking at Dongfang, Leng Chen says with conviction, "In this life, I want to be with just one person, forever, sharing life and death and never parting."
Meeting Leng Chen's gaze, Dongfang replies with equal conviction, "So do I!"
See how the two of them laugh their way through a world of deceit and danger...
Since the male protagonist is a special police officer, he shouldn't be so kind to a woman. It is not in line with the characteristics of a police officer who has received strict special training. I originally thought that the author's male protagonist should be a resolute and decisive person, who makes decisions before taking action, and who is also benevolent and righteous. But when I saw everything mutated in the end, I knew that Ren Woxing and a bunch of people were a threat to Dongfang's life. He should have gone to solve it together when he got the consent to kill them. As soon as the author wrote it down, I felt that the male protagonist was too kind. I feel so tired when I look at it. A warrior like Dongfang Bubai who has no choice but to seek power should not be like this. The character's personality has changed.
You are a pig, why don't you update?
Vomit! ! ! ! Bad male protagonist. The male protagonist with such a virgin is not worthy of Dongfang!
Originally, I was the most disgusted with the version of Swordsman played by Huo Jianhua. However, after seeing Dongfang Bubai in your writing, I think that version of Swordsman was nothing more than that. At least she was a real woman! The author is great, I really recommend you to read the East written by other authors, silly mothers. Try to figure out the character's personality and think about it before writing. Don't just think that you want to give Dongfang a good ending and just write it randomly. This is disrespectful to the characters in the novel! I hope you can think twice before writing fan fiction. In fact, you just don't know enough about the character's personality. Others are pretty good. Such as the description of the scene and so on. The author is great, so you can't be biased when writing articles. I can see that you are biased when writing about the character Ren Yingying, and that won't work. When writing a fanfic, the supporting characters of the original work should be restored as much as possible. Because no matter whether you are good or evil, the protagonist or the supporting role, even if you are a supporting role, you have to be responsible for them, and it is not okay to be biased. Okay, having said all that, this is my own experience. I hope you can think about it before writing. I'm looking forward to your next fic. Come on!
I have to say that you, the author, have won. You are the only one who can write the world's most invincible master into the inexperienced White Lotus! If Mr. Jin knew that you were ruining his characters like this. . Haha~ You should really be glad that Dongfang Invincible is just a character in a book. Otherwise, do you think he would poke you into a sieve? Haha~
I have to say that you, the author, have won. You are the only one who can write the world's most invincible master into the inexperienced White Lotus! If Mr. Jin knew that you were ruining his characters like this. . Haha~ You should really be glad that Dongfang Invincible is just a character in a book. Otherwise, do you think he would poke you into a sieve? Haha ~ you
Are you really writing about the Invincible East? It's Dongfang Xiaobai, right? It's up to you
This Ren Yingying is so disgusting! Ren Yingying in the original work is also annoying, she just doesn't make people want to see her!
Fang Huai should be able to come back on time. Dongfang will be more careful if he finds something strange.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't stop updating.
Since the male protagonist is a special police officer, he shouldn't be so kind to a woman. It is not in line with the characteristics of a police officer who has received strict special training. I originally thought that the author's male protagonist should be a resolute and decisive person, who makes decisions before taking action, and who is also benevolent and righteous. But when I saw everything mutated in the end, I knew that Ren Woxing and a bunch of people were a threat to Dongfang's life. He should have gone to solve it together when he got the consent to kill them. As soon as the author wrote it down, I felt that the male protagonist was too kind. I feel so tired when I look at it. A warrior like Dongfang Bubai who has no choice but to seek power should not be like this. The character's personality has changed.
You are a pig, why don't you update?
Vomit! ! ! ! Bad male protagonist. The male protagonist with such a virgin is not worthy of Dongfang!
Originally, I was the most disgusted with the version of Swordsman played by Huo Jianhua. However, after seeing Dongfang Bubai in your writing, I think that version of Swordsman was nothing more than that. At least she was a real woman! The author is great, I really recommend you to read the East written by other authors, silly mothers. Try to figure out the character's personality and think about it before writing. Don't just think that you want to give Dongfang a good ending and just write it randomly. This is disrespectful to the characters in the novel! I hope you can think twice before writing fan fiction. In fact, you just don't know enough about the character's personality. Others are pretty good. Such as the description of the scene and so on. The author is great, so you can't be biased when writing articles. I can see that you are biased when writing about the character Ren Yingying, and that won't work. When writing a fanfic, the supporting characters of the original work should be restored as much as possible. Because no matter whether you are good or evil, the protagonist or the supporting role, even if you are a supporting role, you have to be responsible for them, and it is not okay to be biased. Okay, having said all that, this is my own experience. I hope you can think about it before writing. I'm looking forward to your next fic. Come on!
I have to say that you, the author, have won. You are the only one who can write the world's most invincible master into the inexperienced White Lotus! If Mr. Jin knew that you were ruining his characters like this. . Haha~ You should really be glad that Dongfang Invincible is just a character in a book. Otherwise, do you think he would poke you into a sieve? Haha~
I have to say that you, the author, have won. You are the only one who can write the world's most invincible master into the inexperienced White Lotus! If Mr. Jin knew that you were ruining his characters like this. . Haha~ You should really be glad that Dongfang Invincible is just a character in a book. Otherwise, do you think he would poke you into a sieve? Haha ~ you
Are you really writing about the Invincible East? It's Dongfang Xiaobai, right? It's up to you
This Ren Yingying is so disgusting! Ren Yingying in the original work is also annoying, she just doesn't make people want to see her!
Fang Huai should be able to come back on time. Dongfang will be more careful if he finds something strange.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't stop updating.