[Prince of Tennis] Forbidden Love Beneath the Purple Iris

The auntie's jokes are really tried and true!

I often see boys in comics walking with their hands behind their heads. Then I tried it myself and found that walking became twisted, and I felt tired after raising my hands so high for a long time.

Looking at the name, I thought it was Cun Gewen

Seeing this really felt like there was a fish bone stuck in my throat. I wanted to swallow but couldn't, and I wanted to spit but couldn't spit it out. Suddenly, I seemed to have a feeling of disgust towards Atobe-sama, whom I admired. QAQ, no matter what, I don't want to hate Atobe-sama at all! ! It's a pity to abandon it, and keep looking at it again. . .

I don't like this heroine, she's so pretentious

It's actually finished

It's over. . Suddenly there was an indescribable emotion. . Spread flowers Spread flowers Spread flowers

I'm so embarrassed, Chenzi has been dragging out orders recently, it's really, ugh... Well, let's get started now! First of all, things like wife slaves really hit Chenzi's cuteness! (The article is so long, I'm far away, so I'll take this article...) The beginning, the first chapter... This is unscientific, why can't I understand it? Mosquito-repellent incense eyes ~ Although the author seems to have revised his essay, but! I'd better fix it, I don't understand. The heroine gets angry at first, and feels guilty after she gets angry. To be honest, I haven't seen the movie, and I don't know Li Jiacheng's character. I really don't know what they are talking about. Has the heroine already traveled through time or is she a character in the original play? Moreover, the heroine's emotions jump too quickly. The author did not connect the background information well in the long dialogue, and the previous processing was a bit hasty. I think this is also the reason why the clicks in the first two chapters dropped sharply. Chapter 2... The Chinese text is added to the English text. It is recommended to change it to Pinyin or Japanese transliteration. This seems a bit strange. The brain waves showed that they were not the same person. It was a very clever idea, but the doctor's attitude was unscientific. Part of Japanese culture overlaps with China, and the same goes for ghosts. I personally think that the heroine's mother and the doctor knew that the heroine Xinzi had been replaced. They probably shouldn't have this attitude. It was too calm, and the one who left did not seem like their relative. Well, some sentences still need to be read, there are some bugs, and there are some wrong sentences. For example, there is a sentence in the middle: "Genichiro Sanada is one of the comics with a style that she doesn't like very much." This is a wrong sentence, so I still need to revise it. Well, let's get into the text. First of all, Chenzi has to make a statement. Chenzi doesn't like to remember people's names when reading articles, so I will be stricter in describing the characters. (And it may be because Chenzi is preparing for the postgraduate entrance examination recently and is a little strict.) Let's talk about the plot first. There are generally no problems with the plot. I watched the revised version, and the overall plot is relatively smooth, which is good. However, there is a problem with the plot connection. After reading it, I read it again and found that more than half of each chapter is dialogue. It is not impossible to use dialogue to connect the plot, but it is too monotonous. There is a lot less psychological and external description. Japanese manga style articles generally have more dialogue, but it should be kept at about one-third or one-fourth. Regarding the character image, the first thing that must be affirmed is that the heroine's image has been maintained well. After the rebirth, the heroine's relatively calm and comfortable performance made me very sure. According to the heroine's previous life, she is not too young, which is more in line with her psychology. The following series of descriptions, the principle of not offending anyone, the smooth and casual life, etc. Are also in line with my taste. The feeling of the heroine is really good. As for the male protagonist, it's okay. It's just that the description was not strong enough at the beginning, which made the image relatively simple. In the previous chapters, many plots started without establishing the image of the male protagonist very well. As a result, the image of the male protagonist was still weak in some of the previous chapters. If you add more descriptions, it might be better. As for the others, well, this may be an area that I think needs slight revision. There are a lot of characters appearing one by one, and then disappearing, and they are not even well described. They are like NPCs in the game, with no sense of flesh and blood, causing readers to skip the plot. In fact, this may also be the reason why the description is not strong enough. In the end, after reading the whole story, I actually felt that it was pretty good. It has a relatively consistent Japanese comic style, the heroine's character is quite likable, the plot is natural, and the hero is popular. The overall story is quite good. I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Unheard shop name·Changping Shop] Chenzi

Reaching out to Genichiro's neck? Hug?

Burrowing to counterattack? It's a Jedi counterattack!