
Unrequited Love (Slam Dunk Fanfiction)
暗恋(SLAM DUNK同人)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 451k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
54Chapters
239Favorites
8.8Score
2.6kClicks per chapter
37Comments
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The biggest killer weapon of Secret Love is to capture the style of the original work. The style of the original work not only refers to the direction of the original work. . . First, the writing adopts the line drawing technique of Japanese comics. Literary fanfics emphasize the mastery of words, while comic fanfics, I think, emphasize more on the sense of pictures and are good at narrative. The dialogue, actions and psychological activities of secret love replace long descriptions, making it easy and natural to read. Even the background that must be described will be as concise and clear as possible: "A small red-roofed bakery facing a quiet street, with a unique wooden sign at the door, white tables and chairs with carved patterns under dark green parasols, and bathed in the clear sunshine on Sunday morning. It gives people an unexpectedly good feeling." It's like seeing a cartoon, it is very easy to figure out. (But, I don't know why, but I always think of Yukine Hoonami's style of painting. Not that of Inoue Okami... The second is to grasp the timeline. Excluding extras, it was written from August 1993 to April of the following year. Compared with other fics that are always twenty years later, the progress of time is already quite slow. But just like SD itself has been painting Sakuragi for 4 months. Condensing it into a relatively short time can make every day rich and every Xianliu interaction very detailed. This meticulous style determines the rare linear development of Senryu's emotional context. You can feel how they test and adjust, conflict and consolidate their love. How to understand each other and how to like each other more and more. . . (Really, this is really not easy. Although I have read almost 4,000 senryu novels, most of them skipped love. It's a tacit understanding that the two of them are in love and have a deep love for each other. So I saw Secret Love and how moved I was, author, did you create it! ! ! Just like another reader's message, I really feel the charm of Senryu! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Rose-colored youth! Run towards the sunset! The third point. . Everyone showed up and played basketball seriously! Everyone in Kanagawa basically has their own story of being independent from Senryu. Sakuragi can cook the food taught by his father, Mitsui is reluctant to leave the basketball club, and Miyagi vows to have a captain-like appearance. . . There is also Lingnan Sangxia who protects Sendō around the clock and cares about the captain's position (How could we give such a cute Sendō to that brat casually! Kazukami Kiyota who appeared in the library is so cute! And I am very grateful to the author for describing the scene of playing basketball. Many plots, such as Sakuragi learning outside shooting and worrying about his injuries, are very realistic. It gives people a feeling that this is how it should continue, blurring the boundaries between fan fiction and original works! Good! The last point and what attracts me the most is the Senryu-kan that Prin once mentioned. I think it's just that I don't like the big Senryu-kan and it's very suitable for me! I simply can't find anything more right. In fact, I think the Senryu in the original work are all people who have the ability to switch on and off the court. They are their essence on the court (genius and offensive ghost), and their daily appearance off the court (loose My Pace and cute high school student, Secret Love does not ignore the multi-faceted characters of their two characters, so the Senryu created is so convincing. First of all, I don't like to be guessed. The cold fairy way behind the gentleness is really charming. Rather than being cold, it is better to say that he is too smart and rational. He is rational to a certain extent and always maintains an attitude of obeying fate. He can easily see through everything. Neither can they deliberately establish special connections with others, nor can they completely burn themselves out. Sendao once said to Cross Country, "These people are just some insignificant scenery, passing by in front of my eyes. They always feel as if they are smiling at them, and they are very satisfied, so why not do it." However, because Sendao is a kind and a little lazy young man, he wraps himself up with seemingly simple tenderness and does not like to be understood. (For example, every time he is in high spirits or low interest, there are good and deep reasons, but he will only tell others that it is "interesting" or "uninteresting". But it is this kind of gentle and cold fairy who "doesn't bother others or myself." When he shows the obsession and care of a young man to Rukawa, it really makes people beat... Next is Rukawa. There are many more Rukawa in the original work than Sendō, so everyone can grasp his character better than Sendō. Here I will only talk about Rukawa's performance after falling in love. It is said that if it is not true love, Rukawa will not bother to engage in the time-consuming and laborious thing of falling in love, so once it falls in love, it must be true love. He will absolutely go all out and devote himself to it without reservation. He likes physical contact, has a strong possessiveness, tolerates the shortcomings of the other party, and silently keeps everything the other party says in his heart. All in all, he is a reliable attacker (eh) The other party doesn't like to be read, and Rukawa happens to be the one who doesn't want to be read. The other party likes to break away with one blow, while Rukawa stays where he is. Although there were some reluctances in the process, Rukawa is also very smart and adapts to all changes. I don't have to follow your pace. You are always mine anyway, so it's better to let you, who is fickle, rely on me. In the last chapter, Rukawa forgives Sendo and throws the folding knife into the sea without saying goodbye, saying "No need." Rukawa is so masculine that it makes people beat... This kind of boy in love is a bit young and handsome. . . All in all, they are two people who get along very well! Rukawa brings the essence of life and security like a clear spring to Immortal Road. What Immortal Road brings to Rukawa is a rich world of colors and unfathomable intoxication. When I first watched Secret Love, I thought Rukawa's single arrow was thicker, but after watching it several times, I felt that Senryu's love was completely equal, but the way they loved each other was different. So recently I have been listening to Miley Cyrus' new song Adore You while re-reading this article! The chorus part fits the floating feeling of love that this article gave me. Thank you so much to the author for bringing us such a good fairy tale! !
As expected, I am still suitable for reading mindless white novels. The ups and downs of this kind of struggle and attitude are too real. The more I think about it, the more depressed I become. I am not worthy of using my brain.
Although Rukawa is quite slow and arrogant towards girls, he usually behaves politely and says hello during formal meetings. He may belong to a big family that doesn't often deal with women.
I started to panic a little bit... I really don't care about Sakuragi's situation if he can't qualify, just don't end up not being able to play basketball.
It's really frustrating to follow the original work. If you don't follow the plot, you can't follow it. If you don't follow it, it will be very troublesome. However, the writing style is really good, and the patience is probably good. It is concise but not poor. It is much better than some anecdotes I have seen (the original work is really difficult to write)
Mainly because I feel that in this chapter Rukawa finally broke into the safe distance of Immortal Dao in a rough and direct way. . . Rukawa goodjob!
Keep watching again. . Elopement is so exciting!
Ferrero is indeed not as delicious as Dove. . . . Ah, how sweet. . .
I think this first time is very cute! ! Super cute Senryu! I couldn't help but come back to score again. . .
It's good, very good, and it feels different from the Senryu novels I've read before. Emotionally, they are all trying to figure out how to tolerate each other. They don't get along right away, and they don't understand each other without saying anything^^ Especially the plot the first time made me laugh. They are both so good, and it's normal when I think about it. There is no reason for Sendo to eat up Rukawa like he is familiar with it. After all, he is a high school student, and the other party is a boy.