From the future to ancient times.
(The descriptions of the future are based on a book titled Prophecy by a medium.)
Traveling from the future in a spaceship, they arrive in the Southern Song just as it is about to fall... A thrilling journey and joyful adventure through a tragic world, with plenty of H, of course!
They say, "A flower contains a world." This is a fairy tale: 100% historical fact, and 100% adult fairy tale! A soothing balm for anyone driven into depression by history. Of course, another name for it would be: a cringeworthy fic.
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It's really beautiful, and each character's image is very distinct. I just didn't expect so few people to watch it? The one I recommended from the "Iron-Blooded Candid" book is indeed on par with Koda's books. Is it because the author has not signed a contract with the book that he recommended it? Read it in two days in one go
I have read all the adult fairy tales, but this one has been put on hold. Thanks for the net this time. Let me have time to read it slowly. It is so well written! History is too heavy, so rewriting it like this is perfect. There are also all kinds of beautiful emotions that make people feel a lot. The encounter between Li Yue and Lu Min was beautiful and innocent. He loves with all his strength, and I actually feel sorry for him. If they are together, Li Yue's love will always be more pure and heart-breaking. The problems faced by Lu Min will also make this relationship twists and turns. Thanks to He Rong for showing up and thanking him for his love. Meeting the right person at the right time is so important! Fairytale perfection, everything, full of healing power! Thank you for the great article, and I hope to see new works!
Thank you for your beautiful article. This article can be written better.
What moved me most about this article was the emotional interaction between Li Yue and Azhuo. Li Yue's first love was also very touching. In comparison, the presentation of Zhao Yu's desire for control and lack of security seems monotonous and almost ignored, making the final revelation of his mother's death in childhood not an explosion of accumulated emotion, but rather like an explanation that has to be given. A lover who has lost his lover as an adult can completely write about the progressive ups and downs based on the loss of his mother in childhood, but it is a pity that there is too little ink and it is wasted.
Also wasted was the character Ye Ming. How did he know Zhao Yu's innermost needs? How did he accept and cherish Zhao Yu in all aspects through his behavior? There are not enough details, or the description of the details is not convincing enough. On the other hand, why did Zhao Yu finally accept Ye Ming? Was it emotionally moved? Or is it based on your own plans or needs? Is it for fulfillment? Out of attachment? Is it a matter of necessity to go with the flow? Or let go of your inner demons and enjoy the vast world?
Don't know anything.
Literally recalling the character of Zhao Yu, he is fully worthy of "a page full of nonsense and a handful of bitter tears". Unfortunately, he cannot achieve the kind of natural touch from the heart to the emotion. As a result, people are not very impressed, and there is no strong will to think about him. He also suffered from childhood loss, but the description in "The Story of a Broken Hairpin" is much more convincing. Of course, it doesn't have to be so comprehensive in every chapter. Half of the story of "The Story of a Broken Hairpin" is enough.
Let's talk about historical facts and war descriptions. It's obvious that a lot of effort has been put into the historical facts of this article. It's shocking when you first read it, but later on the impact becomes weaker and weaker, and it doesn't integrate well with the story itself. The more mixed it is, the more complicated and confusing it will be, and the appeal will be greatly reduced. I love to write group portraits and am good at writing group portraits. Have you ever considered changing the narrative perspective from the protagonist to a group portrait of a supporting role, or even a supporting role? The first time Zhao Li saves someone at the beginning of the article is another detail that I like very much. Why? Because there are trade-offs, and when it is cut off, it is cut off, so it is true and has an aftertaste. In contrast, the descriptions of many grand sieges and war scenes later appear to be single and weak, and the atmosphere is not as good as that of the later "The Weak Girl of the General" and "The Story of the Broken Hairpin".
And the tactics are basically laid out in the same pattern. There are no accidents, no coincidences, no mishaps, no mistakes. Everything is done step by step. All the characters perform their duties in a regular manner. One is good, another is just okay, and repeated over and over again is boring. In order to write about the war well, I must have checked a lot of historical materials on the war. Have you ever noticed how many misunderstandings and misjudgments were involved in real wars? The Battle of Midway is a typical example. This battle was originally a battle for the U. S. Military to turn the tide on the main battlefield in the Pacific. However, if you look closely at the number of mistakes made by the U. S. At that time, it is jaw-dropping. However, this is not the case, there can be no ups and downs, no thrills, no sighs and sighs behind the cover. Control makes people feel safe, but complete control is not a real, normal, or even beautiful life and world.
You are a very talented author. I hope to see more of your masterpieces in the future!
After watching it, I have regrets and shortcomings. The portrayal of Zhao Yu and this person could be better! I like Zhao Yu, Zhao Yu's past relationship, Zhao Yu's thoughts about Ye Ming, there is no description at all, this CP Lalang's writing is too tough! The details are ambiguous and you won't give me any details! It's okay if there is too little interaction between these two people, there is no key transformation process yet! I like this pair of CP very much! So I won't be happy if I don't express these regrets.
My favorite adult fairy tale. The author's large words are very warm.
The novel is great. The two male protagonists went to change the cruel history of the decline of the Southern Song Dynasty. It was very exciting. The Northern Expedition was very interesting. There were many emotional scenes and psychological descriptions of Li Yue. His relationship with A Zhuo was very well written. However, he started to have a dog-licking relationship with Lu Min (which made the reader understand Lu Min, but also dislike Lu Min) and some cowardly and soft-hearted virgin bitch performances. If it were applied to the female protagonist, she would have been scolded to death. Since he is the leading actor and has the most scenes, his sunny and gentle body makes up for most of his shortcomings. I prefer the pairing of Zhao Yu and Ye Ming, but it's a pity that the author put too little emphasis on their emotions, which makes many readers feel that they are tough. Whether it is the ambiguous interaction between the two or their inner activities, they are almost zero. We can only look for some of the chaotic performances of Ye Ming to protect Zhao Yu, but there is no change in trust in Zhao Yu. Zhao Yu is not interested in Ye Ming's life-saving grace and finally accepts the change. Therefore, if there are more emotionally ambiguous scenes of this pair, the story will be more exciting, and I believe more people will like it, so this part of the novel is a bit regretful.
Is there a physical copy of this book?
When will the new article be published?
When will the new article be published?
When will the new article be published?
Thank you author! I've read your other books, but I didn't get the introduction to this one, and now I feel like it's too late to meet you! Like Li Yue
By this time, I have read all the author's articles. I can't stop reading each one and review it over and over again. Thank you very much to the author for giving us such a wonderful experience! The characters created by the author are all unique and have their own merits. The story scenes and time settings are also colorful and have profound meanings. However, the values, worldview, outlook on life, beautiful and rich analysis of human nature, and philosophy of life that run through it are always the most shining part of the novel and my favorite! Based on the clues provided by the author, I also referred to some books and materials, which greatly expanded my ideas and benefited a lot! I can't help but admire the author's extensive knowledge and profound insights! In short, the author's novel is my favorite among the online articles I have read, and I am sincerely grateful to the author! I also hope that the author can keep writing and spread more love and beauty to the world!
It's really beautiful, and each character's image is very distinct. I just didn't expect so few people to watch it? The one I recommended from the "Iron-Blooded Candid" book is indeed on par with Koda's books. Is it because the author has not signed a contract with the book that he recommended it? Read it in two days in one go
I have read all the adult fairy tales, but this one has been put on hold. Thanks for the net this time. Let me have time to read it slowly. It is so well written! History is too heavy, so rewriting it like this is perfect. There are also all kinds of beautiful emotions that make people feel a lot. The encounter between Li Yue and Lu Min was beautiful and innocent. He loves with all his strength, and I actually feel sorry for him. If they are together, Li Yue's love will always be more pure and heart-breaking. The problems faced by Lu Min will also make this relationship twists and turns. Thanks to He Rong for showing up and thanking him for his love. Meeting the right person at the right time is so important! Fairytale perfection, everything, full of healing power! Thank you for the great article, and I hope to see new works!
Thank you for your beautiful article. This article can be written better. What moved me most about this article was the emotional interaction between Li Yue and Azhuo. Li Yue's first love was also very touching. In comparison, the presentation of Zhao Yu's desire for control and lack of security seems monotonous and almost ignored, making the final revelation of his mother's death in childhood not an explosion of accumulated emotion, but rather like an explanation that has to be given. A lover who has lost his lover as an adult can completely write about the progressive ups and downs based on the loss of his mother in childhood, but it is a pity that there is too little ink and it is wasted. Also wasted was the character Ye Ming. How did he know Zhao Yu's innermost needs? How did he accept and cherish Zhao Yu in all aspects through his behavior? There are not enough details, or the description of the details is not convincing enough. On the other hand, why did Zhao Yu finally accept Ye Ming? Was it emotionally moved? Or is it based on your own plans or needs? Is it for fulfillment? Out of attachment? Is it a matter of necessity to go with the flow? Or let go of your inner demons and enjoy the vast world? Don't know anything. Literally recalling the character of Zhao Yu, he is fully worthy of "a page full of nonsense and a handful of bitter tears". Unfortunately, he cannot achieve the kind of natural touch from the heart to the emotion. As a result, people are not very impressed, and there is no strong will to think about him. He also suffered from childhood loss, but the description in "The Story of a Broken Hairpin" is much more convincing. Of course, it doesn't have to be so comprehensive in every chapter. Half of the story of "The Story of a Broken Hairpin" is enough. Let's talk about historical facts and war descriptions. It's obvious that a lot of effort has been put into the historical facts of this article. It's shocking when you first read it, but later on the impact becomes weaker and weaker, and it doesn't integrate well with the story itself. The more mixed it is, the more complicated and confusing it will be, and the appeal will be greatly reduced. I love to write group portraits and am good at writing group portraits. Have you ever considered changing the narrative perspective from the protagonist to a group portrait of a supporting role, or even a supporting role? The first time Zhao Li saves someone at the beginning of the article is another detail that I like very much. Why? Because there are trade-offs, and when it is cut off, it is cut off, so it is true and has an aftertaste. In contrast, the descriptions of many grand sieges and war scenes later appear to be single and weak, and the atmosphere is not as good as that of the later "The Weak Girl of the General" and "The Story of the Broken Hairpin". And the tactics are basically laid out in the same pattern. There are no accidents, no coincidences, no mishaps, no mistakes. Everything is done step by step. All the characters perform their duties in a regular manner. One is good, another is just okay, and repeated over and over again is boring. In order to write about the war well, I must have checked a lot of historical materials on the war. Have you ever noticed how many misunderstandings and misjudgments were involved in real wars? The Battle of Midway is a typical example. This battle was originally a battle for the U. S. Military to turn the tide on the main battlefield in the Pacific. However, if you look closely at the number of mistakes made by the U. S. At that time, it is jaw-dropping. However, this is not the case, there can be no ups and downs, no thrills, no sighs and sighs behind the cover. Control makes people feel safe, but complete control is not a real, normal, or even beautiful life and world. You are a very talented author. I hope to see more of your masterpieces in the future!
After watching it, I have regrets and shortcomings. The portrayal of Zhao Yu and this person could be better! I like Zhao Yu, Zhao Yu's past relationship, Zhao Yu's thoughts about Ye Ming, there is no description at all, this CP Lalang's writing is too tough! The details are ambiguous and you won't give me any details! It's okay if there is too little interaction between these two people, there is no key transformation process yet! I like this pair of CP very much! So I won't be happy if I don't express these regrets.
My favorite adult fairy tale. The author's large words are very warm.
The novel is great. The two male protagonists went to change the cruel history of the decline of the Southern Song Dynasty. It was very exciting. The Northern Expedition was very interesting. There were many emotional scenes and psychological descriptions of Li Yue. His relationship with A Zhuo was very well written. However, he started to have a dog-licking relationship with Lu Min (which made the reader understand Lu Min, but also dislike Lu Min) and some cowardly and soft-hearted virgin bitch performances. If it were applied to the female protagonist, she would have been scolded to death. Since he is the leading actor and has the most scenes, his sunny and gentle body makes up for most of his shortcomings. I prefer the pairing of Zhao Yu and Ye Ming, but it's a pity that the author put too little emphasis on their emotions, which makes many readers feel that they are tough. Whether it is the ambiguous interaction between the two or their inner activities, they are almost zero. We can only look for some of the chaotic performances of Ye Ming to protect Zhao Yu, but there is no change in trust in Zhao Yu. Zhao Yu is not interested in Ye Ming's life-saving grace and finally accepts the change. Therefore, if there are more emotionally ambiguous scenes of this pair, the story will be more exciting, and I believe more people will like it, so this part of the novel is a bit regretful.
Is there a physical copy of this book?
When will the new article be published? When will the new article be published? When will the new article be published?
Thank you author! I've read your other books, but I didn't get the introduction to this one, and now I feel like it's too late to meet you! Like Li Yue
By this time, I have read all the author's articles. I can't stop reading each one and review it over and over again. Thank you very much to the author for giving us such a wonderful experience! The characters created by the author are all unique and have their own merits. The story scenes and time settings are also colorful and have profound meanings. However, the values, worldview, outlook on life, beautiful and rich analysis of human nature, and philosophy of life that run through it are always the most shining part of the novel and my favorite! Based on the clues provided by the author, I also referred to some books and materials, which greatly expanded my ideas and benefited a lot! I can't help but admire the author's extensive knowledge and profound insights! In short, the author's novel is my favorite among the online articles I have read, and I am sincerely grateful to the author! I also hope that the author can keep writing and spread more love and beauty to the world!