(SAO: Sword Art Online) Belonging

So, are there any good sword fanfics out there...

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I feel like I can't get enough

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I thought about writing a review for a long time, and finally couldn't help but write it after customizing it. I organized the language within three days and posted it. When I first saw the protagonist in Lalanjiang's Belonging, I had a lot of hesitation. The male and female protagonists are both original and not time-travelling. I don't know which way to open a fanfic that I don't know about the protagonist's personality is the right way [Do you think it's a big gift package? Turn the table. I almost smashed my laptop when I made up my mind to click on the first chapter. Why did the first chapter show a pervert with a twisted personality? How could you do this to such a cute girl Lial? After calming down, I discovered that Lial was seeking death unilaterally. After seeing the final outcome, I should sigh, this is called a magic horse, if you don't seek death, you will not die! You were cheating on a cute loli girl who was trying to kill you. [How much does Hun Dan Mu Zui despise him! Mana's character is not the carefree, optimistic, and immortal character in other novels. Mana is very timid and cherishes her life. Some people even think that she is greedy for life and afraid of death. However, Mana does not have any ability to recognize people. She is a smaller girl. Where can she go with high skills, abilities and force? Not every protagonist has to use scary cheats. Although Mana is timid, she knows what to do and what not to do. She will take the initiative to find Tatsuya to let him rest when he has not been able to sleep for several days. , Even though her tone was mixed with a feeling of submissiveness, even though she jumped into the trap dug by Lial, she still agreed. Mana is a very realistic girl, and the doll is naturally stupid, which makes it even more adorable [raises thumbs] Regarding Tatsuya's "tune" The play \"Only Naiyu paused with a stiff face. At first, she may have thought that she was concerned about Tatsuya because he had the same situation - he could not sleep when he first came to the world of SAO. After a long time, Mana discovered that that kind of feeling was not a simple dependence, but a name. Mana likes Tatsuya because of the love factor, but Mana can't understand Tatsuya. Tatsuya brings a lunch box to Mana every day when Mana has a special mission. Finally, Mana said to Tatsuya, "I'll make something for you to eat from now on." Tatsuya smiled, and Tatsuya also needed her. This is the greatest happiness for Mana, she is a needed person. Mana is not weak, she just thinks that she has not been strong because of her inner troubles, a kind of girl's inferiority complex. After meeting Asuna, the master of Kirito's harem, she feels that she is inferior to others, but she is still an irreplaceable person that Tatsuya needs. , Then the disappearance of her friend Xiaohui made Mana take a firm step on the road of growth. Although it was only a small step, it was already very good for the girl Mana. What happened next? Later, I started to play in confinement. The reason was the real thing called Tianjing. A mentally ill scumbag, Chen also used the methods his father used on him on sister Mana [Young man, don't you know that girls are meant for pushing down and not for confinement~] The girl broke out decisively, lock me up in a dark room, you can sleep on the sofa for me from now on! Although the method used by Chenya is wrong, it is also based on the purpose of protection. Although the process is a bit distorted and the method is a bit wrong, the harvest is not small. The self-destruction history is even worse, but when I was young, I heard that the male protagonist not only skipped classes and followed him, but skipped classes and what? It's not important. What's important is that young man, you actually subconsciously placed the voiceless, soft-bodied, easy-to-push natural girl in your mother's place. Instantly, a mouthful of old blood got stuck in your throat. Fortunately, it was Mana. If she was like Mina in the OP, she would have been kicked by her long ago. I don't even know what SAO is. Did I self-destruct my life after playing in confinement? It doesn't count as self-destruction. Lial, who had a distorted personality, revealed that Chen was also a soldier. He was the descendant of a very awesome and coaxing lieutenant general. Hundan, why don't you come to experience the first-class military academy? Garden life? After finishing struggling with the identity of the male protagonist, it's time for the cute girl to see the real lolita Yui, huh? Are you talking about Lial's sneak attack on the dragon egg? Not to mention the twisted personality of Hundan, who is so perverted that even the gentle female dragon wants to tease her, I have to mention Yui's The appearance is a kind of spiritual healing for people, a cute random girl [saliva], Mana also got a hidden CG of Tatsuya hugging Yui [dirt], and finally Mana understood a truth that cannot be concealed, Lial is a complete A crazy person who is twisted in front of data. Isn't there a saying that geniuses are crazy people? The time was almost up. The two of them kissed and touched each other. It's time for you, young man, to be responsible for meeting your parents. Mana didn't think so. She started to say that Mana is a rational and realistic person. She understands how her identity and Tatsuya's identity will play out in the future. Such ups and downs, an ordinary family and a family of generations of lieutenant generals and soldiers, put a lot of pressure on Mana. When Chenya repeatedly said that he would wait until the game is over to find Mana, Mana repeatedly dodges, and finally couldn't help crying and told her. Chen Ye, maybe Chen Ye just wanted to be with Mana in the future, but he didn't think about other factors. Doesn't Mana not want to be with Chen Ye? No, she may have been able to express her love for Chen, but reason kept reminding the two of them. Identity in the world, relationships that are not predicated on marriage are all hooligans, and what Mana is doing now is to be responsible for the future. I like Mana's rationality, although some people think she is too pretentious, but in my opinion, if you haven't even thought about the future, That means you are really irresponsible. You have to face everything. You can't escape for a while, but you didn't expect that it was Tatsuya who went to see his parents first. Although there was a "love rival" controlled by his sister that brought a lot of trouble to Tatsuya, in the end he was still beaten by Tatsuya. I almost choked and almost died. I have to say that these two people are together because their brainwaves match the same type. In the last extra chapter, when Mana finally saw Alexander, I instantly thought of the Sanmao in The Hunter. But thinking about it, Alexander would be cuter than Sanmao. Although Alexander's bullying character is hard to beat, and he was really beaten later. Girl Mana is chasing after her and smashing her in all kinds of ways╮(╯_╰)╭ At this point, it's almost done. After reading it, I often breathed a sigh of relief. The two-year jogging was finally over. Although some parts were embarrassing in the process, Mana and Tatsuya are together. Mana is making progress step by step. Every time One step is not very big, but after accumulating, I realize that I have taken such a big step. From a timid girl hiding in the initial village to a ferocious girl who rose to the forefront, the process is also colorful. Not everyone is so strong, not everyone Everyone has unmatched power. There are not many plots in the article, but I kept saying in my heart, "This is a story that suits the two of them." There is no need for too much plot between them. As soon as one person raises his eyes, the other person will understand what it means. , Maybe Tatsuya is not as gentle and considerate as Kirito, and does not have Kirito's excessive tolerance. Tatsuya makes sarcastic remarks or even ignores outsiders, because he gave all his tenderness to Mana. A person who is gentle to everyone will not be a good husband, Tatsuya She will also warn the men who come into contact with Mana, but at the same time, when she returns home, she will turn on the light and wait for Mana because she is afraid of the dark. That is the tenderness that only belongs to Mana. This one place is unique, and even if there are two places, it will explode. He [You can do it! Hey! After reading many SAO articles, this article is the one that makes me feel warm. However, this is the end of the long review. After reading it from the beginning, I found that Alexander [pseudo] and McGee [No matter how many times I type this name, the word "Machi" will appear first. Language] In addition to Olivier and Penn girls, Lial, who has no moral integrity and did not go offline to sneak attack on dragon eggs, are all mentioned. Hey, let's leave it to the second post of the long review. I hope Lalanjiang will have everything to be on the list in 2014! Hee hee ~ Finally! Please improve Lalanjiang's long review! ! ! ! O(≧v≦)o~~ Finished.

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