Old Li's Detective Notes: The Rooftop

Why is Qiqi so annoying? She seems hard to understand.

Qiqi and Lao Li must be like this because they love each other so much. . .

Hell is other people. What kind of people live in this building? It's like

I think the author should reduce the description of the inextricable relationships between his colleagues and relatives around Lao Li. There are many relationships between characters in each case. Lao Li himself is also in a complex network of relationships. The two lines of work go hand in hand, which makes it difficult for me to read. I am not saying that we should give up the description of Qiqi, Lao Xue and others. I suggest that the dialogue and interaction between them should be made more interesting or plain. Lao Li faces the chaos of the case every day, and his friends and family around him are also in confusion. The two messy lines are getting more and more confusing at the same time. I should have read with gusto when the case climaxed, but with the chaos of the relationship network around Lao Li, I was very tired every time I read at the key points of the case.

It's very strange. Why is there no v? It's very beautiful.

He Xiao is not necessarily a lesbian. She listens to Xue's words and seems to be obsessed with him. The thing about the two sisters is also very strange. The elder sister is so stupid. Why should the younger sister listen to her elder sister? This is also very strange. It's not like she can't stand on her own.

I didn't think what the old lady said was right, but I didn't expect that this was the murderer.

Is this a mental retardation? Don't blame Xue Guai Lao Li? ? ?

With a wave of his hand, there was a pile.

Although the author's writing is quite good, at least the final analysis is basically complete, but some clues are hidden from the readers, indicating that there is still room for improvement. I hope the author will continue to improve.