This is a story about a good-for-nothing girl.
Liang Lilu is a good-for-nothing, and a fool, too.
Even good-for-nothings get their springtime, and even good-for-nothings have someone they like.
But why? Why?! Why does the person she likes already belong to someone else?
Don't underestimate a good-for-nothing. Don't underestimate Liang Lilu...
All right, in the end, she's still a good-for-nothing. Hmm... no, she's become more than just a little better than one.
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First, let's take a look at the structure of this article.
Original and imaginary articles, then the world view is very important.
What is the worldview of this world? If there is no introduction at all, it will be quite confusing. In fact, I am very sorry that I did not have a clear idea of the protagonist's basic family lineage and world before seeing Chapter 3... Ahem.
Next is the article.
The advantage of a third-person article is that it can expand the perspective and make people less constrained by the narrow world of the first person. However, in this article, Yugure Hana-san puts the focus on the heroine. Why not give it to the important supporting characters? What they hear and think can often bring new feelings to people, not just one-sided aspects of the protagonist.
The last one.
What is the topic of the article? I, I, I have been watching for so long and I have seen a loser girl who is trying to slay demons and demons without being a loser! In this case, is that preface used to contain Thirteen or something else? ! The definition of dark lines is generally better, which is no problem, but the theme is not obvious! So this may be slightly related to the third person problem... Cough cough cough.
Then there's the heroine.
My first impression of the heroine is that this girl is a girl who is not noticed by others. Because her talent is not very good, she is not taken seriously. Even her so-called blood-connected father does not pay attention to this good-for-nothing... Just like Cinderella.
But from what I saw, this girl not only has a strong inner attitude, but the key is that she unlocked the golden finger of the key. Facing such a girl, how can I say that she is a loser?
I think if the heroine is positioned as a "waste", then the article must involve the heroine's growth. Rather, growth is also a very important part of the main plot, but luck and prophecy accounted for a large part of Liang Lilu's journey.
And in the end, there is one thing that makes me a little strange.
Judging from the attitude in the first few chapters, the Liang family's attitude towards Liang Lilu is obviously not good. For a family where blood and ability are paramount, why did it immediately become MAX after the heroine was revealed to be the identity of the key? Maybe what I said is a bit strong, but I just wanted to say it when I saw the big brother! This is unscientific! How awkward!
So maybe it would be better to add a little psychological transition...?
[Gold will always shine, and everyone will have a destined [talent]. Whether you dig it out and whether you have that opportunity all depends on your destiny. Destiny is determined by the way of heaven. Even if you don't know it, it's not something you can't help but do. Sow the cause, reap the fruit. We are rolling on the wheel of fate, maybe it is a peaceful life, maybe it is a sensational kindness, maybe it is a reputation that will last forever... No one knows, because no one knows what fate is like.
The heroine broke into the library and saw a few books that may be the turning point of her life. However, fate also began. Not just good or bad, dead or alive. None of us can stop destiny from moving forward.
However, I think there is still a bit of a problem with the heroine's character as a third lady. Even if she lets it go, she won't be able to become such a foodie... Ahem. ——BY shop owner.
Finally, I wish the third lady's journey will be more joyful. Regarding my overly cunning and crazy comments... QAQ, can we discuss it and ignore it?
Du, please return to the long comment shop to leave a message. In any case, authors who can update consistently like this are worthy of support~ Then we will see you again when we have a chance.
P. S. Please don't take what Aye said to heart, that person has always been like this... Well, really, I'm sorry on her behalf if she makes you unhappy.
Could it be that Tamamo is by Lu's side now?
Where was Tamamo now?
In fact, the real key is Luba
Pfft, what a piece of shit luck, I always have the habit of following one person
Liang Lilu is really a considerate and good child, and she is also considerate of children.
Gee, that sounds really nice. It wasn't like this when I conquered the shikigami.
It turns out that Heren encountered these things just because Tamamo needed mental strength.
I actually like Tamamo. I mean, he's a villain
The long review you requested has been delivered. Please return to the long review shop after the beep to leave a message~ First, let's take a look at the structure of this article. Original and imaginary articles, then the world view is very important. What is the worldview of this world? If there is no introduction at all, it will be quite confusing. In fact, I am very sorry that I did not have a clear idea of the protagonist's basic family lineage and world before seeing Chapter 3... Ahem. Next is the article. The advantage of a third-person article is that it can expand the perspective and make people less constrained by the narrow world of the first person. However, in this article, Yugure Hana-san puts the focus on the heroine. Why not give it to the important supporting characters? What they hear and think can often bring new feelings to people, not just one-sided aspects of the protagonist. The last one. What is the topic of the article? I, I, I have been watching for so long and I have seen a loser girl who is trying to slay demons and demons without being a loser! In this case, is that preface used to contain Thirteen or something else? ! The definition of dark lines is generally better, which is no problem, but the theme is not obvious! So this may be slightly related to the third person problem... Cough cough cough. Then there's the heroine. My first impression of the heroine is that this girl is a girl who is not noticed by others. Because her talent is not very good, she is not taken seriously. Even her so-called blood-connected father does not pay attention to this good-for-nothing... Just like Cinderella. But from what I saw, this girl not only has a strong inner attitude, but the key is that she unlocked the golden finger of the key. Facing such a girl, how can I say that she is a loser? I think if the heroine is positioned as a "waste", then the article must involve the heroine's growth. Rather, growth is also a very important part of the main plot, but luck and prophecy accounted for a large part of Liang Lilu's journey. And in the end, there is one thing that makes me a little strange. Judging from the attitude in the first few chapters, the Liang family's attitude towards Liang Lilu is obviously not good. For a family where blood and ability are paramount, why did it immediately become MAX after the heroine was revealed to be the identity of the key? Maybe what I said is a bit strong, but I just wanted to say it when I saw the big brother! This is unscientific! How awkward! So maybe it would be better to add a little psychological transition...? [Gold will always shine, and everyone will have a destined [talent]. Whether you dig it out and whether you have that opportunity all depends on your destiny. Destiny is determined by the way of heaven. Even if you don't know it, it's not something you can't help but do. Sow the cause, reap the fruit. We are rolling on the wheel of fate, maybe it is a peaceful life, maybe it is a sensational kindness, maybe it is a reputation that will last forever... No one knows, because no one knows what fate is like. The heroine broke into the library and saw a few books that may be the turning point of her life. However, fate also began. Not just good or bad, dead or alive. None of us can stop destiny from moving forward. However, I think there is still a bit of a problem with the heroine's character as a third lady. Even if she lets it go, she won't be able to become such a foodie... Ahem. ——BY shop owner. Finally, I wish the third lady's journey will be more joyful. Regarding my overly cunning and crazy comments... QAQ, can we discuss it and ignore it? Du, please return to the long comment shop to leave a message. In any case, authors who can update consistently like this are worthy of support~ Then we will see you again when we have a chance. P. S. Please don't take what Aye said to heart, that person has always been like this... Well, really, I'm sorry on her behalf if she makes you unhappy.
Could it be that Tamamo is by Lu's side now?
Where was Tamamo now?
In fact, the real key is Luba
Pfft, what a piece of shit luck, I always have the habit of following one person
Liang Lilu is really a considerate and good child, and she is also considerate of children.
Gee, that sounds really nice. It wasn't like this when I conquered the shikigami.
It turns out that Heren encountered these things just because Tamamo needed mental strength.
Li Lu has conquered a monster now, right?