
[Hunter X Hunter] 30 Minutes
[猎人]30 minutes
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 4k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 13y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
1Chapters
38Favorites
9.0Score
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8Comments
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Reader comments 7
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Yeah, the writing is quite good. In the original novel, Niong's future is worrying, and the tragic ending is quite good. If you ask Chrollo if he has moral integrity and the ability to love, you have to ask the old monster FJ. Hunter itself is a pretty brutal comic. Leaving aside the comics. It's inexplicable to like this kind of emotion, but Nyong probably doesn't like it but yearns for it. She feels envious and yearns for it. After all, any kind of emotion can turn into love. There are no normal people in Hunters, or there are no normal people in real life, they just look normal and everyone has a crazy side. It was impossible for Chrollo to understand Niong's feelings. Even if he knew that there was a woman here who confessed to him, in fact it had nothing to do with him. He had enough indifference to keep him away from others and preserve himself. On the other hand, Nyong's love is quite crazy and twisted. Readers may feel it is a heartbreaking love, but this feeling is affected by the reader's perception of Chrollo. I have always been curious about whether there is really pure love? Pure to the extreme, love just for the sake of love - I think that's kidding me. Well, I don't know when the author wrote such a good article. I feel very comfortable. Thank you to the author for dedicating his sorrow to me. Thank you to the author for bringing this feeling to us.
Tsk~~The writing is really good, it makes people have the urge to cry.
There was a time when I liked Niong very much because I thought her innocence allowed Chrollo to steal her telekinesis ability so easily. However, this article by the author made me have other thoughts about this girl. Maybe I was too stupid before. After reading the article, I suddenly realized why I didn't think of it before? Although this girl has always been protected by people, she has seen a lot of blood and cruelty. And I was very touched that she could still love so purely and persistently after going through so much. The first time I read a short story, I felt the urge to cry. [Ahem, I'm artistic... It is impossible for Chrollo and Niong to be together because they are not from the same world at all. This ending is expected and reasonable. The ending is beautiful! Want some tears drop? Throughout the text. Irish coffee has a touch of sadness. Phew, what on earth am I talking about... Anyway, that's it, I'm just cheating someone from Changping Shop to make soy sauce! This just represents me personally and has nothing to do with the store's orders! So... Just Jiang Zi?
Since it's a sad ending, I decided to comment in a more cheerful tone (←Hey In fact, I have wanted to write a review for a long time, but the dormitory party machine is not very good, you know =_= Let me talk about my views on Niong. After reading it twice, I feel more and more that this ending is better for her. It is better to give up than to persist. After all, Chrollo and Niong are not from the same world. The eldest lady's character is very perverted in reality, but to a certain extent, this girl's experience is also very sad. I don't understand whether Nyong is selfish or something else. In the plot, the bodyguards lose contact and still care about the collectibles, which clearly shows the character of the eldest lady. But if I remember correctly, there is another plot where Nyong cares about her maid? A very obvious scene. Regarding Kurapika, I don't have much feeling, and I'm not a cool person either~ But there seem to be a lot of people who support this Xipi. Although the cuteness is about falling in love and killing each other, well, in fact, Lei Ku is better ←_←. In short, what I want to say is that I have thought about the cold CP of Ku Ni, and Kurapika x melody? Melody has a great personality. I believe she must be a great beauty. Still want to say that Shenma is here? =_= Ah, I remembered that I didn't understand the English sentence in the article -_-|||. I know the superficial meaning, but does it have any meaning? By the way, the background music is very touching (Hiyori's face
I have always thought that people who can predict the future are either crazy or wise, and Nyon is too young. There have been no major setbacks. Maintaining a kind of innocence, the owner has a childlike cruelty. It can be seen from the writing that this girl maintains an extreme ego and is not willing to hurt anyone for her own satisfaction. I hate this girl. For his own pure fantasy, he maliciously wrote the completely opposite prophecy to Kulu Pagoda. Then I became a collector of human bodies, especially flaming eyes, which led me to dislike this girl extremely. The genocide of the Kuluta tribe was just the beginning of Nyong's love. She fell in love with the bandit leader. He began to work hard to match. I started to have mixed feelings about her. The story has turned from a dark story into a romantic drama, a simple girl's unrequited love, persistent and pure. Give what you can for love. In the final stage of growth, I couldn't see the future between the two of them and gave up. In just 4,000 words, the protagonist grows from a cruel child to a girl, to a woman, with just three choices for love, describing the growth of the protagonist. Wake up in a fairy tale. The rhythm of the article is well controlled. This story sees love and growth. In view of the dark background of the story, the protagonist is even darker, and coupled with the bombardment of various fans, the image of Niong, whose original work is thin and has few fans, feels that it has been brought to life by the author, while Chrollo makes me feel like it has been written to pieces. "Chrollo was stunned, and then left the coffee shop... 81E7 @ Copyright of Jinjiang Original Network @ That day, the words Niong said to him still linger in his ears: 'Wantsometearsdrop?'" Chrollo has had many women, many of whom lived and died for him, but he only came to Niong for her ability, and carried out the handsome man plan. After getting Niong's ability, he probably won't remember this person. So I have always felt that "talking about it later" is superfluous. Not only did this not make me feel complete or lost, it made me feel embarrassed. It was obviously a unit drama about unrequited love, but it turned into a story about two people, and Ku Kapila was beaten for a while. The feeling this article gives me is that the first part: □□; the middle part: the girl's unrequited love and the sad journey of paying for love; the last part: the road to the embarrassing story. The overall style of the story is unified, the article is short and concise, and the protagonist is vivid, although not very likable. Finally, "Talk the next day" brings the story to a perfect end. I think if this story was original, I would probably have a slightly sad feeling. So the slightly sad text, the hero and heroine and Chronon are superimposed, covering their faces. However, it is not easy to feel Niong for the first time (original text). After reading this article, Niong can see the future. He is a human body collector, and his family has a pornographic background. He knows a lot. After meeting Chrollo, he will definitely know who that person is. In the end, he decisively chose to give up the fantasy of two people staying together. When he was in love with Chrollo, he didn't let Chrollo kill him (Nion knew too much), and perfectly retired from the meat grinder of You Kexin. If it is assumed that she does not love Chrollo, then there are many stories to be discovered about this person. And between Kukapila. Touch your chin. ——Illegal gathering Chang Ping Pu
A short love story with a slight bitterness, what should I say? If I were to comment on this article from the structure, sentences, and arrangement of the article at the beginning, in the end I can only say that I have been indulged in that vaguely bitter atmosphere. The Niong in the big picture is different from what I see, but she is such a unique woman. She works hard and manages her own love. Short stories have always taken an emotional route. It is really difficult to express feelings through a few words, but Da Da did a good job. The only thing that needs to be modified may be some plots. For example, in the original work, Niong does not read his own divination again... But what's the harm? The context connects this very well, not to mention the emotional descriptions are great! Looking forward to reading more articles. If you are interested in long novels, you are welcome to come to me and ask for a long review. Unknown store name●Chang Ping Pu [Deputy store] Xiao Huo November 4, 2012
I don't really like this kind of persistent love. I can't understand why one person can be so attached to another person.