Cloud Kitty Across the Planes

The author's description of the protagonist's character is very poor. When I first wrote about how he made a deal with the devil to be reborn in this plane despite Yuan Yunping's wishes, I thought the protagonist was selfish and ruthless, but in the end, the protagonist only acted like a silly and sweet person. Is it possible that the protagonist is completely useless except for his superpowers in his original plane? Are you here to go to school alone at the expense of your younger brother? I can't tell that this is Qiangqiang at all. Xiao Gong only felt a little strong at the beginning, but later it was written that when the race was multiplied and there was a harem, it was inevitable to feel promiscuous. Maybe for some powerful and wealthy people, this really doesn't matter, but for me, I feel that small attacks are inferior. There are so many people who have the power and money to keep themselves clean. In short, I just hope that the author can put more effort into describing the characters. I like this plot very much, but the two protagonists are really unlikable, and I am very confused whether to continue watching it or not. Come on, author.

How can I put it this way, after 13 chapters in a row, I really disliked the character of the protagonist. He was uncharacteristic and couldn't tell that he was an elite from a higher plane. He was very useless and incompetent. Abandoned the article, but I still support you with friendship

The writing is rough, the plot is YY, and it ruins your outlook on life.

This is too scumbag, right? 1

If you don't grow up, don't use Golden Finger. It really hurts to see what you wrote. I feel so tired for you. Thank you for your hard work!

It was so uncomfortable to watch, the male protagonist was so stupid that I couldn't bear to look at it, and the logic was so messed up. This was the result of finishing it all over again. Didn't you find so many bugs? I decided to give it a thumbs up.

Bad ending. BS of...

So Yunmao's CP is Daniel? Doesn't the protagonist have emotional mysophobia? Is it really okay for a family like Daniel? And seeing how much Daniel values ​​children, his first few children and the people who gave birth to them cannot be given up. So if the protagonist doesn't go, he will be cheated on by his grown-ups, and he will be cheated on by P willingly and sweetly? I don't know what will happen in the future, but after reading the titles of the next few chapters, I see that Yun and Daniel have children, and the children were born on the earth. Daniel's personality will never let people know that he has a plane trader, and he is from a higher plane, so Daniel's original people are all there, and then 1VS1 with the protagonist on the earth? Even if Daniel's harem is disbanded, what will happen to the children, especially the one named Andy, who is said to be very attached to Daniel, and is still working hard to cultivate the next generation, who can HE with the protagonist who has mental mysophobia? Is 1VS1 such an attack? I really can't imagine...

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