
[Fate] Short Stories
[Fate]短篇故事
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- Completed
- Length
- 136k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 9y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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Hahahaha, Gou Ge is so handsome. I like Gou Ge the most in the fanfic. It's rare that the character is not so heavy. To be precise, although life is also very heavy, his personality is very open-minded, so he has become a rare character who is not so heavy.
Emiya Shirou's last wish was for Kotomine Kirei's survival.
Moving over a comment I wrote elsewhere: It is simply heart-shaking, sad and sweet at the same time. If Kiritsugu could watch Shirou grow up, would he be more comforted to him? Or more pain? At the end of the original novel, he was indeed relieved when he died. Was that the most relaxing time in his life after his boyhood ended?
Hey, how should I put it... The structure is quite similar to "Opposite", but it is more concise than that one, and it is more, or at least more to my liking. In this article, Shirou looks less gentle and silent, but it is more in line with what I think he will look like when he becomes Red A in the future.
Unspeakable sadness... Before the start of the Fifth Holy Grail War, Issei was one of the very few true friends of Shirou. People rarely appreciate the value of free things. Shirou is always helping others, but over time, how many people take it for granted and forget to thank him? Only 10% will really take Shirou to heart, instead of just treating him as a useful tool. However, in the face of Shirou's wishes and ideals, neither Issei nor Rin are helpless and can only watch him embark on the path of destiny...
Always watching you.
The setting of this article is great! Alas, Kirei reversed the course of pursuit after everything was settled, and his meeting with Kiritsugu was simply fate. So that's it for this article? No follow-up? What happens when Kiritsugu lets down his guard for a brief moment? The relationship between Kirei and Kiritsugu will never remain in this state. Your essays always feel like they come to an abrupt end. For ordinary stories, you can make up your own mind. Everyone knows the ending anyway, so don't be so hasty with this unexpected new setting. I feel like I can at least write a novella.
I first read this article on the forum. Because I thought the title was beautiful, I looked up the poem specifically, but I felt indescribably disappointed. I always feel that some artistic conception has been destroyed. Also, thank you for letting me know about the book "Narcissus and Goldmund". Quite beautiful.
Will Kirei never understand what Kiritsugu understands? Reading the original work, I always want to believe that after the Four Holy Grail Wars, Kiritsugu had no interaction with Kirei until his death, because if there was, the relationship would change, and it seemed that he could not have a pure and peaceful life. The same goes for Kirei, as long as he gets anything from Kiritsugu, even if he doesn't understand it, and it's not as easy for him to forget as his first wife, he will change. If things continue like this, will Kirei have a premonition of Kiritsugu's death and wait quietly outside the church or Emiya's residence, or will Kiritsugu leave silently when he is not ready for anything, like in "Everyday Life"?
Thank you to the author for writing such a shocking work for Kiritsugu Papa. It has been collected.