Blurb:
Mu Xiaoya: "You want to take a concubine?"
Du Hao: "I've been framed."
Xu Jin (gritting his teeth): "I'm a concubine?"
Mu Lan: "Well, it's not my fault."
Xu Jin: "What about that whole courtyard full of admirers?"
Mu Lan: "They're not my admirers! I don't know anything!"
Is this a tragic romance, with the male lead abusing the female lead physically and the female lead torturing the male lead emotionally? NO! This is just a warm, healing story. No matter how our roles and circumstances differ, on the scales of love, you and I are equals.
P.S. This is not a female-dominated story. It takes place in an alternate world where men and women are equal.
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The setting is good... But I really don't like the heroine's character
Damn, you're so diligent. You're updating even though it's so late.
I didn't believe it at first, thinking that Nanzhu was making up stories to deceive people, but why did he suddenly believe it again...
Sorry, I've been busy lately, so Yuanzi's review has been delayed for so long, haha, I hope I'm not impatient~.
Next, Xiaohuo will make a simple long comment on the general trend of the current article. It is a personal opinion and is for reference only.
[I am always generous when giving flowers]
First of all, from the copywriting to the cover and the following text content, it is all clear and clear. It is a type that I personally like very much. It is easy to inspire readers to read further. I am a standard copywriter, especially when reading web content. If the copywriting is sloppy, it is easy for me to complain. Of course, Yuanzi's writing is good and deserves praise.
I read the article in one sitting, and the overall feeling was very smooth. I didn't feel that the writing was procrastinating or the content was lengthy. The coherence of each chapter was also well done, and I didn't feel like I couldn't read it or reread it to find coherence.
I appreciate a major feature of this article. I personally think that Sonoko's inner description of the characters is quite brilliant. I have read many articles, but only a few authors pay special attention to the inner description of the characters. Only articles that pay attention to the inner description and detailed description will make the article look substantial and the image of the characters fuller. Especially in the intrigues and intrigues of the palace, how to describe the details is a particularly important part.
The subject matter of the article cannot be said to be new, but it is not boring to read. The description of the characters is particularly important here. The heroine in the author's works feels very real to me. She wants to love but is afraid of love, is afraid of loving too deeply, but feels that love is not enough. This completely incompatible emotion is cleverly deposited in the heroine in the author's works, creating a vivid image of a girl, which has to be applauded.
Although some readers below the article expressed that they don't like the heroine, Xiaohuo really wanted to shout, "How can there be so many people who are loved by everyone? Do you think it's money? Such a heroine is more real, isn't it~ [The heroine's party passed by to explain]
[After the flowers are over, let's take a look at the shortcomings]
A hippie is a hippie, and praise is praise. I still have to point out any shortcomings to Yuanzi. Of course, these are just some of my personal opinions, and Yuanzi will adopt them as appropriate.
First of all, the setting of a couple traveling through time is really a very commendable setting, and the setting of equality between men and women is also very original. But why do I feel that as the story progresses, the advantages of the heroine in the early stage become weaker? Doesn't it mean that men and women are equal? How come later on, the heroine has to rely on other men for everything. Although she has traveled through time, she has to do as the Romans do. It is not your fault that you have been relying on men for so long in that world, but relying on men all the time will inevitably make readers feel crazy. This is why some readers don't like the personality of the heroine.
Secondly, although the author is quite good at describing the character's psychology, I feel that the description of the character's details and actions is still not enough. I can feel the heroine's heart and her full psychological image. However, what kind of woman is this? And some descriptions of daily actions, but they are completely unimpressive and cannot arouse my imagination. This is something that Sonoko needs to pay special attention to in the future. In addition, it also includes descriptions of some details, such as grabbing her out of her arms. Can anyone explain what the action of "catching" is? Although I can understand it, Sonoko, I have to say that this action is too bloody, so I suggest you reconsider it!
It's roughly the above content. Yuanzi's article is generally very good. I will continue to follow up and look forward to your better performance.
Welcome to visit the shop again~!
[Unheard shop name·Changping Shop] Xiao Huo
2012.10.25
The review has been published. 38 Chapters have been reviewed. Please let me know if you want to post it below.
If love is like this, don't do it. It's not worth it for Xu Jin. I feel like Mulan acted very immaturely.
Don't like the heroine. . . . . .
If I have the desire to read it, I'm going to read it in one sitting. Don't bother me. The garden is very nice. I'll continue to comment after I've finished reading it.
Sprinkle flowers, come on!
Yuanzi Jiangjiang, Xiaobai rolled round in a round way~~mua~~I can tolerate every girl~~Because Xiaobai is Boai's 'boy paper'~~~so he became unpopular with the old bustard and his moral integrity dropped all over the place, even 502 A poor girl who can't stick to her~~~ and the shop owner is waiting on her with a whip every day, which means she's digressing (this is a pure-bred way to gain sympathy and get close to each other, eh~~~╭(╯3╰)╮) Ahem, poke it down seriously↓
First of all, when I first looked at the title of the article, I, a novice, said that it made no sense and couldn't see anything. Really, eh~~ When I looked at the text, I felt very happy. I have always loved dialogue-type writing, mua~~I really like the scene of the male and female protagonists bickering, but they are not really angry. Hey, female protagonist, fall into the arms of the male protagonist~~~Ahem, this 'concubine' turned out to be a male protagonist, I was stunned. Is there any~~~It should be good, eh~~
After reading the first chapter, I was confused! I have never seen a plot where a husband and wife travel through time together. And it's ancient times wearing ancient times, ah, it means it's amazing! Ahem, the conversation between these two people was extremely loving~~~Haha~~ But why did Mouhao become the concubine of Xiaoya's children's shoes? Concubine, concubine, concubine, men and women are equal? This is called equality between men and women, right? Well, it's really equal! Xiaobai also wants to serve as a concubine!
Ozawa is so loving, boy? ! Child adopter? ! Ahem, you are jealous, aren't you~~~But Mouhao replied with so many words, ahem, Xiaoya's children's shoes will go berserk~~~Meet the parents, meet the parents~~~ps: I have watched more than 400 episodes of Conan, and Xiaobai can't stand it anymore~~~ I haven't seen the collision of red and black for a long time~~~I'm afraid of being mulled, I'm afraid that Shinichi will be mulled~~~Ahem, Sonoko Jiangjiang, I express my disdain for Noi, is she a relative of Sister Lan? The following complaints are too red and fruity
["I will definitely help you give birth! You can give birth to as many children as you want!" "I want to reply to this sentence of yours!"] Ahem, this sentence is really very loving, but the following sentence is too sad, the pain of parting, ah ah, who understands? ! Ahem, every time I remember to read Naifen's comments, I feel so happy~ Oh~~~ Xiao Pei is really a loving person, it's over, everyone has love~~~ Xiao Bai said that he would beg him to be Xipi~~~ Sonoko Jiang Jiang, give him to me, from now on, Xiao Bai's first love will belong to him! Ahem, why is there so much love between male favorites! Ozawa and Xiao Pei, could it be? ! Oh no~~~That's impossible!
The most helpless thing about time travel is change and forgetting. The voice, appearance, and smile have changed, and the past has been forgotten. Just like, a person who loves you suddenly doesn't love you anymore, and a person who doesn't love you likes you because of various reasons. In fact, all these feelings are not real but they are real. This face and this person are real, this heart and this soul are also real, but the helpless thing is that these two things do not belong to the same person. While watching the plot between Xiao Pei and Xiao Lan, I really wanted to say this. In fact, it is not forgetfulness, it is just the sequelae caused by changing a soul. It is just that the former may be confused, but the latter is also deeply regretful.
Love, love, love, all because of love. How many people died here, how many people got love, and how many people got love but couldn't stay together forever, wander around the world, or spend all their time in the world? There is no answer to all this, just like the same complex and difficult question, there is no real answer, but the answer is always in my heart. Ahem, I really went too far away from the topic, but Sonoko Jiangjiang, please treat this couple well and express your expectation for all the happy ending~~~P: You can't be a stepmother, you can't abuse my little Pei, you can't abuse the lovely Ozawa. . Ahem, then who else can you torture? ! ! ! !
I wish Yuanzi Jiangjiang's writing will get better and better, I'm a noob like you! [Brothet Twelve, here comes Xi Xiaobai!
The setting is good... But I really don't like the heroine's character
Damn, you're so diligent. You're updating even though it's so late.
I didn't believe it at first, thinking that Nanzhu was making up stories to deceive people, but why did he suddenly believe it again...
Sorry, I've been busy lately, so Yuanzi's review has been delayed for so long, haha, I hope I'm not impatient~. Next, Xiaohuo will make a simple long comment on the general trend of the current article. It is a personal opinion and is for reference only. [I am always generous when giving flowers] First of all, from the copywriting to the cover and the following text content, it is all clear and clear. It is a type that I personally like very much. It is easy to inspire readers to read further. I am a standard copywriter, especially when reading web content. If the copywriting is sloppy, it is easy for me to complain. Of course, Yuanzi's writing is good and deserves praise. I read the article in one sitting, and the overall feeling was very smooth. I didn't feel that the writing was procrastinating or the content was lengthy. The coherence of each chapter was also well done, and I didn't feel like I couldn't read it or reread it to find coherence. I appreciate a major feature of this article. I personally think that Sonoko's inner description of the characters is quite brilliant. I have read many articles, but only a few authors pay special attention to the inner description of the characters. Only articles that pay attention to the inner description and detailed description will make the article look substantial and the image of the characters fuller. Especially in the intrigues and intrigues of the palace, how to describe the details is a particularly important part. The subject matter of the article cannot be said to be new, but it is not boring to read. The description of the characters is particularly important here. The heroine in the author's works feels very real to me. She wants to love but is afraid of love, is afraid of loving too deeply, but feels that love is not enough. This completely incompatible emotion is cleverly deposited in the heroine in the author's works, creating a vivid image of a girl, which has to be applauded. Although some readers below the article expressed that they don't like the heroine, Xiaohuo really wanted to shout, "How can there be so many people who are loved by everyone? Do you think it's money? Such a heroine is more real, isn't it~ [The heroine's party passed by to explain] [After the flowers are over, let's take a look at the shortcomings] A hippie is a hippie, and praise is praise. I still have to point out any shortcomings to Yuanzi. Of course, these are just some of my personal opinions, and Yuanzi will adopt them as appropriate. First of all, the setting of a couple traveling through time is really a very commendable setting, and the setting of equality between men and women is also very original. But why do I feel that as the story progresses, the advantages of the heroine in the early stage become weaker? Doesn't it mean that men and women are equal? How come later on, the heroine has to rely on other men for everything. Although she has traveled through time, she has to do as the Romans do. It is not your fault that you have been relying on men for so long in that world, but relying on men all the time will inevitably make readers feel crazy. This is why some readers don't like the personality of the heroine. Secondly, although the author is quite good at describing the character's psychology, I feel that the description of the character's details and actions is still not enough. I can feel the heroine's heart and her full psychological image. However, what kind of woman is this? And some descriptions of daily actions, but they are completely unimpressive and cannot arouse my imagination. This is something that Sonoko needs to pay special attention to in the future. In addition, it also includes descriptions of some details, such as grabbing her out of her arms. Can anyone explain what the action of "catching" is? Although I can understand it, Sonoko, I have to say that this action is too bloody, so I suggest you reconsider it! It's roughly the above content. Yuanzi's article is generally very good. I will continue to follow up and look forward to your better performance. Welcome to visit the shop again~! [Unheard shop name·Changping Shop] Xiao Huo 2012.10.25
The review has been published. 38 Chapters have been reviewed. Please let me know if you want to post it below.
If love is like this, don't do it. It's not worth it for Xu Jin. I feel like Mulan acted very immaturely.
Don't like the heroine. . . . . .
If I have the desire to read it, I'm going to read it in one sitting. Don't bother me. The garden is very nice. I'll continue to comment after I've finished reading it.
Sprinkle flowers, come on!
Yuanzi Jiangjiang, Xiaobai rolled round in a round way~~mua~~I can tolerate every girl~~Because Xiaobai is Boai's 'boy paper'~~~so he became unpopular with the old bustard and his moral integrity dropped all over the place, even 502 A poor girl who can't stick to her~~~ and the shop owner is waiting on her with a whip every day, which means she's digressing (this is a pure-bred way to gain sympathy and get close to each other, eh~~~╭(╯3╰)╮) Ahem, poke it down seriously↓ First of all, when I first looked at the title of the article, I, a novice, said that it made no sense and couldn't see anything. Really, eh~~ When I looked at the text, I felt very happy. I have always loved dialogue-type writing, mua~~I really like the scene of the male and female protagonists bickering, but they are not really angry. Hey, female protagonist, fall into the arms of the male protagonist~~~Ahem, this 'concubine' turned out to be a male protagonist, I was stunned. Is there any~~~It should be good, eh~~ After reading the first chapter, I was confused! I have never seen a plot where a husband and wife travel through time together. And it's ancient times wearing ancient times, ah, it means it's amazing! Ahem, the conversation between these two people was extremely loving~~~Haha~~ But why did Mouhao become the concubine of Xiaoya's children's shoes? Concubine, concubine, concubine, men and women are equal? This is called equality between men and women, right? Well, it's really equal! Xiaobai also wants to serve as a concubine! Ozawa is so loving, boy? ! Child adopter? ! Ahem, you are jealous, aren't you~~~But Mouhao replied with so many words, ahem, Xiaoya's children's shoes will go berserk~~~Meet the parents, meet the parents~~~ps: I have watched more than 400 episodes of Conan, and Xiaobai can't stand it anymore~~~ I haven't seen the collision of red and black for a long time~~~I'm afraid of being mulled, I'm afraid that Shinichi will be mulled~~~Ahem, Sonoko Jiangjiang, I express my disdain for Noi, is she a relative of Sister Lan? The following complaints are too red and fruity ["I will definitely help you give birth! You can give birth to as many children as you want!" "I want to reply to this sentence of yours!"] Ahem, this sentence is really very loving, but the following sentence is too sad, the pain of parting, ah ah, who understands? ! Ahem, every time I remember to read Naifen's comments, I feel so happy~ Oh~~~ Xiao Pei is really a loving person, it's over, everyone has love~~~ Xiao Bai said that he would beg him to be Xipi~~~ Sonoko Jiang Jiang, give him to me, from now on, Xiao Bai's first love will belong to him! Ahem, why is there so much love between male favorites! Ozawa and Xiao Pei, could it be? ! Oh no~~~That's impossible! The most helpless thing about time travel is change and forgetting. The voice, appearance, and smile have changed, and the past has been forgotten. Just like, a person who loves you suddenly doesn't love you anymore, and a person who doesn't love you likes you because of various reasons. In fact, all these feelings are not real but they are real. This face and this person are real, this heart and this soul are also real, but the helpless thing is that these two things do not belong to the same person. While watching the plot between Xiao Pei and Xiao Lan, I really wanted to say this. In fact, it is not forgetfulness, it is just the sequelae caused by changing a soul. It is just that the former may be confused, but the latter is also deeply regretful. Love, love, love, all because of love. How many people died here, how many people got love, and how many people got love but couldn't stay together forever, wander around the world, or spend all their time in the world? There is no answer to all this, just like the same complex and difficult question, there is no real answer, but the answer is always in my heart. Ahem, I really went too far away from the topic, but Sonoko Jiangjiang, please treat this couple well and express your expectation for all the happy ending~~~P: You can't be a stepmother, you can't abuse my little Pei, you can't abuse the lovely Ozawa. . Ahem, then who else can you torture? ! ! ! ! I wish Yuanzi Jiangjiang's writing will get better and better, I'm a noob like you! [Brothet Twelve, here comes Xi Xiaobai!