When the Glamour Fades

I really like the story and setting, especially Qing. Is it just that I feel like the character I wrote is a little off? And what does this want to express? Do you want to express a good life? I really don't think Han Shuo is a master who can make people live a good life. . . Moreover, the two of them still feel that there is too much distrust and lack of understanding. It feels like Xinyue understands Qing better than Han Shuo And Han Shuo really knows what is right for Qingshi, and does he really understand what he will choose when he faces the choice between Xianchumen and Qingshi. Finally, he said Qing Liangshan. Maybe Qing Liangshan was true, but he said this without ever seeing Qing Shi's true face. There is no real reassuring plot, and it does not give Qingshi the feeling that this person is worthy of complete trust. This is difficult for Qing, but just because it is difficult, it is important Also, I can attribute Qing's personality changes after his rebirth to my aunt. Anyway, I still like it very much, and I'm also very happy that after Qing's rebirth, she can meet Han Shuo and her aunt who are different from the people before. And the plot is really great, it's an appetizing catch-up That's all I said casually. Anyway, I really like this article. Keep up the good work

I believe that the author will eventually become a master one day

I finished reading it in one sitting~ I felt that the story was a bit long-winded, and there was a lot written that could be covered in one sentence. But it's really good to come up with the idea~ It's just that the writing is lacking. If you practice more, you should be able to write a great article! ! As far as this article is concerned, one thing is that the words and the story are procrastinating, and the other is that Qing Shi is a little speechless about his thoughts every time. . I always write, "Qingshi originally thought so and so, but so-and-so, or just so-and-so." Every time I just think about it without saying it, I think about the same similar thoughts too much. Every time I see a similar scene, I can't help but complain in my heart~~ And in some dialogue scenes, Qingshi will cover Han Shuo's mouth. . Aww, why do I think this action is so cute? Well, I personally really don't like it. . . When I was reading it today, I suddenly felt that this article was similar to a game. Every word and dialogue was explained one by one, and there were too many life scenes~~ Well, I still dislike it for being too procrastinating, but I really like the idea of ​​the immortal returning to the monks to enjoy themselves again~~

This is the best fairy tale I've read recently ~ Spreading Flowers

Finished reading! It looks very good, the characters are well set, and the characters are very cute. (^.^) It just feels a bit like a nerd novel sometimes. In other words, Xie Qing is too delicate, has a fear of being loved, and has a crisis of trust in everyone, which is a common problem among modern people. But he still loves Lao Han, but he feels more secure if he has more interests and more substantial things to tie him to. Being selfish is better than Our Lady, the key is that he has a soft heart. However, apart from being capable and capable of transforming into gods, Lao Han does not have a very full personality.

Will there be any other extras? Why was it said at that time that Su Fang's rare goods could be inhabited? Did I miss it when I wasn't paying attention?

Ah, I finally saw it here~~~~Look at how bad his vision is~~Hehe

The author's article is very good, but I don't know why it doesn't get many clicks. I feel it is better than many articles on the list. The logical writing style is very worth reading. Come on, host~

_(:з∠)_ I thought there would be no more after the extra episode. I just saw the broth today. This is the Great Consummation. Throw flowers! *★,°*:.☆\\(￣▽￣)/$:*.°★* .

Wow, I just found this great article. . .